Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan struktur yang benar. Hindari kata-kata yang tidak relevan seperti 'worthless'.

Example: I am currently a student focusing on fitness studies, and I am not working at the moment.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda singkat dan kurang informatif. Anda bisa menambahkan sedikit penjelasan untuk membuat jawaban lebih natural dan efektif.

Example: I don't work at the moment because I am focusing on my studies, but I hope to find a job soon.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada pengulangan. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan lengkap untuk menjawab pertanyaan secara langsung.

Example: I am not working right now, but I hope to find a good place to work in the future where I can develop my skills.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda mengandung beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan kata yang tidak tepat. Perbaiki penggunaan kosakata dan struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami.

Example: Although I am not working now, I would like to work in a friendly company that offers opportunities to learn new skills, with supportive colleagues and a positive environment.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat pengulangan serta kesalahan kata. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas untuk menjelaskan rencana masa depan Anda.

Example: In the future, I hope to work in a friendly place where I can improve my English skills by practicing with native speakers.

× I'm just a fitness as a student. Now I'm. Worthless.

✓ I'm just a fitness student. Now, I feel worthless.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and word usage. 'I'm just a fitness as a student' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'I'm just a fitness student' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'Now I'm. Worthless.' is fragmented; it should be 'Now, I feel worthless.' to form a complete sentence.

× At the moment I'm not working, but I hope in the future. I get a good place to work.

✓ At the moment, I'm not working, but I hope to get a good place to work in the future.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'I hope in the future. I get a good place to work.' should be combined and rephrased as 'I hope to get a good place to work in the future' to form a grammatically correct sentence.

× At the moment I'm not working, but I hope to find a good place to work in the future. I want to work somewhere that is friendly, an overt opportunity to learn your scale. For example, a company with supportive colleges and positive in Roman would be ideal for Maine.

✓ At the moment, I'm not working, but I hope to find a good place to work in the future. I want to work somewhere that is friendly and offers opportunities to learn new skills. For example, a company with supportive colleagues and a positive environment would be ideal for me.

The original sentence contains several errors: 'an overt opportunity to learn your scale' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'offers opportunities to learn new skills.' 'supportive colleges' should be 'supportive colleagues.' 'positive in Roman' is unclear and should be 'a positive environment.' 'ideal for Maine' should be 'ideal for me.' These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In the in the future I hope to find a good place to work in the future an I want to wear some word that is friendly and over the opportunity to learn your skill like learn English, practice in English, an native speaker in English.

✓ In the future, I hope to find a good place to work, and I want to work somewhere that is friendly and offers opportunities to learn skills like learning English, practicing English, and speaking with native speakers.

The original sentence has repetition ('In the in the future'), incorrect word usage ('wear some word' should be 'work somewhere'), and unclear phrases ('over the opportunity to learn your skill'). The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar and vocabulary errors.