7 分範例

問題: What do people usually do when they want to relax?

思路 1

Outdoor Activities
戶外活動
考官答案
Something that seems to be really popular at the moment is connecting with nature. Many people go hiking in the countryside these days to escape the daily grind. It’s also a great way to refresh the mind and body, and get some exercise. Some people take a picnic and stop to eat, so it’s common to see whole families heading out to the country.
現在似乎非常流行的一件事是與大自然連接。許多人這些天會去鄉村远足,逃離日常的繁忙。這也是一個讓心靈和身體恢復的好方法,並且可以運動一下。一些人會帶野餐並停下來吃飯,所以看到整個家庭前往郊外是很常見的。
Something that seems to be really popular at the moment is connecting with nature. Lots of people go hiking in the countryside these days in an attempt to escape the daily grind. It’s also a great way to refresh the mind and body, and also do some exercise as well. Some people take a picnic with them and stop somewhere to eat, so it isn’t that rare to see whole families heading out to the country.
現在似乎非常流行的是與大自然連結。很多人如今都會去鄉間徒步旅行,試圖逃離日常的苦差事。這也是一個讓心靈和身體恢復、並且運動一下的好方法。有些人會帶野餐用具,找個地方停下來吃飯,所以看到整個家庭一起出遊並不罕見。
語法分析
不定式作目的狀語:“逃避日常瑣事” 使用不定式表示目的,說明人們徒步旅行的原因,增強了句子的邏輯性和清晰度。 並列結構:“refresh the mind and body, and also do some exercise” 使用並列結構來列舉徒步旅行的多重益處,增加了答案的內容豐富性和表達的多樣性。 3.定語從句:“that seems to be really popular at the moment” 這個定語從句修飾“Something”,提供了關於流行事物的額外信息,增加了語句的詳細程度和複雜性。
高分詞匯
  • connect with nature
    與大自然連結
  • go hiking
    去遠足
  • escape the daily grind
    逃離日常繁忙
  • refresh the mind and body
    振興身心
  • whole families
    整個家庭
  • head out
    出發

思路 2

Indoor Relaxation
室內放鬆
考官答案
I think a lot of people stay at home to unwind. After a busy week, they prefer staying in to read books or listen to music. Many also watch films or TV series, as there's a lot of online content available. Others do online yoga classes or meditate. These are great ways to switch off for a few hours.
我認為很多人都在家裡放鬆。在忙碌的一週後,他們更喜歡待在家裡讀書或聽音樂。許多人也會看電影或電視劇,因為有很多線上內容可以選擇。其他人則參加線上瑜伽課程或冥想。這些都是很好的方式,可以讓自己休息幾個小時。
I think a lot of people stay at home when they want to unwind. After spending a hectic week at work, they want to stay in and read books or listen to music. I know a lot of people also watch films or a TV series as we now have access to so much online content while others do online yoga classes or meditate. They are great ways to switch off for a few hours.
我認為很多人想要放鬆時會待在家裡。 在工作一周過後,他們想待在家裡讀書或聽音樂。 我知道很多人也會看電影或電視劇,因為現在我們可以線上獲得如此豐富的內容,還有一些人會參加線上瑜伽課程或冥想。 這些都是非常好的方式,在短短幾個小時內放鬆自己。
語法分析
過去分詞作形容詞:"spending a hectic week" 中的"hectic"作為過去分詞形容詞,修飾"week",增加了句子的描述力和複雜度。不定式作目的狀語:"to unwind" 使用不定式表達目的,說明人們呆在家裡的原因,增強了句子的邏輯性和清晰度。定語從句:"as we now have access to so much online content" 這個定語從句修飾"films or a TV series",提供了額外的信息,增加了句子的複雜性和信息量。
高分詞匯
  • unwind
    放鬆
  • hectic week
    繁忙的一周
  • online content
    線上內容
  • meditate
    冥想
  • switch off
    關掉
  • online yoga classes
    線上瑜伽課程

思路 3

Socializing and Family Time
社交和家庭時間
考官答案
I see a lot of people these days in cafes with friends, having coffee and catching up. Being with friends and sharing what they've been up to is a healthy way to relax. Cafes have popped up all over the country. People need to let off steam sometimes, and socializing is a great way to do this. It also helps maintain and strengthen friendships.
這幾天我看到許多人和朋友在咖啡館見面,喝咖啡、聊天。和朋友在一起,分享彼此的近況是一種健康的放鬆方式。咖啡館如雨後春筍般在全國各地冒出。人們有時需要發洩情緒,社交是一個很好的方式。它也有助於維持和加深友誼。
I see a lot of people these days in cafes with friends having a coffee and catching up. Being with friends and sharing what they have been up to is a healthy way to relax and cafes have popped up all over the country. People need to be able to let off steam sometimes and socializing is a great way to do this, and it also means that friendships are maintained and strengthened.
這些天我在咖啡店看到許多人和朋友一起喝咖啡、聊天。和朋友在一起,分享彼此的近況是一個健康放鬆的方式,所以咖啡店在全國各地如雨後春筍般地興起。人們有時需要發洩壓力,社交是一個很好的方式,也意味著友誼得以維護和加強。
語法分析
現在分詞作狀語:“having a coffee and catching up” 這裡用現在分詞作狀語,描述人們在咖啡館的活動,使句子更加生動和具體。 過去分詞作定語:“popped up” 作為過去分詞,用來修飾“cafes”,表明咖啡館的廣泛分佈,增加了句子的描述性和複雜度。 不定式作目的狀語:“to relax” 和 “to do this” 使用不定式表達目的,說明人們進行社交活動的原因,增強了句子的邏輯性和清晰度。 被動語態:“are maintained and strengthened” 使用被動語態描述友誼的結果,展示了語言的多樣性和表達的準確性。
高分詞匯
  • catch up
    趕上
  • pop up
    彈出
  • let off steam
    發洩情緒
  • socializing
    社交
  • friendships are maintained and strengthened
    友誼是持續及加強的。