7 分範例
話題: Describe a time when you did an exciting activity with other people
範例
A surprise party What the activity was I'm going to talk about a surprise party I held about six months ago for my best friend. I held it in my apartment, which is quite small, ten friends and I organized it. Where you did this activity I had planned to have the party in a restaurant but it was going to be too expensive so I decided to have it in my apartment. It wasn't ideal but I could just about fit twelve people in the living room. Why you did this activity As I said, it was a surprise party so my best friend had no idea about it. She was turning 21 and going to move abroad soon so it was the last chance to celebrate with her for a while. I took a photo of her as she walked in and it's the moment we've just turned the lights on to surprise her. She looks really shocked and it captures the exact moment that everyone shouted 'surprise'. It's such a great photo although she thinks she looks really weird. Explain how you felt about it It was the first time I'd thrown a surprise party and it was such a success. She had no idea about it and she was so grateful. It's such a great memory. It was a lot of work though so I don't know if I'd volunteer to do it again, but it was certainly worth the effort.
一次驚喜派對 活動內容是什麼 我要談一下大約六個月前為我最好的朋友舉辦的一次驚喜派對。我在我的公寓舉辦了這個活動,我的公寓相當小,有十位朋友和我一起籌劃這次活動。 你在哪裡舉行這個活動 我原本計劃在一家餐廳舉辦派對,但是這樣會太昂貴,所以我決定在我的公寓舉行。雖然不是理想的地點,但我勉強能將十二個人擠進客廳。 為什麼要舉辦這個活動 就像我說的,這是一次驚喜派對,我最好的朋友完全不知情。她快滿21歲,並且即將移居國外,所以這是最後一次有機會和她一起慶祝。當她走進來的時候,我拍下了她的照片,這張照片正好捕捉了我們剛剛打開燈光給她驚喜的那一刻。她看起來非常震驚,這張照片捕捉了每個人喊出“驚喜”的時刻。這是一張非常棒的照片,儘管她覺得自己看起來很怪異。 談談你對這個活動的感受 這是我第一次舉辦驚喜派對,非常成功。她完全不知情,並且非常感激。這是一個美好的回憶。雖然工作量很大,所以我不確定是否願意再次自願進行這樣的活動,但是值得付出這種努力。
高分詞匯
  • organize
    組織
  • ideal
    理想
  • shocked
    震驚
  • fit twelve people
    容納十二人。
  • last chance to celebrate
    最後慶祝的機會
  • capture the exact moment
    捕捉到準確的時刻
  • thrown a surprise party
    辦了一個驚喜派對
  • grateful
    感恩
  • great memory
    很棒的記憶
  • worth the effort
    值得的努力
範例
An exhilarating activity I partook in with others was white-water rafting, carried out on the turbulent waters of a local river. A group of friends and I chose this activity to inject a dose of thrill into our mundane routines and to foster stronger bonds amongst ourselves. This adventurous endeavor took place in the serene yet untamed outskirts of our town, where the river's dynamic currents presented a riveting challenge. We decided to embark on this adventure primarily due to our collective yearning for excitement and our desire to step out of our comfort zones. The moment our raft faced the roaring waves, a blend of anticipation and adrenaline surged through our veins. The pulsating rhythms of the river synchronized with our fervent paddling, turning the journey into a symphony of thrill and camaraderie. The synergy amongst us was palpable, as every paddle stroke symbolized a collective pursuit of overcoming the untamed currents. This experience was more than just a confrontation with nature's raw power; it was a vivid illustration of unity and resilience. The surge of euphoria I felt when we successfully navigated through the tumultuous waters was indescribable, weaving a tapestry of emotions sprinkled with moments of suspense, exhilaration, and triumph. It strengthened our bonds and left us with unforgettable memories, turning a fleeting moment into an eternal imprint in our hearts.
我與其他人一起參加的令人振奮的活動是在當地一條湍急的河流上進行的漂流。我和一群朋友選擇這個活動,是為了給我們平淡的日常生活增添一點刺激,並加強我們之間更緊密的聯繫。 這次冒險的行動發生在我們鎮外寧靜但未被馴服的地方,河流動態的洶湧挑戰著我們。我們決定踏上這個冒險主要是因為我們共同渴望刺激,渴望走出舒適區。 當我們的筏子面對著怒吼的波浪時,一股期待和腎上腺素的衝擊湧入我們的血脈。河流的跳動節奏與我們熱切的划槳同步,把旅程變成了一場激動人心和友誼的交響曲。我們之間的協作是可感知的,每一次槳擊都象徵著共同克服未被馴服暴流的追求。 這次經歷不僅僅是與大自然原始力量的對峙;它更是團結和韌性的生動寫照。當我們成功穿越洶湧的水域時,我感到的歡愉澎湃,這編織了一幅充滿懸疑、刺激和勝利時刻的情感圖景。它加強了我們之間的聯繫,留下了難忘的回憶,將一瞬間轉變成我們心中永恆的印記。
語法分析
• 複雜句和簡單句結合:答案中運用了各種複雜句。例如:"An exhilarating activity I partook in with others was white-water rafting, carried out on the turbulent waters of a local river." 這個句子就是一個複合句,描述了漂流這一活動的性質和地點。 • 時態運用恰當:答案主要使用了一般過去時,來描述過去的經歷和感受。例如:"We decided to embark on this adventure primarily due to our collective yearning for excitement and our desire to step out of our comfort zones." 這個句子使用了一般過去時來描述當時的想法和決定。 • 表達層次感:通過使用"the moment," "more than just," 和 "indescribable,"等短語,答案體現出表達的層次和深度。這樣不僅增加了句子的複雜性,也提高了表達的準確性和豐富性。 • 使用修飾詞增強描述:答案中出現了"euphoria," "tumultuous," 和 "fervent"等修飾詞,這些詞不僅使描述更加生動,同時也表現了答案在詞彙選擇上的精確和高級。
高分詞匯
  • exhilarating
    令人振奮
  • turbulent
    動蕩
  • adrenaline
    腎上腺素
  • fervent
    熱情
  • synergy
    協同效應
  • resilience
    韌性
  • euphoria
    狂喜
  • tumultuous
    擾亂