7 分範例

問題: Do you mind waiting for a long time? Why?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, waiting for a long time can be a problem, especially if it's unnecessary. Like, if a friend cancels on me and lets me know, that's okay, these things happen. However, if they don't show up and don't tell me for an hour, that's not okay. It's not so much the waiting that's an issue, but the fact they didn't consider my time. I consider myself patient, so waiting itself isn't usually a big deal for me.
是的,等待很長時間可能是個問題,尤其如果是不必要的。像是,如果朋友取消約會並告訴我,那沒問題,這種事情會發生。但如果他們不出現一個小時也不告訴我,那就不好了。問題不在於等待本身,而是他們沒有考慮我的時間。我覺得自己很有耐心,因此等待本身對我來說通常不是什麼大問題。
For a long time? Yes, especially if it's something that I don't have to wait for. For example, if I've been stood up by a friend, and they let me know they can't make it then that's fine, these things happen. But if they leave me waiting for an hour and have no intention of telling me they aren't coming then that's unacceptable. It's not the waiting that bothers me, it's the lack of consideration. I'm a pretty patient person so I'm fine with waiting.
很長時間嗎?是的,尤其是如果是我不需要等待的事情。例如,如果朋友爽約,並告訴我他們來不了,那沒問題,這種事情常有。但如果他們讓我等了一個小時,卻毫無意思告訴我他們不來,那是無法接受的。讓我等沒關係,但缺乏考慮是讓我不悅的地方。我是一個很有耐心的人,所以我可以等。
語法分析
條件狀語從句:"if I've been stood up by a friend, and they let me know they can't make it" 使用了條件狀語從句,說明了特定條件下的行為,增加了句子的複雜性。 強調句結構:"It's not the waiting that bothers me, it's the lack of consideration" 這是一個強調句結構,用來強調真正的問題是缺乏考慮而不是等待本身,這種結構使得表達更加明確和強烈。 現在分詞作狀語:"waiting for an hour" 中的 "waiting" 作為現在分詞狀語,說明了主語的狀態,使句子更加生動和具體。
高分詞匯
  • be stood up by a friend
    被朋友放鴿子
  • intention
    意向
  • unacceptable
    不可接受
  • lack of consideration
    缺乏考慮
  • pretty patient person
    溫和耐心的人

思路 2

No
考官答案
I don't really mind waiting, as long as I've got my phone with me. It's like having a mini entertainment center; I can play games, scroll through social media, or even catch up on my emails. So, a long wait doesn't bother me much. It's like a break where I can do my own thing.
我其實不介意等待,只要我有手機在身邊。就像有了一個迷你娛樂中心一樣;我可以玩遊戲、瀏覽社交媒體,甚至查看郵件。所以,漫長的等待並不會讓我困擾。這就像是一個讓我可以做自己事情的休息時間。
No, I don't particularly mind waiting, especially when I have my smartphone. It's a gateway to various activities – from gaming to browsing social media or even dealing with pending emails. This way, a lengthy wait turns into a productive interval, offering me an opportunity to engage in personal tasks or leisure activities. It's almost like a little window of 'me time' during a busy day.
不,我不介意等待,尤其是當我有我的智慧手機時。這是通往各種活動的門戶 - 從遊戲到瀏覽社交媒體,甚至處理未處理的郵件。這樣,一段冗長的等待時間就可以變成一個有產出的間隙,讓我有機會從事個人任務或休閒活動。在繁忙的一天中,就像是一個小小的「屬於我的時間」窗口。
語法分析
現在分詞作定語:在短語“dealing with pending emails”中,使用了現在分詞“dealing”作為定語,描述智能手機使用的多功能性,增強了句子的描述性和複雜性。 名詞短語作主語:使用“a lengthy wait”和“a productive interval”這樣的名詞短語作為句子的主語和賓語,表達了具體的概念,使得句子結構更加複雜且信息豐富。 比喻表達:在最後一句中,使用了“like a little window of 'me time'”這樣的比喻表達,將等待時的自我時間比作“小窗口”,展現了高級的語言運用能力,同時增添了句子的形象性和創造性。
高分詞匯
  • gateway
    閘道
  • pending
    擱置待定
  • productive
    生產力
  • interval
    間隔
  • engage in personal tasks
    從事個人任務