7 分範例

問題: Are most people patient while waiting?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
In the past, I think people didn't have much patience for waiting because they had nothing to do during unexpected delays. But now, it's different. When a train is canceled or a bus is late, we can use our phones and go online. For business people, they can easily check their emails or even join a meeting online. There are so many options. I believe the need for patience in these situations has disappeared.
過去,我認為人們對等待並沒有太多耐心,因為他們在意外延誤期間無事可做。但現在,情況不同了。當一列火車被取消或一輛公車遲到時,我們可以使用手機上網。對於商務人士來說,他們可以輕鬆檢查郵件甚至在線參加會議。有這麼多選擇。我相信在這些情況下需要耐心的需求已經消失了。
In the past, I don't think people were. They had nothing to do if they suddenly had to wait for something unexpected. These days though, it's a different story. If a train is canceled or a bus is delayed, we can use our phones and access the internet. If it's a businessperson, there's nothing to stop them from checking their emails on their phone or even attending a meeting online. The possibilities are endless. The idea of having to be patient in these situations has gone in my opinion.
過去,我覺得人們沒有。如果他們突然不得不等待一些意外的事情,他們就完全無所事事。然而,如今情況不同。如果火車取消或公車延誤,我們可以使用手機訪問網絡。對於商務人士來說,沒有什麼可以阻止他們在手機上檢查郵件,甚至在線參加會議。可能性是無盡的。在這些情況下必須耐心等候的概念,在我看來已經過時。
語法分析
過去時態與現在時態對比:"在過去,我不認為人們會" 與 "但現在,情況就不同了" 的對比使用了過去時態和現在時態,說明了過去與現在的差異,增加了句子的時態複雜性。 條件狀語從句:"如果列車取消或公車延誤" 設置了一個假設情境,說明在特定條件下可能採取的行動,增強了句子的實際應用性。 名詞片語作主語:"需要在這些情況下耐心" 作為主語,增加了句子的深度和複雜性,展示了抽象概念的表達能力。 現在分詞作狀語:"在手機上查看他們的郵件,甚至在線上參加會議" 中的 "查看" 和 "參加" 作為現在分詞狀語,說明了在特定情況下可能進行的多種活動,使句子更加生動和具體。
高分詞匯
  • unexpected
    意想不到
  • access the internet
    存取互聯網
  • businessperson
    商人
  • attend a meeting online
    參加線上會議
  • endless
    無止境
  • the idea of
    '''''的觀念'''''

思路 2

No
考官答案
Most people today just aren't patient when it comes to waiting. Everyone's so busy with their lives, so being stuck waiting is really annoying. Plus, I've noticed that a lot of people just can't stand being idle and they hate waiting around for anything.
大多數人如今對等待都沒有耐心。每個人都很忙碌,所以被困在等待中真的很煩人。另外,我注意到很多人都無法忍受閒置,他們討厭無所事事地等待。
In today's fast-paced world, patience seems to be a rarity, especially when it involves waiting. The majority of people are engrossed in their hectic schedules, making any form of delay a source of frustration. It's evident that the general sentiment leans towards a dislike for waiting, as it disrupts the flow of their daily routines.
在今天快節奏的世界中,耐心似乎是一種稀有品質,特別是當涉及等待時。大多數人被忙碌的日程表吸引,任何形式的延遲都成為挫折源泉。顯而易見,普遍的情緒傾向於不喜歡等待,因為這樣會打斷他們的日常流程。
語法分析
現在分詞作定語:"engrossed in their hectic schedules" 中的現在分詞“engrossed”作為定語,描述人們的狀態,增加了句子的描述性和深度。 主動語態和被動語態的混合使用:在整個句子中,既有主動語態(如“people are engrossed”)也有被動語態(如“patience seems to be a rarity”),這種混合使用顯示了較高的語法靈活性。 名詞作主語:"the general sentiment" 作為主語,是一個抽象的概念,使得句子更加深入和有思想性。
高分詞匯
  • fast-paced
    快節奏
  • engrossed
    全神貫注
  • hectic
    繁忙
  • delay
    延遲
  • sentiment
    情緒
  • disrupt
    干擾
  • flow
    流動