7 分範例

問題: Do you think there is too much advertising in our daily lives?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Absolutely, ads are everywhere in our lives now. Whenever we go online, we can't avoid them. There are pop-up ads and every website has them. TV commercials seem longer as channels try to show as many as they can. Even the trains are covered in ads. It's overwhelming, but I think we've started to ignore them because we see them so much. They don't really affect us much anymore.
廣告無所不在,現在已經融入我們生活的方方面面。我們上線時,無法避免看到它們。彈出式廣告無處不在,每個網站都有。電視廣告也越來越長,電視台盡可能播放更多廣告。甚至列車上也充滿了廣告。儘管眼花繚亂,但我認為我們已經開始忽略它們,因為我們看到得太多了。它們不再對我們產生太大影響。
My goodness yes. It's permeated every part of our life today. If we go online, it's impossible to avoid it. Pop-up ads appear and every website has ads attached to it. The TV ad breaks are longer than ever as TV companies try to get as many ads in as possible and even the train I take to work is covered in them. It's incredible and we just can't escape them. However, what I think has happened is that we have become desensitized to them. As we see them everywhere now, they don't have much of an effect on us.
我的好啊。它已經滲透到我們今天生活的每個角落。如果我們上網,就不可能避免它。彈出式廣告出現,每個網站都有廣告附在上面。電視廣告間斷時間比以往更長,因為電視公司試圖放入盡可能多的廣告,甚至我坐的通勤火車也到處都是廣告。這是不可思議的,我們無法逃避它們。然而,我認為發生的事情是我們已經對它們麻木了。由於現在我們到處都看到它們,它們對我們的影響不大。
語法分析
現在完成進行時:"它已經滲透到我們今天生活的每個部分" 中使用了現在完成進行時態,表示廣告滲透到生活中的這個動作從過去開始並持續到現在,體現了時間性的連續性和深度。 強調句型:"這是難以置信的,我們無法逃脫它們" 這句中使用了強調結構,強調了廣告無處不在的事實,增加了表達的強度。 條件狀語從句:"因為我們現在隨處可見它們,它們對我們沒有太大影響" 中的"as"引導的條件狀語從句,表達了因果關係,說明了廣告無處不在導致的結果。 反身代詞的使用:"我們對它們已經產生了麻木" 這句中使用了反身代詞“desensitized”,表現了對廣告的主觀感受,增加了語句的深度和個性化表達。
高分詞匯
  • goodness
    善良
  • permeate
    滲透
  • online
    線上
  • Pop-up ads
    彈出廣告
  • TV ad breaks
    電視廣告間隔
  • train
    訓練
  • incredible
    難以置信
  • escape
    逃脫
  • desensitized
    麻木化
  • effect on us
    對我們的影響

思路 2

No
考官答案
I don't think there's too much advertising. If we don't want to see it, we can usually avoid it or ignore it. Also, ads are a way for companies to make money, so they're kind of necessary. Plus, with today's technology, we often have the option to skip or block ads, especially online. And really, some ads can be informative or entertaining, adding value to our day.
我認為廣告並不算太多。如果我們不想看到它,通常可以避開或忽略它。此外,廣告是公司賺錢的一種方式,所以它們有點必要。另外,有了今天的科技,我們通常可以選擇跳過或封鎖廣告,尤其是在線上。事實上,有些廣告可以是資訊性或娛樂性的,為我們的一天增添價值。
I believe the amount of advertising in our lives isn't excessive. We have the choice to avoid or ignore it when we prefer not to engage. Besides, advertising is a fundamental aspect of how companies generate revenue, making it an essential part of the business ecosystem. Modern tools like ad blockers and subscription services offer us control over what we see. Moreover, a well-crafted advertisement can be quite engaging and sometimes even provide useful information or entertainment.
我認為我們生活中的廣告量並不過多。我們可以選擇在不想參與時避免或忽視它。此外,廣告是公司賺取收入的基本方面,使其成為商業生態系統中不可或缺的一部分。像廣告封鎖和訂閱服務這樣的現代工具為我們提供控制我們所看到的內容。此外,一則精心製作的廣告可以非常引人入勝,有時甚至提供有用的信息或娛樂。
語法分析
條件狀語從句: "when we prefer not to engage" 作為條件狀語從句,說明了在不想參與的情況下我們的選擇,展示了條件句的使用。 分詞結構作定語: "well-crafted advertisement" 中的 "well-crafted" 作為過去分詞短語,用作定語修飾廣告,增加了句子的描述性和複雜性。 名詞短語作主語: "Modern tools like ad blockers and subscription services" 作為名詞短語,在句子中作主語,描述了現代工具如何提供我們對所看內容的控制,體現了名詞短語的複雜運用。
高分詞匯
  • excessive
    過度
  • avoid or ignore
    避免或忽略
  • prefer not to engage
    不太願意參與
  • fundamental aspect
    基本方面
  • generate revenue
    創造收入
  • essential part
    必要部分
  • ecosystem
    生態系統
  • ad blockers
    ad blockers
  • subscription services
    訂閱服務
  • well-crafted advertisement
    精心製作的廣告
  • engaging
    融入
  • useful information
    有用信息