7 分範例

問題: Should students be allowed to use computers at school?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
It's similar to asking if students should learn to use computers, and the answer is definitely yes. Imagine if kids didn't learn about computers in school. It would be unfair to them as they wouldn't know how to use them in their future jobs. Moreover, children from families that can't afford computers would be at a disadvantage. So, having computers in schools helps level the playing field for these less privileged kids.
這就好比問學生是否應該學習使用電腦,答案絕對是肯定的。想像一下,如果孩子們在學校沒有學習有關電腦的知識,對他們來說是不公平的,因為他們將不知道如何在未來的工作中使用電腦。此外,來自無法負擔電腦的家庭的孩子將處於不利地位。因此,在學校配備電腦有助於幫助這些較不幸運的孩子。
It's kind of like asking whether students should be taught how to use computers and the answer is a resounding yes. Imagine if children didn't have computer lessons, we would be doing them a huge disservice as they would have no idea how to use them when they entered the world of work. Also, families that don't have the financial means to buy computers for their children would be at a disadvantage, so using computers at school puts these more disadvantaged children on a level playing field.
這有點像在問學生是否應該學習如何使用電腦,答案是肯定的。想像一下,如果孩子們沒有電腦課,我們將對他們造成重大損害,因為當他們進入工作世界時,他們將不知道如何使用。此外,沒有經濟能力為孩子買電腦的家庭將處於不利地位,因此在學校使用電腦能讓這些處境較差的孩子在同一起跑線上。
語法分析
類比句式:"這有點像是在問" 這個類比句式開頭,有效地將話題與一個更廣泛認可的觀點相連結,增加了論述的說服力。 虛擬語氣:"假如孩子們沒有上電腦課" 這裡用了虛擬語氣來描述一個假設情景,體現了高級語言能力和複雜句型的使用。 被動語態:"我們會對他們造成很大的損害" 這個被動句型強調了對孩子們的影響,而非我們的行為,更加客觀地表達了可能的後果。 條件句和對比:"另外,沒有財力的家庭" 通過設置條件和對比不同家庭的情況,增強了論點的多維度和深度。
高分詞匯
  • resounding yes
    热烈的肯定
  • doing them a huge disservice
    對他們造成了巨大的傷害
  • entered the world of work
    踏入職場
  • financial means
    財務手段
  • disadvantaged children
    弱勢兒童
  • level playing field
    公平競爭条件

思路 2

No
考官答案
I'm not sure if it's a good idea for students to use computers at school. There's a risk they could get hooked on the internet instead of focusing on their studies. Also, they might end up using the computers for non-educational stuff, which isn't what they're there for.
我不確定學生在學校使用電腦是否是個好主意。有風險他們會沉迷於網路,而不專注於學業。此外,他們可能會用電腦做一些非教育性質的事情,這不是他們拿電腦來的目的。
Allowing students to use computers in school might not be the best decision. There's a considerable risk of them developing an internet addiction, which could distract from their educational goals. Moreover, the temptation to use these devices for purposes other than learning is high, potentially sidetracking them from academic pursuits.
讓學生在學校使用電腦可能不是最好的決定。他們可能會有相當大的風險變成網路成癮者,這可能會分散他們的學習目標。此外,使用這些設備進行非學習用途的誘惑很高,有可能使他們偏離學業追求。
語法分析
條件狀語從句: 在「學生在學校使用電腦」中使用了條件狀語從句,這種結構設置了一個假設的場景,為主句提供了背景,增加了句子的複雜性和邏輯性。 現在進行時: 在「發展網路成癮」中使用了現在進行時,表達了一個持續發生的動作或狀態,在雅思口語中體現了時態的準確運用。 現在分詞短語作狀語: 在「有可能使他們偏離學術追求」中,現在分詞「偏離」作狀語,增加了句子的描述性和動態性。
高分詞匯
  • a considerable risk of
    相當高的風險
  • internet addiction
    網路成癮
  • distract
    分散注意力
  • educational goals
    教育目標
  • temptation
    誘惑
  • sidetrack
    岔道