7 分範例

問題: Would you say people should help maintain public parks and gardens?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, I think it's a good idea. Many people would probably be interested in joining a project like this. It would help bring the community together because they can work on it as a group. Often, local parks and gardens are not well maintained because of a lack of funds or attention from local authorities. This is where community members can step in. Since everyone enjoys these spaces, it makes sense for everyone to help keep them nice. Simple things like picking up litter can make a big difference and are a great way to start.
是的,我認為這是一個很好的主意。許多人可能會有興趣加入這樣的項目。它將有助於團結社區,因為他們可以一起合作。通常,當地的公園和花園由於缺乏資金或當地政府的關注而維護不佳。這就是社區成員可以介入的地方。由於每個人都喜歡這些空間,每個人幫助保持它們整潔是有道理的。像撿垃圾這樣的簡單事情可以起到很大的作用,也是一個很好的開始。
Yes, I don't see why not. I imagine that lots of people would like to get involved in such a project, and if they did, it would bring the local community together as they could work together. Sometimes, these spaces get a bit rundown as the local government either does not maintain them or doesn't have the money to spend on them, and this is where the local people could help. As everyone uses parks or gardens, then everyone making sure they are in good condition makes sense. It doesn't have to be labor-intensive either, just picking up litter would be a good start.
是的,我認為沒有理由不這樣做。我想很多人會願意參與這樣的項目,如果他們這樣做了,將會促進當地社區團結,因為他們可以共同合作。有時候,這些地方會有點破敗,因為當地政府要麼不維護它們,要麼沒有錢花在它們身上,這就是當地人民可以幫助的地方。每個人都會使用公園或花園,所以每個人確保它們處於良好狀態是有道理的。這也不一定需要勞忙費力,只要清理垃圾就已經是一個很好的開始。
語法分析
條件狀語從句:“如果他們這樣做,它將讓當地社區共同走到一起” 這個條件狀語從句為可能的社區參與提供了假設,使得答案具有邏輯性和可能性。 原因狀語從句:“由於當地政府要麼不維護它們要麼沒有足夠的經費花在這些地方” 這個原因狀語從句解釋了為何公園和花園可能破舊,增加了答案的深度和背景信息。 並列結構:“撿拾垃圾將是一個不錯的開始” 這種並列結構列舉了可能的行動,使得答案更具體和易於實施。
高分詞匯
  • why not
    為什麼不
  • imagine
    想像
  • bring the local community together
    凝聚當地社區
  • rundown
    概要
  • good condition
    良好狀況
  • labor-intensive
    勞動密集型

思路 2

No
考官答案
I don't think people should be expected to maintain public parks and gardens. It's really the government's job to take care of these spaces. They have the resources and expertise. Besides, most people might not know the right way to maintain a park. It could end up doing more harm than good.
我認為不應該期望人們去維護公共公園和花園。政府應該負責照料這些空間。他們擁有資源和專業知識。此外,大多數人可能不知道維護公園的正確方法。這可能會帶來更多害處。
Personally, I believe the responsibility of maintaining public parks and gardens shouldn't fall on citizens. This is primarily a governmental duty, as they are equipped with the necessary resources and specialized knowledge for such tasks. Moreover, the average person may lack the understanding and skills required for proper park maintenance. Without this expertise, their well-intentioned efforts might inadvertently lead to negative consequences for these green spaces.
我個人認為,維護公共公園和花園的責任不應該落在市民身上。這主要是政府的職責,因為他們配備了必要的資源和專業知識來執行這些任務。此外,普通人可能缺乏進行適當公園維護所需的理解和技能。沒有這方面的專業知識,他們熱心的努力可能會導致對這些綠地的負面影響。
語法分析
否定結構:在"shouldn't fall on citizens"中,使用了否定結構來表達作者的觀點,強調了維護公園不應由市民承擔的立場。 現在分詞作定語:在"equipped with the necessary resources and specialized knowledge"中,現在分詞短語作定語描述政府的資源和知識,提高了句子的描述性和複雜性。 比較級:"the average person may lack the understanding"中使用了比較級,比較了普通人與專業人士在維護公園方面的差異,增加了句子的對比效果。 條件狀語從句:"Without this expertise"引導的條件狀語從句,說明了如果沒有專業知識可能導致的後果,增強了句子的邏輯性和深度。
高分詞匯
  • maintain
    保持
  • shouldn't fall on citizens
    不應該落在市民身上。
  • primarily a governmental duty
    主要是政府的職責
  • be equipped with
    配備
  • necessary resources
    必要資源
  • specialized knowledge
    專業知識
  • average person
    普通人
  • lack the understanding
    缺乏理解
  • proper park maintenance
    適當的公園維護
  • expertise
    專業知識
  • well-intentioned efforts
    善意的努力
  • inadvertently lead
    無意中引導
  • negative consequence
    負面後果