7 分範例
話題: Describe a beautiful city
範例
The city of Beijing Where the city is I'm going to talk about the capital city of my country, Beijing. It's located in the East of the country, close to the sea but it's not a coastal city. How you know about the city As it's the capital of my country, I learnt about it in history classes and it has a fascinating history. Nowadays, it's a huge megacity with huge skyscrapers and is a huge business hub where most international companies have a headquarters. What buildings the city has It is home to the Forbidden Palace, which was the home of emperors for over 500 years and is awe-inspiring. The Great Wall is just north of the city too so you can visit that and get a feel for life hundreds of years ago. What it's famous for On top of this, it's famous for its food. You have to try the Chinese dumplings or roasted duck, which are the city's signature dishes. There's also a special drink called Douzhi that is really common in the markets. It's made from mung beans and I've only really seen it in Beijing. Explain what you think this city is beautiful What gets me is how Beijing has changed so much in the last hundred years or so. It has managed to maintain the beauty of its old buildings and blend them with the modern skyscrapers and this gives Beijing an amazing skyline. You have to go and see it for yourself.
北京市 城市所在地 我要談論我國首都北京市。它位於國家東部,靠近海邊,但並非沿海城市。 你如何了解這座城市 因為它是我國的首都,我在歷史課上了解到它有著迷人的歷史。如今,它是一個龐大的超大城市,擁有高聳的摩天大樓,是一個龐大的商業樞紐,大多數國際公司都在這裡設有總部。 這座城市有哪些建築物 它是紫禁城的所在地,作為皇宮超過500年,令人驚嘆。長城就在城市的北部,你也可以前往參觀,體驗數百年前的生活。 它以什麼而著名 除此之外,它以美食而聞名。你一定要嘗試中式餃子或北京烤鴨,這些是這座城市的招牌菜。市場上還有一種特殊的飲料叫作豆汁,非常普遍。它是用綠豆製成的,我只在北京看過。 解釋你認為這座城市之美 讓我感動的是北京在過去一百年左右發生了巨大的變化。它成功地保留了古建築的美感,並將其與現代摩天大樓融合在一起,使北京擁有令人驚嘆的天際線。你一定要親眼去看看。
高分詞匯
  • capital city
    首都
  • fascinating history
    迷人的歷史
  • megacity
    超級城市
  • skyscrapers
    摩天大樓
  • business hub
    商業中心
  • Forbidden Palace
    紫禁城
  • get a feel for life
    感受生活
  • signature dishes
    招牌菜
  • maintain the beauty
    保持美麗
  • amazing skyline
    令人驚嘆的天際線
範例
I'd like to describe Hangzhou, a picturesque city situated in Eastern China, near the famous West Lake. I first learned about Hangzhou through a travel documentary showcasing its scenic beauty and rich cultural heritage. The city is renowned for its historical landmarks and modern architecture. Take, for instance, the West Lake, a serene body of water surrounded by mountains and ancient pagodas. Hangzhou is also home to futuristic buildings like the International Conference Center, demonstrating the city's stride into modernity. Hangzhou is especially famous for its tea culture. It's the birthplace of Longjing tea, one of China's most prestigious green teas. Throughout the year, the city hosts various tea ceremonies and festivals that attract aficionados from all over the globe. What intrigues me the most about Hangzhou is its ability to balance tradition and modernity. As you meander through its ancient streets, you can feel the legacy of a bygone era, yet the city also hums with the energy of contemporary life. This harmonious blend makes Hangzhou perpetually enchanting and a place I'd love to visit again.
我想描述一下杭州,這座位於中國東部的風景如畫的城市,靠近著名的西湖。我第一次了解杭州是通過一部旅遊紀錄片展示它的風景美麗和豐富的文化遺產。 這座城市以其歷史地標和現代建築而聞名。比如說,西湖是一個被山脈和古老塔樓所環繞的寧靜水域。杭州還擁有未來主義建築,如國際會議中心,展示了這個城市邁向現代化的步伐。 杭州尤其以其茶文化而聞名。它是龍井茶的發源地,是中國最負盛名的綠茶之一。全年各種茶禮和節日吸引了來自世界各地的愛好者。 最讓我感到興趣的是杭州平衡傳統與現代的能力。當您穿行於其古老的街道時,可以感受到逝去時代的遺產,但這座城市也充滿了當代生活的活力。這種和諧的融合使杭州永遠迷人,是我很樂意再次拜訪的地方。
語法分析
結合複雜句和簡單句:答案中使用了主從複合句和並列句。例如:"What intrigues me the most about Hangzhou is its ability to balance tradition and modernity." 時態運用恰當:主要使用了一般現在時和一般過去時。例如:"I first learned about Hangzhou through a travel documentary." 邏輯連貫和時間線性:通過使用 “As you meander,” “Take, for instance,” 和 "What intrigues," 答案確保了時間和邏輯的連貫性。 高級詞彙和修飾詞的使用:如 "As you meander through its ancient streets, you can feel the legacy of a bygone era" 使用了描述性和修飾詞,增加了句子的複雜性和描述性。
高分詞匯
  • Picturesque
    風景如畫
  • Situated
    坐落
  • Scenic beauty
    風景優美
  • Renowned
    知名
  • Stride
    大步走
  • Birthplace
    出生地
  • Aficionados
    迷们
  • Intrigues
    陰謀
  • Meander
    蜿蜒
  • Perpetually enchanting
    永遠迷人