7 分範例

問題: Do you think cooking should be a compulsory or an elective course? Why?

思路 1

Compulsory
強制性
考官答案
Definitely necessary. Many young people don't know how to cook and often eat out. This leads to health issues because restaurant food is usually high in fat and salt. We're seeing more young people with diseases like diabetes and heart disease. If kids learned cooking, they'd be more willing to buy fresh ingredients and make healthier meals.
絕對必要。許多年輕人不知道如何烹飪,經常外出用餐。這導致健康問題,因為餐廳食物通常含有高脂肪和鹽分。我們看到越來越多年輕人患有糖尿病和心臟病。如果孩子們學會烹飪,他們會更願意購買新鮮食材,製作更健康的餐點。
Compulsory, for sure. So many youngsters today have no idea how to cook anything and, instead, eat out all the time. This is having a terrible effect on their health as restaurant food is high in fat and salt, so we are seeing a huge increase in diseases like diabetes and heart disease in younger and younger people. If children learnt how to cook, then they wouldn't be so reticent to go to the supermarket, buy fresh ingredients and cook something that's healthier.
絕對是必修。如今有許多年輕人根本不會做飯,總是外出用餐。這對他們的健康造成了嚴重影響,因為餐廳食物含有高脂肪和鹽分,所以我們看到越來越多年輕人患上糖尿病和心臟病。如果孩子們學會了如何烹飪,他們就不會那麼不願意去超市購買新鮮食材並烹煮更健康的食物。
語法分析
現在分詞作主語補語:"having a terrible effect on their health" 中的現在分詞 "having" 用作主語補語,強調了外出就餐對年輕人健康的負面影響。 名詞短語:"a huge increase in diseases" 使用名詞短語描述疾病的增長情況,表達了對當前健康問題的嚴重性的認識。 條件狀語從句:"If children learnt how to cook" 中的條件狀語從句提出了解決問題的一個方法,即教育年輕人學習烹飪,增加了句子的邏輯性。 現在分詞短語作狀語:"buy fresh ingredients and cook something that's healthier" 中的現在分詞 "buy" 和 "cook" 作狀語,展示了更健康的生活方式選擇,增強了語言的表現力和說服力。
高分詞匯
  • Compulsory
    強制性
  • have no idea how to cook anything
    不知道如何煮任何東西
  • eat out all the time
    一直在外面吃
  • having a terrible effect on their health
    對他們的健康產生嚴重影響
  • high in fat and salt
    高脂肪和高鹽
  • increase in diseases like diabetes and heart disease
    像糖尿病和心臟病等疾病的增加
  • wouldn't be so reticent to go to the supermarket, buy fresh ingredients and cook something that's healthier
    不會那麼遲疑去超市,購買新鮮食材,並烹煮更健康的食物。

思路 2

Elective
選修
考官答案
I believe cooking should be an elective course. It's true that cooking is a valuable skill, but not everyone needs to cook for themselves. Some may choose to eat out or use meal services. Also, schools have limited time and resources, and there are other subjects that might be more essential for students' overall education.
我認為烹飪應該是選修課程。烹飪是一項有價值的技能,但並非所有人都需要自己煮飯。有些人可能選擇外出用餐或使用餐飲服務。此外,學校時間和資源有限,還有其他科目可能更加對學生整體教育更為重要。
I'm of the opinion that cooking should be offered as an elective in schools. While the ability to cook is undoubtedly beneficial, it's not a universal necessity. People have varied lifestyles and choices, and not everyone prioritizes cooking. Furthermore, academic curriculums are already crowded with critical subjects, which arguably deserve more focus than culinary skills in an educational setting.
我認為在學校應該提供烹飪課作為選修課。雖然烹飪能力無疑是有益的,但並非普遍必要。人們有各種不同的生活方式和選擇,並非每個人都將烹飪視為首要事項。此外,學術課程已經擁擠,關鍵科目可能比在教育環境中的烹飪技能更值得更多關注。
語法分析
1. 被動語態: “cooking should be offered as an elective”使用了被動語態,強調了建議的對象和動作,增加了句子的正式性和複雜度。 2. 現在分詞作定語: “with critical subjects”中的“critical”作為現在分詞,用作定語,為句子增加了描述性和複雜性。 3. 宾語從句: “it's not a universal necessity”中的“universal necessity”作為宾语从句,說明了“cooking”的必要性,增強了觀點的闡述。 4. 比較級結構: “deserve more focus than culinary skills”使用了比較級結構來強調教育內容的重要性,提升了語句的複雜度和表達的深度。
高分詞匯
  • cooking as an elective
    烹飪作為選修课
  • undoubtedly beneficial
    毫無疑問地有益
  • universal necessity
    普遍必要性
  • varied lifestyles and choices
    不同的生活方式和選擇
  • prioritize cooking
    優先考慮烹飪
  • academic curriculums
    學術課程
  • be crowded with critical subjects
    擁擠的關鍵主題
  • deserve more focus
    值得更多關注
  • educational setting
    教育環境