7 分範例

問題: What is the most popular sport in your country?

思路 1

Basketball
籃球
考官答案
Basketball is the most popular sport right now. It wasn't always this way; table tennis and badminton were more popular before. But everything changed in 2019 when China hosted the basketball World Cup. It spread like wildfire because it was held in various cities, reaching a wide audience. By the end of it, everyone was talking about basketball. Nowadays, you see a lot of young people playing basketball in parks, and there are more basketball courts being built everywhere.
籃球是現在最受歡迎的運動。以前桌球和羽毛球更受歡迎。但一切在2019年中國舉辦籃球世界盃時改變了。它像野火般蔓延,因為比賽在不同城市舉行,觸及了廣泛的觀眾。到最後,每個人都在談論籃球。如今在公園裡看到很多年輕人打籃球,到處都在建造更多籃球場。
The most popular sport is basketball at the moment. It wasn't always like this as table tennis and badminton used to be more popular but in 2019, China held the basketball World Cup and it just went viral. It was hosted in different cities across the country which meant it got a much wider audience, and by the end of the tournament, everyone was talking about it. Now, if you go to the park here, you can see young people playing it everywhere and more and more basketball courts are popping up all over the place.
目前最受歡迎的運動是籃球。過去桌球和羽毛球更受歡迎,但在2019年,中國舉辦了籃球世界盃,這場比賽爆紅了。比賽在全國各地的不同城市舉辦,吸引了更廣泛的觀眾,到了比賽結束時,人人都在談論這場比賽。現在,如果你去公園,你會看到年輕人到處都在打籃球,籃球場也越來越多地出現在各處。
語法分析
過去分詞作定語:"held the basketball World Cup" 中的過去分詞 "held" 用作定語,精確描述了籃球世界盃的舉辦情況,增加了句子的信息量和準確性。 現在分詞短語作狀語:"hosted in different cities across the country" 中的現在分詞 "hosted" 作狀語,描述了世界盃舉辦的方式和範圍,增強了句子的細節和生動性。 動詞短語:"went viral" 和 "popping up" 這些動詞短語的使用,不僅使語言更加生動和具象,也體現了能夠有效運用多樣化的動詞來表達具體的動作和變化。 名詞短語:"a much wider audience" 和 "basketball courts" 這些名詞短語的運用,增加了句子的內容豐富性,並顯示了使用者能夠有效地運用高級詞彙來描述具體的對象和現象。
高分詞匯
  • viral
    病毒性
  • host
    主機
  • audience
    觀眾
  • tournament
    錦標賽
  • pop up
    彈出

思路 2

Table Tennis
乒乓球
考官答案
Table tennis, definitely. It's not just a sport, but a part of our culture and history. We have always been strong in international competitions, which makes it even more popular. It's something everyone knows about and many people play.
乒乓球,絕對是。這不僅是一種運動,更是我們文化和歷史的一部分。我們一直在國際比賽中表現強勢,這使得乒乓球更受歡迎。這是所有人都知道並且許多人都玩的東西。
The most popular sport in my country is undoubtedly table tennis. It holds a significant place in our national identity, ingrained in our history and cultural fabric. Our dominance in international table tennis arenas is well-known, which has further cemented its popularity. This sport, with its intricate skills and strategies, resonates with people from all walks of life, making it a unifying and celebrated aspect of our cultural heritage.
我國最受歡迎的運動無疑是乒乓球。它在我們的國家認同中佔據重要地位,深植於我們的歷史和文化之中。我們在國際乒乓球領域的優勢是眾所周知的,進一步鞏固了其受歡迎程度。這項運動以其精湛技巧和策略深深 resonates, 使人們當中的各行各業感到共鳴,成為我們文化遺產中的一個團結和慶祝的方面。
語法分析
一般現在時:使用了一般現在時態("is", "holds", "resonates"),適當地表達了普遍真理和現狀,顯示了時態的正確運用。 形容詞和副詞:精確使用了形容詞和副詞(如“significant”, “intricate”, “well-known”),增強了描述的具體性和表現力,展示了豐富的詞彙運用能力。 定語從句:使用了定語從句(如“which has further cemented its popularity”),使句子結構更加複雜和連貫,體現了較高水平的語法能力。
高分詞匯
  • table tennis
    乒乓球
  • significant place
    重要的地方
  • national identity
    國家身份
  • ingrained
    根深蒂固
  • cultural fabric
    文化面料
  • dominance
    主導地位
  • well-known
    眾所周知
  • cement
    水泥
  • intricate skill
    複雜的技巧
  • strategy
    策略
  • resonate
    共鳴
  • unifying
    統一
  • celebrate
    慶祝

思路 3

Football/Soccer
足球/足球
考官答案
Football, or soccer as it's known in some places, is definitely the most popular sport here. It's everywhere – people play it in parks, watch it on TV, and talk about it all the time. Plus, it's always in the media and a big part of our culture.
足球,在一些地方被稱為足球,絕對是這裡最受歡迎的運動。它無處不在 - 人們在公園裡踢球,看電視時看比賽,並且一直在談論它。而且,它總是在媒體上並且是我們文化的重要組成部分。
Football, or soccer, is unarguably the most popular sport in our country. Its presence is pervasive, spanning from local playgrounds to national stadiums, and it's a common topic of conversation among people of all ages. This sport not only enjoys wide viewership on television but also plays a significant role in our national media and cultural discourse, reflecting its deep-rooted impact and appeal in our society.
足球,或者足球,在我們國家無疑是最受歡迎的運動。它的存在無所不在,從地方操場到國家體育場,是人們各個年齡層之間普遍討論的話題。這項運動不僅在電視上享受廣泛觀眾,而且在我們國家的媒體和文化話語中扮演重要角色,反映了它在我們社會中深遠的影響和吸引力。
語法分析
從句和短語的有效結合:這段文字巧妙地結合了各種從句和短語來增加信息的豐富性和深度。例如,“spanning from local playgrounds to national stadiums”這一短語通過使用連詞“from...to...”結構,展示了能夠處理複雜信息的能力。 名詞短語的複雜性:文中使用了一系列複雜的名詞短語,如 "topic of conversation"、"cultural discourse"、"deep-rooted impact"。這些短語不僅提供了詳細的信息,還體現了作者在使用英語進行精確和多樣化表達方面的能力。 定語從句的使用:雖然這個段落中沒有明顯的定語從句,但它使用了各種其他類型的從句和短語結構來提供額外的信息和上下文,如 "reflecting its deep-rooted impact and appeal in our society"這一部分。這種結構的使用顯示了對英語句子構造的高級理解。
高分詞匯
  • pervasive
    普遍
  • stadium
    體育場
  • topic of conversation
    對話主題
  • viewership
    收視率
  • significant role
    重要的角色
  • media
    媒體
  • cultural discourse
    文化論述
  • deep-rooted impact
    深刻的影響
  • appeal
    上訴