7 分範例

問題: Should students have physical education and do sports at school?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Definitely, students need to exercise more these days. There are so many overweight kids because they mostly sit around, play on computers, and don’t go out much. Plus, they eat too much unhealthy food. I think kids should have physical education (PE) every day at school until they start university. Studies show that doing sports helps kids concentrate better in their classes.
當然,現在的學生需要更多運動。有很多過重的孩子,因為他們大部分時間都坐著、玩電腦,不太出門。此外,他們吃太多不健康的食物。我認為孩子應該每天在學校上體育課,直到他們上大學。研究表明,運動有助於孩子在課堂上更專心。
In this day and age, absolutely. The number of overweight kids I see is staggering and it's because a lot of them are leading very sedentary lives, in front of computers, not playing in the park, and eating far too much food that isn't always good for them. If anything, children should be doing PE every day in school all the way up until they go to university. All the research suggests that expending this energy doing sports helps children focus in class far more.
在這個時代,絕對。我看到的超重孩子的數量令人驚訝,這是因為很多人過著非常乏味的生活,坐在電腦前,不在公園玩耍,吃的食物也過多,並不總是對他們有益的。如果說什麼的話,孩子應該每天在學校做體育,直到他們上大學為止。所有的研究都表明,花費這份精力進行運動有助於孩子更專注於課堂上。
語法分析
過去分詞片語作定語:"The number of overweight kids" 中的 "overweight" 作為過去分詞片語用作定語,直接修飾名詞,使描述更加精確和生動。 副詞片語:"far more" 在句子中用作副詞片語,提供了程度上的強調,增強了表述的力度,體現出較高水平的語言技巧。 條件句型:"If anything, children should be doing PE every day" 這個條件句型的使用,提供了一個假設性的建議,展示了能夠靈活運用不同句型來表達觀點。
高分詞匯
  • in this day and age
    在這個時代
  • overweight kid
    過重的孩子
  • staggering
    令人震撼
  • sedentary lives
    久坐的生活方式
  • in front of computers
    在電腦前
  • play in the park
    在公園裡玩。
  • far too much food
    吃得太多食物
  • isn't always good for them
    對他們來說並不總是好的。
  • expend this energy
    消耗這種能量
  • help children focus in class
    幫助孩子在課堂上集中注意力

思路 2

No
考官答案
I don't really think sports should be a big part of school. There are more crucial subjects like math or science that need more focus. Plus, sports can be risky and lead to injuries, which isn't ideal for students. Schools should prioritize academic learning over sports.
我真的不認為體育應該是學校教育的重要部分。像數學或科學這樣更重要的科目需要更多的關注。而且,運動可能會存在風險並導致受傷,這對學生不是理想的情況。學校應該將學術學習置於運動之上。
Personally, I'm of the view that physical education shouldn't be emphasized too much in schools. The rationale is that academic subjects, especially those central to future careers like mathematics or science, demand greater attention. Moreover, engaging in sports carries an inherent risk of injuries, which can be detrimental to a student's overall well-being and academic progress. Hence, academic pursuits should take precedence over physical activities in the educational setting.
我個人認為,在學校中不應過分強調體育教育。理由是,學術科目,尤其是對未來職業至關重要的科目如數學或科學,需要更多的關注。此外,參與體育活動具有潛在的受傷風險,這可能對學生的整體健康和學業進展造成不利影響。因此,在教育環境中,學術追求應該優先於體育活動。
語法分析
情态動詞用法:"不應過分強調" 使用了情態動詞"should"來表示建議或可能,表明作者在對體育教育的重視程度上持保留態度。 名詞片語:"The rationale is that academic subjects..." 這裡使用了名詞片語來引出對學術科目重要性的解釋,體現了語句的清晰和邏輯性。 比較級結構:"demand greater attention" 使用了比較級形式"greater",表示學術科目需要比體育更多的關注,增強了論點的對比和強調效果。
高分詞匯
  • shouldn't be emphasized too much
    不應該太過強調
  • rationale
    理據
  • central to future careers
    未來職業的核心
  • demand greater attention
    需要更大的關注
  • inherent risk of injuries
    傷害的固有風險
  • detrimental to
    有害於
  • should take precedence over
    應該優先考慮