7 分範例

問題: What do you think of online advertising?

思路 1

Positive
積極。
考官答案
Online ads are quite beneficial, I believe. They introduced me to products I never knew existed, which is amazing. The ads themselves are often creative and entertaining, making my time online more enjoyable. They're also a big help for small businesses to get noticed. Plus, it's a way for me to keep up with the latest trends and innovations.
在線廣告相當有益,我相信。它們讓我認識到我從未知道存在的產品,這太神奇了。這些廣告本身通常很有創意和娛樂性,讓我在線上的時間更加愉快。它們也是小型企業引起注意的重要幫手。另外,這也是讓我跟上最新趨勢和創新的方式。
In my view, online advertising is a significant positive force. It not only introduces me to a variety of new and exciting products but also often presents them in a way that's engaging and imaginative. This adds an element of fun to my online browsing. It's particularly beneficial for smaller companies to gain exposure. Moreover, it keeps me updated on the latest market trends and technological advancements, which I find quite valuable.
在我看來,網路廣告是一股重要的正面力量。它不僅向我介紹各種新奇有趣的產品,而且通常以引人入勝且富有想像力的方式呈現。這讓我在網路瀏覽時增添了一點趣味性。對於中小型公司來說,獲得曝光是非常有益的。此外,它讓我及時了解最新的市場趨勢和技術進步,這對我來說相當有價值。
語法分析
並列句結構: "它不僅為我介紹了各種新奇的產品,而且經常以引人入勝和富有想像力的方式呈現它們" 這句話中使用了並列句結構 "not only... but also",展示了能夠有效運用複雜的句子結構來表達更豐富的意思。 動名詞作主語: "在線瀏覽" 作為動名詞短語在句子中作主語,顯示了在表達中的語法多樣性。 被動語態: "較小的公司得到曝光" 中的 "得到曝光" 使用被動語態,展示了對不同語態的掌握,增加了句子的多樣性和複雜性。 賓語從句: "這對我很有價值" 這部分使用了賓語從句,提供了關於對前述內容的個人觀點,展現了在表達中運用複雜句型的能力。
高分詞匯
  • variety
    品種
  • engaging
    融入
  • imaginative
    想像力豐富
  • element of fun
    趣味要素
  • beneficial
    有益的
  • gain exposure
    增加曝光
  • updated
    更新
  • technological advancement
    科技進步
  • valuable
    有價值

思路 2

Negative
負面
考官答案
I understand that companies need to advertise to make money, but online ads are annoying to me. What happens is after I shop online, I keep getting pop-up ads about what I just bought for a whole month. It's so annoying and feels unnecessary. I guess it's not really the advertiser’s problem, but the internet server's. It's even worse when my sister uses my computer, and then I start getting ads for stuff she likes.
我知道公司需要做廣告賺錢,但對我來說,在線廣告很煩人。发生的是,我在網上購物後,整整一個月都不斷地彈出關於我剛買的東西的廣告。這太煩人了,感覺不必要。我想這並不完全是廣告商的問題,而是網絡服務器的問題。當我妹妹使用我的電腦時,情況變得更糟,然後我開始收到她喜歡的東西的廣告。
I get that companies have to make money and so advertising is part of that process, but, for me, online ads really wind me up. What usually happens is that I buy something online, then for the next month, I receive pop-up ads about the thing I just bought. It's really irritating and feels like overkill. I suppose that it's not the advertisers' fault, but the fault of the internet server but it really gets my goat, especially if my sister has used my computer and I get hit with lots of ads for things directed at her.
我知道公司需要賺錢,所以廣告是其中一部分,但對我來說,線上廣告真的讓我很惱火。通常的情況是,我在網上購物後,接下來的一個月內,我會收到有關我剛買的東西的彈出廣告。這真的很惱人,感覺有些過火。我想這並不是廣告商的錯,而是互聯網伺服器的問題,但這確實讓我很生氣,特別是如果我妹妹用過我的電腦,我接二連三地看到針對她的廣告。
語法分析
複雜句式:原答案中使用了如 "What usually happens is that..." 的複雜句式,這種句型能夠展示出更高層次的語言運用能力。 情態動詞的變化:"I suppose that it's not the advertisers' fault..." 中使用了“suppose”,這表明了對事實的推測,而不是直接陳述,增加了語句的語氣多樣性。 指代的使用:在句子中合理使用指代,如 "the thing I just bought" 和 "things directed at her",這樣的用法不僅避免了重複,也使得語言更加流暢。
高分詞匯
  • advertising
    廣告
  • wind me up
    上鍊我
  • pop-up ads
    彈出廣告
  • irritating
    刺激
  • overkill
    過度殺傷
  • get my goat
    惹我發火
  • directed at
    針對

思路 3

I Don't Mind
我不介意
考官答案
Online ads are a big part of using the internet. They can be annoying sometimes, but they also show us new things and services we might like. Ads can be both good and bad. Some people don't mind them, especially if they're on websites where the ads make sense or are helpful. But on other sites, ads can be really annoying and get in the way.
網路廣告是使用互聯網的重要部分。有時它們可能會令人討厭,但它們也向我們展示可能喜歡的新事物和服務。廣告可以是好事也可以是壞事。有些人不介意廣告,尤其是當廣告出現在使人感興趣或有幫助的網站上時。但在其他網站上,廣告可能非常惱人並且妨礙使用。
Online advertising is something I've come to accept as part of the digital world. It's woven into the fabric of our online interactions. While ads can sometimes be intrusive, they also offer insights into new products and services. They have a dual nature, beneficial yet occasionally bothersome. People's acceptance of ads often changes depending on the platform or context in which they appear.
在線廣告是我已經接受為數字世界的一部分。 它們編織在我們的在線互動中。廣告有時可能會很侵略性,但它們也提供了對新產品和服務的見解。它們具有雙重性質,有益但偶爾令人困擾。人們對廣告的接受度往往取決於它們出現的平台或上下文。
語法分析
現在完成時: "is something I've come to accept" 使用了現在完成時,表達了對在線廣告接受度隨時間發展的變化,體現了複雜的時態運用。 被動語態: "It's woven into the fabric" 中的 "woven" 使用了被動語態,形象地表達了在線廣告與我們日常網絡互動的緊密結合,增加了句子的描述力和複雜性。 條件狀語從句: "depending on the platform or context" 這個條件狀語從句清晰地表達了廣告接受度隨環境變化的條件,顯示了能夠有效運用複雜句型來表達更精確的信息。
高分詞匯
  • woven into the fabric
    編織成布料
  • intrusive
    侵入性
  • insight
    洞察
  • dual nature
    "雙重性質"
  • beneficial
    有益的
  • bothersome
    麻煩
  • platform
    平台
  • context
    上下文