7 分範例
話題: Describe a good advertisement that you think is useful
範例
A picture of Yao Ming Where you can see it I'm going to talk about an advert featuring Yao Mong, a really famous Chinese basketball player who played in the NBA. It's on quite a few billboards near where I live, and they went up about a week ago. What it shows It's a photo of him giving a fist bump to an elephant, which is really well done and it has a clear message about the ivory trade and how it needs to be stopped. Why you think it’s useful What stands out to me is the message. It's saying that people need to stop buying ivory goods to protect elephants. He's done lots of work about this, visiting countries where poaching is an issue, trying to raise the profile of this problem. It's trying to raise people's awareness of the issue. Explain how you feel about it I think it's a really good ad, and it just says a lot about him as a person. He's appeared in numerous adverts about the ivory trade and how it needs to be stopped. He's made documentaries about the trade in elephant tusks and rhino horns and is an advocate for the banning of the trade in animal parts. It's something that I also believe in and is very close to my heart and this has increased my admiration of him.
姚明的照片 您可以在哪裡看到它 我要談論一個廣告,其中有一個真正著名的中國籃球運動員,曾在NBA打過球。這個廣告出現在我住的附近的許多廣告牌上,大約一個星期前貼出來了。 它展示了什麼 這是一張他和大象擊掌的照片,非常出色,傳達了一個清晰的信息,關於象牙貿易以及需要停止這種貿易。 你認為這很有用 對我來說,最引人注目的是信息。它說人們需要停止購買象牙制品,以保護大象。他曾在這方面做了很多工作,拜訪了盜獵是個問題的國家,試圖提高此問題的知名度。它試圖提高人們對這個問題的意識。 解釋您對此的感受 我認為這是一個非常好的廣告,並且這張廣告也反映出他作為一個人的形象。他出現在了很多關於象牙貿易及其需要停止的廣告中。他製作了關於大象牙和犀牛角貿易的紀錄片,並倡導禁止動物部位貿易。這也是我相信的事情,而且這對我來說非常重要,這增加了我對他的敬佩。
高分詞匯
  • an advert featuring...
    一個廣告特色...
  • billboards
    廣告牌
  • fist bump
    擊掌
  • ivory trade
    象牙貿易
  • raise the profile
    提升知名度
  • ivory goods
    象牙商品
  • poach
    盜獵
  • raise people's awareness
    提高人們的意識
  • documentaries
    紀錄片
  • advocate
    倡議者
  • increase my admiration of
    增加我對的欽佩
範例
One advertisement that stands out in my mind as particularly useful is a public service campaign advocating for mental health awareness. I stumbled upon this impactful ad while scrolling through social media platforms like Weibo and Tiktok. One advertisement that stands out in my mind as particularly useful is a public service campaign advocating for mental health awareness. I stumbled upon this impactful ad while scrolling through social media platforms like Facebook and Instagram. The ad itself is visually captivating, featuring dark, brooding clouds that gradually disperse, revealing a bright sky. Overlaying the visuals are uplifting messages about seeking help and breaking the stigma surrounding mental health. A contact number for a helpline is prominently displayed at the end. I find this ad exceptionally useful because mental health is often an overlooked or taboo topic in many societies. By employing compelling visuals and straightforward messages, this ad actively engages its audience and educates them about the importance of mental well-being. It directs people to resources where they can get professional help, which is invaluable in a crisis. As for how I feel about it, I'm genuinely grateful such ads exist. They serve as a timely reminder in our fast-paced world that it's okay to seek help and prioritize our mental health. Moreover, I appreciate how the ad uses the power of storytelling to bring a sensitive topic into the mainstream conversation. It's not just an ad; it's a catalyst for change.
有一則廣告讓我印象深刻,特別有用,那就是一個宣導精神健康意識的公益活動。我在微博和Tiktok等社交媒體平台上捲動時無意中發現了這個具有影響力的廣告。這則廣告本身具有視覺吸引力,展示了黑暗、愁雲密布,逐漸散去,露出明朗的天空。視覺效果上還有關於尋求幫助和打破有關精神健康的污名的振奮訊息。在最後,一個專線電話號碼被顯著展示。我認為這則廣告非常有用,因為在許多社會中,精神健康往往是一個被忽視或禁忌的話題。通過引人入勝的視覺效果和直接的訊息,這個廣告積極地吸引觀眾,並教育他們精神健康的重要性。它引導人們找尋可以獲得專業幫助的資源,在危機中是無價的。至於我的感受,我真心感激這樣的廣告存在。在我們快節奏的世界中,它提醒我們尋求幫助和把精神健康放在首位是沒有問題的。此外,我欣賞這則廣告如何運用故事的力量將一個敏感話題帶入主流對話。它不僅僅是一個廣告;它是一個變革的催化劑。
語法分析
複雜句和簡單句結合: 例如,"By employing compelling visuals and straightforward messages, this ad actively engages its audience and educates them about the importance of mental well-being." 這個句子使用了以“By”開始的狀語從句。 時態運用恰當: 答案主要使用了一般現在時,用於描述一般的觀點和感受。 表達層次感: 通過使用"moreover," "as for," 和 "exceptionally," 答案展示了豐富的表達層次。 修飾詞和形容詞的巧妙使用: 例如,"public service campaign," "compelling visuals," 和 "straightforward messages" 增加了描述的生動性和準確性。 邏輯連貫性和結構清晰: 通過使用 "As for," "I find," 和 "Moreover," 答案呈現了清晰的邏輯和結構。
高分詞匯
  • Stumbled upon
    絆倒在前進的路上
  • Impactful
    有影響力
  • Captivating
    迷人
  • Disperse
    分散
  • Overlooked
    被忽視
  • Taboo
    禁忌
  • Invaluable
    無價的
  • Catalyst
    催化劑