7 分範例

問題: Should people continue to study Science after graduating from school?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Definitely, people should keep learning science after school. Science is everywhere in our daily lives, like in the food we eat, the way we use technology, and even in the weather. Plus, it helps us understand the world better, like why things happen and how they work. It's really interesting and useful.
當然,人們應該在放學後繼續學習科學。科學無處不在,存在於我們日常生活中,比如我們吃的食物、我們使用科技的方式,甚至天氣中。此外,它也有助於我們更好地瞭解這個世界,知道事情為什麼會發生,它們是如何運作的。這真的非常有趣和有用。
Absolutely, continuing to study science post-graduation is vital. Science forms an integral part of our daily existence, manifesting in everything from culinary practices to technological advancements. It not only demystifies the complexities of the natural and technological world but also enhances our comprehension of various phenomena. This continuous learning enriches our understanding and appreciation of the intricate tapestry of life.
確實,繼續在畢業後學習科學是至關重要的。科學構成我們日常生活的重要部分,展現在從烹飪實踐到技術進步的方方面面。它不僅揭開自然和技術世界的複雜性,還增進我們對各種現象的理解。這種持續的學習豐富了我們對生命繁複織錦的理解和欣賞。
語法分析
現在分詞作定語:在 "continuing to study science post-graduation" 中,"continuing" 作為現在分詞片語描述了學習科學的持續性,強調了繼續教育的重要性。 比喻表達:"the intricate tapestry of life" 使用了比喻手法,將生活描述為一個複雜的圖案,增加了語言的形象性和表達的深度。 因果關係:"It not only demystifies... but also enhances..." 這個句子使用了因果關係結構,展示了科學不僅揭示了自然和技術世界的複雜性,還增強了我們對各種現象的理解,體現了複雜的句式結構。 名詞片語作主語:"Science forms an integral part of our daily existence" 中,"Science" 作為主語,說明了科學在日常生活中的重要角色,使句子具有明確的主題和專業性。
高分詞匯
  • integral
    積分
  • culinary practices
    烹飪慣例
  • technological advancements
    科技的進步
  • demystify
    揭开神秘面纱
  • enhance
    增強
  • comprehension
    理解
  • enrich
    豐富
  • tapestry
    掛毯

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I don't think studying science is necessary for everyone. Not all jobs are related to science. If you work in a supermarket and aren't interested in science, there's no point in learning it. Sure, science is part of our society and technology is everywhere, but knowing how everything works isn't essential. We just need to know how to use it to improve our lives.
不,我不認為每個人都需要學習科學。並非所有工作都與科學有關。如果你在超市工作並且對科學不感興趣,學習它就沒有意義。當然,科學是我們社會的一部分,技術無處不在,但並不是必要知道一切如何運作。我們只需要知道如何使用它來改善我們的生活。
No, I don't think it's something people should do if they aren't interested. Not everything is connected to science so if you work in a supermarket, what's the point of studying science if you couldn't care less about it. Yes, science is now part of the fabric of society, especially as technology is all around us but I don't think we need to know how everything works necessarily, just how we can use it to better our lives. So studying science? No, not unless you are really into it.
不,我不認為如果人們沒有興趣就應該做的事情。不是所有事情都與科學有關,所以如果你在超市工作,如果你對科學不感興趣,那學習科學有什麼意義呢。是的,科學現在已經成為社會結構的一部分,尤其是科技無處不在,但我並不認為我們必須知道一切是如何運作的,只需知道如何利用它來改善我們的生活。所以學習科學?不,除非你真的對它感興趣。
語法分析
條件句:"if they aren't interested" 這部分用了條件句,說明了如果人們對科學不感興趣,他們就不應該繼續學習科學,體現了條件和結果的邏輯關係。 反問句:"what's the point of studying science if you couldn't care less about it" 這個反問句用於強調,如果一個人對科學不感興趣,那麼學習科學沒有任何意義,增加了句子的說服力。 比喻表達:"science is now part of the fabric of society" 這裡使用了比喻,將科學比作社會的一個組成部分,增加了語言的形象性和深度。
高分詞匯
  • aren't interested
    不感興趣
  • fabric of society
    社會的結構
  • technology is all around us
    科技無所不在
  • better our lives
    改善我們的生活
  • unless you are really into it
    除非你真的喜歡這個