7 分範例
話題: Describe a park or a garden in your city
範例
I'd like to talk about a beautiful new park which has been built near my home. The local government has been building a new park in our area for about a year now, and a few months ago they finally finished it. I go there nearly every day, as it's open all day long and it's just around the corner from my house. One great thing about the park is that it has wide, beautiful paths. This means that it’s the perfect place to go running. I try to go there at least 3 times a week before work, in order to stay fit. I go there alone before anyone else in my family is awake. However, I also visit the park with my kids on the weekend. It has a beautiful play area which is really clean, modern, and well-maintained, and my kids love meeting up with their friends there. As I mentioned before, the park is really beautiful and up-to-date. However, I think what impresses me most about it is how much thought has been put into the design. For example, the play area has different sections that are suitable for children of different age groups, with a safer space for toddlers and a more challenging adventure play area for older children. Also, the toddlers' area is located really close to the toilets and other facilities, making it ideal for families. I'm really glad we can go there to relax, unwind and enjoy ourselves!
我想談談我家附近新建的漂亮公園。 當地政府已經在我們這個地區建造新公園大約一年了,幾個月前他們終於完成了。我幾乎每天都會去那裡,因為它整天開放,而且就在我家附近。公園的一個很棒的地方是它有寬闊而漂亮的小徑。這意味著這是跑步的理想地點。我試著每週至少去三次,這樣可以在上班前保持健康。在家人中其他人醒來之前,我自己前往那裡。 然而,我週末也會和孩子一起造訪公園。它有一個美麗的遊樂區,非常乾淨、現代化且維護良好,我的孩子喜歡在那裡與朋友見面。 正如我之前提到的,這個公園真的很漂亮且現代化。然而,我認為最讓我印象深刻的是設計時所付出的努力。例如,遊樂區有不同區域,適合不同年齡段的兒童,有一個適合幼兒的安全空間,還有一個更具挑戰性的冒險遊戲區域,適合年長的兒童。此外,幼兒區域位於洗手間和其他設施附近,非常適合家庭。 我真的很高興我們可以去那裡放鬆、解壓並享受自己!
高分詞匯
  • local government
    地方政府
  • wide, beautiful paths
    寬闊美麗的小徑
  • stay fit
    保持身材健康
  • play area
    遊戲區域
  • clean, modern, and well-maintained
    乾淨、現代和保養良好
  • up-to-date
    最新的
  • meeting up with their friends
    和朋友見面
  • thought has been put into
    思考過。
  • suitable for children of different age groups
    適合不同年齡的兒童
  • safer space for toddlers
    幼兒的安全空間
  • challenging adventure play area
    挑戰性的冒險遊戲區域
  • ideal for families
    適合家庭使用
範例
I frequently visit one of the city's most picturesque parks, called "Emerald Oasis," especially on weekends. Located just a 20-minute bus ride away from my home, it's a haven of greenery amidst the hustle and bustle of urban life. The park is nestled between residential neighborhoods and commercial zones, acting as a communal lung for city dwellers like me. I usually go there with a close-knit group of friends or occasionally with family. The park is more than just a patch of green; it's a multi-faceted recreational space. There's a serene pond encircled by willow trees where ducks happily swim around. Adjacent to the pond, a playground filled with giggling children creates a lively atmosphere. One of the most captivating features of the park is the sensory garden, designed to awaken the senses. Here, one can smell the fragrance of blooming roses and hear the mellifluous sounds of wind chimes gently stirred by the breeze. I find this section to be the perfect spot for meditation or introspection. Moreover, there are numerous jogging tracks weaving through the park. These paths are frequented by fitness enthusiasts who appreciate the park as a natural gym, invigorated by the crisp morning air and the rustling leaves. In a nutshell, Emerald Oasis is a sanctuary for nature lovers, families, and those in search of a tranquil respite. It's a microcosm of our community, offering something for everyone and serving as a reminder of the beauty that exists just beyond our front doors.
我經常在週末造訪這座城市最美麗的公園之一,名為「翡翠綠洲」。離我家只有20分鐘的公車車程,是都市生活繁囂中的一片綠洲。這座公園坐落在住宅區和商業區之間,是像我這樣的城市居民的共同肺。 我通常和一群密不可分的朋友一起去那裡,偶爾也和家人去。這座公園不僅是一片綠地,還是一個多功能的休憩空間。有一個被柳樹環繞的寧靜池塘,鴨子快樂地在池塘裡游泳。池塘旁邊有一個充滿歡笑的孩子的遊樂場,營造了一個熱鬧的氛圍。 公園最迷人的特色之一是感官花園,旨在喚醒感官。在這裡,人們可以聞到盛開的玫瑰花香,聽到風鈴被微風輕輕拂動時悅耳的聲音。我覺得這個地方非常適合冥想或深思。 此外,還有許多經過公園的慢跑道。這些小徑經常受到健身愛好者的青睞,他們把公園當作一個天然的健身房,受到清晨清新的空氣和樹葉拂動的鼓舞。 總的來說,翡翠綠洲是自然愛好者、家庭和尋找宁靜休憩的人的避風港。它是我們社區的縮影,為每個人提供適合的東西,並提醒著美麗就在我們家門口不遠的地方。
語法分析
複雜句和簡單句結合: 如 "Located just a 20-minute bus ride away from my home, it's a haven of greenery amidst the hustle and bustle of urban life." 這句話使用了“amidst the hustle and bustle”來構成一個狀語從句。 時態運用恰當: 主要使用了一般現在時,用於描述習慣和情況。 表達層次感: 通過使用 "especially," "moreover," 和 "in a nutshell," 答案體現出表達的層次和深度。 邏輯連貫和時間線性: 通過使用 “Furthermore,” “Moreover,” 和 “Adjacent to,” 答案確保了時間和邏輯的連貫性。這使得整個描述更加流暢和邏輯嚴密。 有效使用形容詞和名詞: "picturesque," "haven," 和 "sanctuary" 等詞增加了描述的深度和豐富性。
高分詞匯
  • Picturesque
    風景如畫
  • Nestled
    安頓
  • Close-knit
    密不可分
  • Multi-faceted
    多面向
  • Serene
    平靜
  • Mellifluous
    流暢的
  • Invigorated
    振奮
  • Tranquil
    "平靜"
  • Microcosm
    微觀世界