7 分範例

問題: Does studying and learning make people tired today?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, studying can be really tiring nowadays. One reason is that we're using screens a lot, which strains our eyes. Plus, courses these days seem to be more intense and demanding compared to the past. All of this can lead to feeling pretty worn out from studying.
是的,現在學習的確可以讓人感到非常疲憊。其中一個原因是我們使用電子螢幕很多,這會對我們的眼睛造成負擔。此外,現在的課程似乎比過去更加緊湊和要求更高。所有這些都可能讓人因為學習而感到非常疲憊。
Absolutely, the nature of studying has become more exhausting in contemporary times. Prolonged exposure to screens is a significant factor, leading to eye fatigue. Additionally, the curriculum nowadays is notably more challenging and demanding, requiring greater mental exertion. This combination of factors can contribute to a higher level of tiredness from studying than in the past.
確實,在當代,學習的性質變得更加令人疲憊。長時間暴露在螢幕前是一個重要因素,導致眼睛疲勞。此外,如今的課程明顯更具挑戰性和要求更多的,需要更大的腦力負擔。這些因素的結合可能導致比過去更高程度的學習疲勞。
語法分析
形容詞的恰當使用:在“more exhausting”和“notably more challenging and demanding”中,形容詞的使用精確地描述了當代學習的性質和課程的特點,體現了考生能夠恰當地使用形容詞來增強描述的效果。 名詞短語的有效運用:“prolonged exposure to screens” 和 “eye fatigue” 這兩個名詞短語的使用,準確地指出了學習疲勞的原因,顯示了考生能夠有效地運用名詞短語來傳達複雜的概念。 並列結構的使用:在描述課程特點時,“challenging and demanding”作為並列結構的使用,有效地表達了兩個互補的觀點,增加了句子的信息量和複雜性。 複合句的運用:“This combination of factors can contribute to...” 這個句子使用了複合句結構,展示了考生能夠使用較複雜的句型來表達因果關係,是雅思高分答案的一個典型特徵。
高分詞匯
  • exhausting
    筋疲力竭
  • prolonged exposure
    延長曝露
  • eye fatigue
    眼睛疲勞
  • notably
    明顯地
  • challenging
    挑戰性
  • demanding
    要求太高。
  • exertion
    盡力
  • combination
    組合
  • tiredness
    疲倦

思路 2

No
考官答案
I think it's unlikely. Learning has become more interactive compared to the past when we only had books in libraries. Now, we can join online groups with people worldwide, exchange ideas, or watch videos of experts discussing our subjects. This is more engaging than just sitting in a library reading and taking notes. However, it really depends on if you enjoy what you're studying.
我認為這是不太可能的。 學習變得更加互動,相比以往我們只有圖書館裡的書籍。 現在,我們可以加入全球的網絡組,與他人交流想法,或觀看專家討論我們的科目的視頻。 這比在圖書館裡坐著閱讀和做筆記更有趣。 但是,這真的取決於你是否喜歡你正在學習的東西。
I'd say probably not. Compared to the past when we just had books in the library, learning today is far more dynamic. We can work online in groups with people from all over the world and share ideas, or watch videos of famous lecturers sharing the most up-to-date information on our chosen subject. Compare this to sitting in a library reading a book and making notes and we can see that learning today is far more engaging than ever before. It does depend on whether you are into what you're studying though.
我會說可能不會。與過去只有圖書館裡的書籍相比,今天的學習更加動態。我們可以在線與來自世界各地的人一起合作,分享想法,觀看名人講座的視頻,分享我們選定主題上最新的資訊。將這與坐在圖書館裡讀書做筆記相比,我們可以看到今天的學習比以往任何時候都更具吸引力。當然,這取決於你是否對所學的內容感興趣。
語法分析
對比句式:"與過去僅有圖書館中的書籍相比,今天的學習方式更加動態。" 現在分詞短語作狀語:"分享最新資訊" 用作現在分詞短語,作為句子的狀語,增加了句子的信息量和流暢性。 條件從句:"不過這取決於你對所學的感興趣程度。" 使用條件從句來表達一個條件或限制,展示了高超的語言運用能力。
高分詞匯
  • dynamic
    動態
  • work online in groups
    在線上合作工作
  • share ideas
    分享想法
  • famous lecturer
    知名講師
  • up-to-date information
    最新資訊
  • engaging
    融入