7 分範例
話題: Describe an activity that made you feel tired
範例
A meal for the family When and where it took place I'm going to talk about the time I cooked a huge meal for all my family at my house about one month ago. What the activity was It was my mum's birthday and all the family came over: my sister, my cousins, and my mum and dad... My uncle helped me cook a feast for everyone as he is an amazing chef. We had discussed what to make and had bought all the ingredients the day before. Why you took part in it The original plan had been to go to a restaurant and eat there but one of my cousins has a lot of allergies so I said I would make dinner for everyone at my house as it would be easier. I love cooking and I love taking traditional recipes and adapting them to experiment with flavors. And explain why it made you feel tired I was so tired by the end because the menu I had worked on with my uncle included so many dishes. It took most of the day to make everything but the food he made was amazing and everyone commented on how great it was, which was a relief.
一頓家庭聚餐 發生的時間和地點 我要談談大約一個月前,在我家為全家人烹飪了一頓豐盛的大餐的那個時刻。 活動是什麼 那天是我媽媽的生日,全家人都過來了:我的姐姐、表兄弟姐妹,還有我的爸爸和媽媽⋯我的叔叔幫我們煮了一頓豐盛的餐食,因為他是一位很棒的廚師。我們討論了要做什麼,前一天我們已經買齊了所有的食材。 你為什麼參與其中 原本的計劃是到餐廳吃飯,但是我的一位表兄弟有很多過敏源,所以我說我會在我家為大家做晚餐,因為這樣比較容易。我喜歡烹飪,也喜歡把傳統食譜改編成不同口味進行實驗。 並解釋為什麼讓你感到疲累 最後我感到非常疲憊,因為我和叔叔共同制定的菜單包含了很多道菜。製作所有食物花費了差不多一整天的時間,但他做的菜真是太棒了,每個人都讚不絕口,這讓我感到放心。
高分詞匯
  • cook a huge meal
    烹飪一頓豐盛的大餐
  • amazing chef
    厲害的廚師
  • ingredients
    材料
  • traditional recipes
    傳統食譜
  • adapt
    適應
  • experiment with flavors
    嘗試不同口味
  • allergies
    過敏反應
  • original plan
    原計劃
  • comment on
    評論
  • relief
    解脫
範例
About two years ago, I took part in a demanding hiking expedition. The event transpired on a sunny Saturday in a picturesque national park situated about 50 miles from my city. It was an all-day affair, beginning early in the morning and wrapping up late in the afternoon. The activity was a guided trek along a challenging trail that included steep inclines and intricate paths. Despite the physical intensity, the experience was uplifting, as the trail meandered through lush forests and passed by tranquil lakes. The payoff at the summit, featuring an awe-inspiring panoramic view, made all the effort worthwhile. As for why it left me feeling drained, multiple factors contributed. Firstly, the prolonged physical exertion took a toll on my stamina. Walking uphill for nearly seven hours, with a backpack loaded with provisions, was taxing. Secondly, the weather, albeit sunny, was surprisingly hot, which escalated the fatigue. Lastly, though the landscape was stunning, remaining alert and navigating through the complicated terrain demanded mental concentration, adding another layer of exhaustion. In summary, the hike was both exhilarating and taxing, a paradoxical experience that combined the joy of nature with the fatigue born out of challenging physical and mental engagement.
大約兩年前,我參加了一次具有挑戰性的徒步旅行。該活動是在一個風景如畫的國家公園裡,距離我所在城市約50英里的位置,於一個陽光普照的周六舉行。整個活動持續了一整天,從清晨開始直到傍晚結束。這是一次沿著具有挑戰性的路徑進行的導覽徒步旅行,其中包括陡峭的上坡和複雜的小徑。盡管身體上很吃力,但整個體驗卻是令人振奮的,因為小徑穿過郁郁蔥蔥的森林,經過寧靜的湖泊。在山頂欣賞到令人驚嘆的全景視野時,所有的努力都是值得的。就讓我感到疲憊的原因,有多個因素造成。首先,長時間的體力消耗消耗了我的體力。帶著裝滿物資的背包往上走了將近七個小時,是一種負擔。其次,天氣雖然陽光明媚,但卻出奇的炎熱,這加劇了疲勞。最後,儘管景色迷人,但要保持警覺並在複雜的地形中導航需要精神集中,這又增加了疲憊感。總而言之,這次徒步旅行既令人興奮又令人疲勞,是一種將大自然之樂與挑戰性的身心投入所結合的矛盾體驗。
語法分析
反義疑問句的使用:如"the weather, albeit sunny, was surprisingly hot," 這裡使用了“albeit”來引出反義疑問句,增加了句子的複雜性。 過去分詞作為定語:在“a demanding hiking expedition”中,“demanding”作為過去分詞用作定語,增加了描述的豐富性。 名詞和形容詞的搭配:例如,在"an awe-inspiring panoramic view"中,“awe-inspiring”和“panoramic”是很好地搭配的形容詞,使名詞“view”更加生動。 從句與並列句的結合:在“multiple factors contributed. Firstly, the prolonged physical exertion took a toll on my stamina. Secondly, the weather escalated the fatigue.”
高分詞匯
  • Demanding
    要求太高。
  • Expedition
    探險
  • Tranquil
    "平靜"
  • Panoramic
    全景
  • Drained
    耗盡
  • Prolonged
    延長
  • Exertion
    盡力
  • Toll
    收費
  • Provisions
    規定
  • Paradoxical
    矛盾的