7 分範例
話題: Describe a party that you enjoyed
範例
A surprise party When and where the party was held I'm going to talk about a surprise party I held about six months ago for my best friend. I held it in my apartment, which is quite small. Who attended the party I invited ten close friends from our course at university and we all arrived about an hour before my best friend did so we could set everything up. There was so much to do but we all worked together to decorate the room and prepare the food. What kind of party it was As I said, it was a surprise party so my best friend had no idea about it. She was turning 21 and going to move abroad soon so it was the last chance to celebrate with her for a while. I took a photo of her as she walked in and it's the moment we've just turned the lights on to surprise her. She looks really shocked and it captures the exact moment that everyone shouted 'surprise'. It's such a great photo although she thinks she looks really weird. What you did at the party I had told her she could come for dinner and so we prepared a feast. We had such a good time all together, eating, drinking and dancing. Explain why you enjoyed the party It was the first time I'd thrown a surprise party and it was such a success. She had no idea about it and she was so grateful. It's such a great memory. It was a lot of work though so I don't know if I'd volunteer to do it again, but it was certainly worth the effort.
一個驚喜派對 派對是何時何地舉行 我要談談大約六個月前我為我最好的朋友舉辦的驚喜派對。我在我的公寓裡舉行,那裡相當小。 參加派對的人 我邀請了大學課程中的十位好友,我們在我最好的朋友到達之前約一小時來到,這樣我們就可以準備一切。有很多事情要做,但我們一起努力裝飾房間並準備食物。 派對的性質 如我所說,這是個驚喜派對,因此我最好的朋友一點也不知情。她正在慶祝21歲生日,並將很快搬到海外,所以這是最後一次有機會和她一起慶祝一陣子。我拍了她進來的照片,正好那時我們打開燈給她驚喜。她看起來非常震驚,照片捕捉到大家喊「驚喜」的瞬間。雖然她覺得自己看起來很奇怪,但這照片真是太棒了。 派對上你們做了什麼 我告訴她可以來吃晚餐,所以我們準備了一頓豐盛的饗宴。我們一起度過了愉快的時光,吃飯、喝酒和跳舞。 解釋為何你喜歡這個派對 這是我第一次舉辦驚喜派對,而且取得了巨大成功。她一點也不知情,並且非常感激。這是一個很棒的回憶。雖然這要花很多心力,所以我不確定是否想再做一次,但絕對是值得的努力。
高分詞匯
  • hosted
    主辦
  • set everything up
    準備好一切
  • decorate the room
    裝飾房間
  • prepare the food
    準備食物
  • capture the exact moment
    捕捉到準確的時刻
  • last chance to celebrate
    最後慶祝的機會
  • prepare a feast
    準備盛宴
  • thrown a surprise party
    辦了一個驚喜派對
  • grateful
    感恩
  • worth the effort
    值得的努力
範例
A couple of years ago, I attended a delightful garden party to celebrate a close friend's engagement. The event took place in her expansive backyard, beautifully adorned with twinkling fairy lights and vibrant flower arrangements. It was a summer evening, and the atmosphere was nothing short of magical. The party was essentially a casual get-together but had an elegant touch to it. The diverse mix of people, from family members to college friends, contributed to a convivial vibe. What made the party stand out was the live acoustic music that added a sense of serenity, counterbalancing the jovial laughter and animated conversations. As for why I enjoyed the party, multiple factors came into play. First and foremost, the ambience was welcoming, making everyone feel instantly at home. Secondly, the host had put meticulous effort into planning, evident from the array of delectable appetizers to the inventive cocktail menu. Last but not least, the evening was brimming with heartwarming moments. The couple exchanged personalized vows, and you could sense the palpable emotion in the air, making the celebration not just fun but profoundly meaningful. In essence, the party was an amalgamation of excellent company, scrumptious food, and an atmosphere imbued with love and happiness. It's an experience that holds a special place in my heart, one I fondly reminisce about.
幾年前,我參加了一場可愛的花園派對,慶祝一位親密朋友的訂婚。活動在她寬敞的後院舉行,裝飾著閃爍的仙女燈和生動的花藝。那是一個夏日傍晚,氛圍非常神奇。 派對本質上是一次隨便聚會,但在其中加入了優雅的元素。從家人到大學朋友,多樣化的人群為整個派對增添了一種溫馨的氛圍。派對的獨特之處在於現場的原音樂,為歡快的笑聲和熱烈的對話增添了一份寧靜。 至於我為什麼喜歡這場派對,多方面因素起了作用。首先,氛圍非常溫馨,讓每個人都感覺馬上如同在家中一般。其次,主人花了很多心思來籌劃,這點從各式美味的開胃菜到新穎的雞尾酒菜單都能看出來。最後,整個晚上充滿了感人的時刻。這對情侶交換了個性化的誓言,你可以感受到空氣中彌漫的濃濃情感,使這次慶祝不僅有趣,而且非常有意義。 總的來說,這場派對是優秀伴侶、美味食物和充滿愛與幸福氛圍的綜合體驗。這是一個在我心中佔有特別位置的經歷,我時常懷念回味。
語法分析
非限制性定語從句的應用: 例如,在“the event took place in her expansive backyard, beautifully adorned with twinkling fairy lights and vibrant flower arrangements”中,“beautifully adorned with twinkling fairy lights and vibrant flower arrangements” 是一個非限制性定語從句,用來進一步描述“her expansive backyard”,增加了描述的豐富性。 形容詞和副詞的合理搭配: 如 "essentially a casual get-together but had an elegant touch to it" 這一句,使用了“essentially”和“elegant touch”來準確而形象地描述派對的風格。 平行結構的使用: 在“the party was an amalgamation of excellent company, scrumptious food, and an atmosphere imbued with love and happiness”這一句中,"excellent company, scrumptious food, and an atmosphere" 形成了平行結構,使句子更加流暢和有力。 條件從句與主句的組合: 例如,“If the weather is fine, I usually head there on weekends” 這一句不僅運用了條件從句,同時與主句的結合也很自然,增加了句子的複雜性。 高級詞彙與複合句的結合: "It's an experience that holds a special place in my heart, one I fondly reminisce about" 這個句子使用了"that holds a special place in my heart"作為定語從句,並在後面添加了“one I fondly reminisce about”,增加了表達的深度和準確性。
高分詞匯
  • Delightful
    愉快
  • Expansive
    開放的
  • Adorned
    裝飾
  • Convivial
    歡宴
  • Meticulous
    細心的
  • Delectable
    美味的
  • Palpable
    明顯
  • Amalgamation
    合併
  • Scrumptious
    美味
  • Reminisce
    追憶