7 分範例
話題: Describe a drawing/painting that you like
範例
A picture of Yao Ming When you first saw the painting I'm going to talk about a painting I saw in an art exhibition about famous Chinese sportspeople last month in my hometown. What the painting is about The painting that stood out most to me was one of Yao Ming, a basketball player who played in the NBA. It's a painting of him giving a fist bump to an elephant, which is really well done and it has a clear message about the ivory trade and how it needs to be stopped. Who drew/painted it I don't know who did the painting but it was commissioned by WildAid, a charity that helps protect wildlife around the world. And explain why you like this painting/drawing What stands out to me is the message. It's saying that people need to stop buying ivory goods to protect elephants. He's done lots of work about this, visiting countries where poaching is an issue, trying to raise the profile of this problem. It's something that I also believe in and I think this is why the painting made such an impression on me.
姚明的一幅图 當你第一次看到這幅畫時 我要談談我上個月在家鄉參觀的一個關於中國著名運動員的藝術展覽中看到的一幅畫。 畫作內容 對我來說最引人注目的畫作是姚明的一幅。這位籃球運動員曾在NBA打球。這幅畫是他同一隻大象擊掌的畫,非常出色,並清楚表達了象牙貿易的問題,以及需要停止這種買賣。 畫作的作者 我不知道誰畫的這幅畫,但這是由一個叫WildAid的慈善機構委託完成的,這個機構幫助保護世界各地的野生動物。 並解釋你為什麼喜歡這幅畫作/素描 對我來說最引人注目的是它所傳達的訊息。畫作在告訴人們需要停止購買象牙製品來保護大象。姚明為這件事做了很多工作,訪問那些偷獵是個問題的國家,竭力提高這個問題的知名度。這也是我所信仰的,我認為這就是這幅畫對我的深刻印象所在。
高分詞匯
  • art exhibition
    藝術展觀展
  • stand out
    脫穎而出
  • fist bump
    擊掌
  • ivory trade
    象牙貿易
  • commission
    佣金
  • WildAid
    野生救援
  • protect wildlife
    保護野生動物
  • charity
    慈善
  • ivory goods
    象牙商品
  • poach
    盜獵
  • raise the profile
    提升知名度
範例
The first time I laid eyes on the painting "Starry Night" was during a high school art history class. This iconic masterpiece was created by the Dutch Post-Impressionist artist Vincent van Gogh in 1889. The painting primarily portrays a serene yet turbulent night sky filled with swirling stars over a quaint French village. The juxtaposition of the vibrant sky and the tranquil town makes for a striking contrast. What stands out is the cypress tree that stretches up like a pillar, connecting earth and heaven, almost as if it's reaching for the stars. Vincent van Gogh, a genius plagued by mental illnesses, managed to convey a plethora of emotions through this painting. Many art critics believe that "Starry Night" reflects van Gogh's emotional turmoil and his awe for the mysteriousness of the night sky. Every time I look at the painting, I'm consumed by a complex blend of feelings—there's a sense of peace, tinged with a bit of melancholy. The swirling patterns in the sky often remind me of life's unpredictability yet inherent beauty. It evokes a strong emotional response, bordering on transcendental, as if I'm momentarily lifted out of the mundanity of everyday life. In summary, "Starry Night" isn't just a painting; it's an experience, a window into van Gogh's soul, and a representation of the human condition. Its mesmerizing aesthetic and profound emotional depth make it an unforgettable piece of art that continues to captivate audiences worldwide.
我第一次看到《星夜》這幅畫是在高中藝術史課上。這幅標誌性的傑作是由荷蘭後印象派畫家文森特·梵谷於1889年創作的。 這幅畫主要描繪了一個安詳但翻攪的夜空,充滿了在一個古雅的法國村莊上空盤旋的星星。色彩鮮明的天空和寧靜的小鎮形成了鮮明對比。一棵柏樹突出,伸向天空,幾乎像是在伸手觸摸星星。 文森特·梵谷,一位饱受精神疾病困擾的天才,通過這幅畫傳達了豐富的情感。許多藝術評論家認為,《星夜》反映了梵谷的情感波動和對夜空神秘的敬畏。 每次看這幅畫時,我都被各種情感交織所淹沒——充滿一種平靜,帶著一絲憂鬱。天空中盤旋的紋路常常讓我想起生活的變幻莫測但固有的美。它引起一種強烈的情感反應,幾乎超越,仿佛暫時將我從日常生活的平庸中抬升出來。 總而言之,《星夜》不僅僅是一幅畫作;它是一種體驗,是觀看梵谷靈魂的窗口,也是對人類狀況的體現。它迷人的美學和深刻的情感深度使其成為一件令人難忘的藝術品,繼續著全球觀眾的著迷。
語法分析
複雜句和簡單句結合: 例如, "The juxtaposition of the vibrant sky and the tranquil town makes for a striking contrast." 使用了“of the”和“and”來構成一個並列的複合名詞。 時態運用恰當: 答案中使用了一般過去時和現在時,來描述過去和現在的感受。 表達層次感: 通過使用 "Every time," "In summary," 和 "tinged with," 答案體現了表達的層次和深度。 邏輯連貫和時間線性: 使用了 “Moreover,” “Every time,” 和 “In summary,” 保證了時間和邏輯的連貫性。 修飾詞和名詞的有效使用: 例如, "iconic," "masterpiece," 和 "transcendental" 這些詞增加了描述的深度和豐富性。
高分詞匯
  • Laid eyes on
    瞥見
  • Iconic
    經典
  • Masterpiece
    傑作
  • Juxtaposition
    並置
  • Tranquil
    "平靜"
  • Cypress
    柏樹
  • Plagued
    困擾
  • Plethora
    眾多
  • Melancholy
    憂鬱
  • Transcendental
    超驗主義