7 分範例
話題: Describe a place in your country that you think is interesting
範例
The city of Beijing Where is it I'm going to talk about the capital city of my country, Beijing. It's located in the East of the country, close to the sea but it's not a coastal city. How you know about it As it's the capital of my country, I learnt about it in history classes and it has a fascinating history. Nowadays, it's a huge megacity with huge skyscrapers and is a huge business hub where most international companies have a headquarters. What special features it has It is home to the Forbidden Palace, which was the home of emperors for over 500 years and is awe-inspiring. The Great Wall is just north of the city too so you can visit that and get a feel for life hundreds of years ago. And explain why you are interested in it What gets me is how Beijing has changed so much in the last hundred years or so. It went from being the political center to being the business and cultural center in a very short space of time. It's almost unrecognizable today from even 30 years ago, which to me is staggering.
北京市 它在哪裡 我要談談我的國家首都北京。它位於該國東部,靠近海邊,但不是一個沿海城市。 你怎麼知道它 作為我的國家首都,我在歷史課上學到了關於它,它有著迷人的歷史。如今,它是一個巨大的城市,擁有高樓大廈,是大多數國際公司總部所在地。 它有什麼特點 它是紫禁城的所在地,這裡是皇帝的住所,歷時500多年,令人驚嘆。長城也位於該市北部,您可以參觀那裡,了解數百年前的生活。 並說明您為什麼對它感興趣 引起我的興趣的是北京在過去的一百年左右發生了巨大變化。它從政治中心變成了商業和文化中心,轉變速度非常快。從我看來,它今天幾乎是不可認識的,即使是30年前也是如此,對我來說,這是令人驚嘆的。
高分詞匯
  • capital city
    首都
  • coastal city
    沿海城市
  • fascinating history
    迷人的歷史
  • megacity
    超級城市
  • business hub
    商業中心
  • Forbidden Palace
    紫禁城
  • awe-inspiring
    令人敬畏
  • the Great Wall
    長城
  • cultural center
    文化中心
  • staggering
    令人震撼
範例
One place in my country that piques my interest is Zhangjiajie National Forest Park, located in Hunan Province. I first discovered it while watching a travel documentary and was absolutely spellbound by its jaw-dropping natural beauty. The park is renowned for its towering quartzite sandstone formations, which rise dramatically from the earth like enormous pillars. These formations served as an inspiration for the floating mountains in the blockbuster movie, "Avatar." Apart from that, the park offers a lush canopy of trees, pristine lakes, and an intricate network of hiking trails that make it an outdoor enthusiast's dream come true. But what truly captivates me is the area's profound historical and cultural significance. It is believed to be one of the prototypes for classical Chinese landscape painting, fusing elements of nature and artistry in a way that's utterly harmonious. I'm particularly drawn to this place because it encapsulates the essence of China's unique geographical diversity and rich cultural history. More than just a travel destination, Zhangjiajie is a testament to the intricate balance between human civilization and the natural world, making it a place I long to explore in person one day.
我國一個讓我感興趣的地方是位於湖南省的張家界國家森林公園。我第一次發現它是在觀看一個旅遊紀錄片時,完全被它令人驚嘆的自然美景所吸引。 這個公園以巍峨的石英砂岩地層著名,這些地層從地球上崛起,像巨大的柱子一樣。這些地層曾經成為好萊塢電影《阿凡達》中懸浮山的靈感來源。除此之外,這個公園還提供茂密的樹冠、清澈的湖泊和一個複雜的徒步步道網,使其成為戶外愛好者的夢想成真。 但真正吸引我的是這個地區深厚的歷史文化意義。據信這是古典中國山水畫的原型之一,將自然和藝術的元素融合在一起,完全和諧。 我特別被這個地方吸引,因為它體現了中國獨特地理多樣性和豐富的文化歷史精髓。張家界不僅僅是一個旅遊目的地,更是人類文明和自然世界之間微妙平衡的見證,這使得我渴望有一天親自去探索這個地方。
語法分析
複雜句和簡單句結合: 答案中使用了不少主從複合句和並列句。例如:"I'm particularly drawn to this place because it encapsulates the essence of China's unique geographical diversity and rich cultural history." 時態運用恰當: 主要使用了一般現在時來描述自己的興趣和地點的特點。例如:"The park is renowned for its towering quartzite sandstone formations." 表達層次感: 通過使用 "absolutely," "truly," 和 "particularly," 答案體現出表達的層次和深度。 邏輯連貫和時間線性: 通過使用 "But," "Apart from that," "More than just," 答案確保了邏輯的連貫性。 名詞和動詞的靈活運用: "It is believed to be," "making it a place," 這些句子展示了答案在名詞和動詞方面的靈活運用,增加了句子的複雜性。
高分詞匯
  • Piques my interest
    引起我的興趣
  • Spellbound
    迷住
  • Jaw dropping
    驚嘆不已
  • Renowned
    知名
  • Quartzite sandstone formations
    石英砂岩形成
  • Intricate network
    精細的網絡
  • Profound
    深奧
  • Encapsulates
    封裝
  • Testament
    遺囑