7 分範例

問題: Do you think learning history is important?

思路 1

Yes, it's important
是的,這很重要
考官答案
Yes, I think learning history is important. It helps us know about our past and culture. We can also learn from mistakes people made before, so we don't do the same things again.
是的,我認為學習歷史很重要。它幫助我們了解過去和文化。我們也可以從以前人們犯的錯誤中學習,這樣我們就不會重蹈覆轍。
Absolutely, I believe learning history is really important. It teaches us about our roots and culture, and helps us understand how society has changed over time. Plus, by learning about past mistakes, we can hopefully avoid repeating them in the future.
當然,我認為學習歷史非常重要。它教導我們了解自己的根源和文化,並幫助我們理解社會隨時間的變遷。此外,通過了解過去的錯誤,我們希望能避免未來重蹈覆轍。
語法分析
1. 使用現在簡單時態:答案使用現在簡單時態(「is」、「teaches」、「helps」)來表達普遍真理和意見,這在此情境中是合適的。 2. 使用連接詞:像「and」、「plus」以及「by... we can...」的結構有助於順暢且合邏輯地連接想法,使答案連貫且易於理解。
高分詞匯
  • roots and culture
    根源與文化
  • changed over time
    隨著時間改變
  • past mistakes
    過去的錯誤
  • avoid repeating them in the future
    避免將來重複出現它們

思路 2

Some people don't think so
有些人不這麼認為
考官答案
Some people don't think history is important. They say it's boring and not useful for their jobs. They would rather learn about science or technology.
有些人不認為歷史很重要。他們說「it's boring and not useful for their jobs」。他們寧願學習科學或技術。
I know that some people don't see the value in learning history. They often find it boring or irrelevant to their daily lives, and would rather focus on practical subjects like science or technology. Not everyone enjoys memorizing dates and facts, after all.
我知道有些人不認為學習歷史有價值。他們常覺得歷史無聊或與日常生活無關,寧願專注於科學或技術等實用科目。畢竟,不是每個人都喜歡背誦日期和事實。
語法分析
1. 使用報告動詞:「I know that some people don't see...」展示了引述他人意見的能力,這為回答增添了深度。 2. 使用情態動詞:「would rather focus on...」展示了使用情態動詞來表達偏好的方法。 3. 使用否定句:「Not everyone enjoys...」是一種表達對比和句型多樣性的好方法。
高分詞匯
  • boring
    無聊
  • irrelevant
    無關緊要
  • practical subjects
    實用科目
  • memorizing dates and facts
    記憶日期和事實