7 分範例

問題: Do you live in an apartment or a house?

思路 1

Apartment
公寓
考官答案
I live in an apartment in the city. It's more convenient for my work and it's easier to clean. Also, most of my friends live in apartments, so we can visit each other easily.
我住在城市裡的一間公寓。這對我的工作來說比較方便，且比較容易清潔。另外，我大多數的朋友也住在公寓裡，所以我們可以輕鬆地互相拜訪。
I currently live in an apartment in the city because it's much more convenient for my work. Apartments are generally more affordable than houses in my area, and I really enjoy the security and facilities, like the gym and pool, that come with apartment living. Plus, most of my friends also live in apartments nearby, so it's easy for us to hang out.
我目前住在市區的一間公寓，因為這對我的工作來說方便得多。在我所在的地區，公寓通常比房子更經濟實惠，而且我非常喜歡公寓生活所帶來的安全性和設施，比如健身房和游泳池。此外，我的大多數朋友也住在附近的公寓，所以我們很容易聚在一起。
語法分析
1. 使用比較級形容詞：答案使用了比較級如「more convenient」和「more affordable」來比較公寓和房屋，這是雅思語法中的一個強項。 2. 使用關係子句：「that come with apartment living」是一個關係子句，為句子增添了細節和複雜性。 3. 使用連接詞：像「because」和「plus」這樣的詞幫助順暢地連接思想，使答案連貫自然。
高分詞匯
  • convenient
    便利
  • affordable
    平價
  • security and facilities
    安全與設施
  • gym and pool
    健身房和游泳池
  • apartment living
    公寓生活
  • hang out
    出去玩

思路 2

House
房子
考官答案
I live in a house with my family. We need more space, and it's quieter than an apartment. I like having a backyard where we can relax or have barbecues.
我和家人住在一棟房子裡。我們需要更多的空間，而且這裡比公寓安靜。我喜歡有一個後院，我們可以在那裡放鬆或烤肉。
I live in a house with my family because we need more space, especially since we have a garden and a backyard. It's much quieter and more private than living in an apartment, and I love being able to relax outside or have barbecues with my family. Also, since I grew up in a house, I'm just more used to this kind of living.
我和家人住在一棟房子裡，因為我們需要更多空間，尤其是我們還有一個花園和後院。這比住在公寓安靜得多，也更有隱私，我喜歡能在外面放鬆或和家人一起烤肉。此外，因為我在房子裡長大，我對這種生活方式比較習慣。
語法分析
1. 使用比較結構：答案使用了「quieter and more private」這類比較級來比較房子和公寓，顯示出對比較文法的良好掌握。 2. 使用複雜句：答案使用了多個帶有連接詞如「because」、「especially since」和「also, since」的複雜句，有助於清楚解釋原因並增加細節。
高分詞匯
  • garden and a backyard
    花園和後院
  • quieter and more private
    更安靜和更私密
  • relax outside
    在外面放鬆
  • have barbecues with my family
    和家人一起烤肉
  • grew up in a house
    在一所房子裡長大
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