7 分範例

問題: Have you ever returned anything you bought online?

思路 1

Yes
考官答案
Yes, I have returned things I bought online before. For example, once I bought some clothes, but they didn’t fit me at all, so I sent them back. It was not too hard because the website had free return shipping.
是的,我以前確實退回過網上購買的東西。例如,有一次我買了一些衣服,但尺寸完全不合適,所以我就寄回去了。這並不難,因為網站提供免費退貨運費。
Yes, I’ve returned several things I bought online. Sometimes the item didn’t match the description or the photos, or the quality was much worse than I expected. Luckily, returning things online is quite easy nowadays, especially with free return shipping. I’ve sent back clothes, shoes, and even some electronics.
是的,我退回過幾樣我在網上購買的東西。有時候物品與描述或照片不符,或者品質比我預期的差得多。幸運的是,現在網上退貨非常方便,尤其是有免費退貨運費的時候。我退回過衣服、鞋子,甚至一些電子產品。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式:「I’ve returned several things」和「I’ve sent back...」展示了使用現在完成式來談論與現在相關的過去經驗。 2. 比較結構的使用:「much worse than I expected」使用比較句型來描述品質上的差異。 3. 副詞的使用:「quite easy nowadays」和「especially with free return shipping」為答案增添了細節和背景。
高分詞匯
  • returned several things
    返回了幾樣東西
  • didn’t match the description
    不符合描述
  • much worse than I expected
    比我預期的糟糕得多
  • quite easy nowadays
    現在相當容易
  • free return shipping
    免費退貨運費
  • sent back
    送回

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I haven’t returned anything I bought online. I usually check the reviews and details carefully before I buy, so I don’t really need to return things.
不,我沒有退回過我在網上購買的任何東西。我通常在購買前會仔細查看評論和細節,所以我其實不太需要退貨。
No, I’ve never returned anything I bought online. I’m quite careful when shopping online and always read reviews and check the size charts, so I rarely have any problems with my orders. Plus, I don’t shop online that often, so I haven’t really had the chance to return anything.
不,我從未退過我在線上購買的任何東西。我在網上購物時相當謹慎,總是閱讀評論並查看尺碼表,因此我很少遇到訂單問題。此外,我不常網購,所以真的沒有機會退貨。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式:「I’ve never returned anything I bought online」正確地使用現在完成式來談論至今的生活經驗。 2. 副詞的使用:像是「quite」、「always」和「rarely」等詞用來修飾動詞和形容詞,為答案增添細微差別。 3. 複合句:答案使用「so」來連接原因與結果,展現形成複合句的能力。
高分詞匯
  • read reviews
    閱讀評論
  • check the size charts
    查看尺寸表
  • rarely have any problems
    很少有任何問題
  • don’t shop online that often
    網購不常買
  • had the chance
    有機會