7 分範例

問題: Are there many young people in your hometown?

思路 1

Yes

是

考官答案

Yes, there are a lot of young people in my hometown. We have several schools and even a university, so many students live here. You can always see young people hanging out in parks or shopping malls.

是的，我的家鄉有很多年輕人。我們有幾所學校甚至一所大學，所以有很多學生住在這裡。你總是可以看到年輕人聚集在公園或購物中心。

Yes, there are quite a lot of young people in my hometown. There are several universities and colleges, so many students choose to live and study here. Plus, the city has plenty of entertainment options and job opportunities, which attract even more young people from other places. You can often see groups of them hanging out in cafes or parks.

是的，我的家鄉有很多年輕人。那裡有幾所大學和學院，所以許多學生選擇在這裡生活和學習。此外，這個城市有很多娛樂選擇和工作機會，吸引了更多來自其他地方的年輕人。你經常可以看到他們成群結隊地在咖啡館或公園裡聚會。

語法分析

1. 量詞的使用：像 "quite a lot of" 和 "plenty of" 這類短語展現了豐富的量詞使用，能自然地描述數量。 2. 複雜句型：答案使用 "so" 和 "which" 來連接想法並提供原因，展現了構造複雜句子以增加連貫性和細節的能力。 3. 現在簡單式：持續使用現在簡單式（"are," "choose," "has," "attract"）適合描述關於家鄉的一般事實。

高分詞匯

quite a lot of
相當多的
several universities and colleges
幾所大學和學院
plenty of entertainment options
豐富的娛樂選擇
job opportunities
工作機會
attract
吸引
hanging out
閒晃

思路 2

不

考官答案

No, not really. Most young people have moved to bigger cities for better jobs or schools. My hometown is pretty quiet and has more older people now.

不，並不是這樣。大多數年輕人已經搬到更大的城市尋找更好的工作或學校。我的家鄉現在相當安靜，且有更多的老年人。

Actually, there aren't many young people in my hometown these days. Most of them have moved to bigger cities for better education or job opportunities, so now the population is mostly elderly. It's a pretty quiet place, and most of my friends from school have already left for other cities.

其實，現在我的家鄉年輕人不多。大多數人為了更好的教育或工作機會已經搬到了更大的城市，所以現在人口大多是老人。這是一個相當安靜的地方，我大多數學校的朋友都已經離開去其他城市了。

語法分析

1. 現在完成式的使用：「have moved」和「have already left」表示從過去開始並與現在有關聯的動作，這是在描述隨時間變化時對時態的良好運用。 2. 連接詞的使用：「so」用來表示因果關係，使答案連貫且易於理解。

高分詞匯

moved to bigger cities
搬到了更大的城市
better education
更好的教育
job opportunities
工作機會
elderly
年長者
pretty quiet place
相當安靜的地方
have already left
已經離開了

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