7 分範例

問題: What's your hometown famous for?

思路 1

Local Food
本地食物
考官答案
My hometown is famous for its street food. There are lots of snacks and dishes you can only find here, and people from other places come just to eat them.
我的家鄉以街頭小吃聞名。有許多只在這裡才能找到的點心和菜餚，其他地方的人們專程來這裡品嚐。
My hometown is really well-known for its delicious street food. There are some unique dishes that you can't find anywhere else, so people from other cities often visit just to try the local specialties.
我的家鄉以美味的街頭小吃聞名。有些獨特的菜餚在其他地方找不到，所以來自其他城市的人常常專程來嘗試當地的特色美食。
語法分析
1. 現在簡單式：答案使用現在簡單式（「is really well-known」、「are」、「can't find」、「visit」）來描述一般事實和持續的情況，這在此情境中是合適的。 2. 關係子句的使用：「that you can't find anywhere else」是一個限定性關係子句，增加了關於獨特菜餚的細節，讓答案更具描述性。
高分詞匯
  • well-known
    著名的
  • delicious street food
    美味的街頭小吃
  • unique dishes
    獨特菜餚
  • local specialties
    地方特產

思路 2

Beautiful Scenery
美麗的景色
考官答案
It's also famous for its beautiful scenery. We have a big lake that attracts tourists, and many people like to go hiking or take photos there.
這裡也以其美麗的風景聞名。我們有一個大湖吸引了遊客，許多人喜歡去那裡徒步旅行或拍照。
Another thing my hometown is famous for is its beautiful scenery. There's a well-known lake that attracts lots of tourists, and the natural views are really relaxing and photogenic. It's a popular spot for hiking and outdoor activities.
我家鄉的另一個著名之處是它美麗的風景。有一個知名的湖泊吸引了許多遊客，自然景觀非常令人放鬆且適合拍照。這裡是徒步旅行和戶外活動的熱門地點。
語法分析
1. 關係子句的使用：「that attracts lots of tourists」是一個描述湖泊的關係子句，為句子增加細節和複雜性。 2. 一般現在時的使用：答案使用了一般現在時（「is famous for」、「attracts」、「are」、「is」）來描述故鄉的事實和普遍真理，這在此情境中是適當的。
高分詞匯
  • beautiful scenery
    美麗的風景
  • well-known lake
    著名的湖泊
  • relaxing and photogenic
    放鬆且上鏡
  • hiking and outdoor activities
    健行與戶外活動

思路 3

Historical Sites
歷史遺址
考官答案
There are some old temples and buildings in my hometown, so it's a good place for people who like history. Many school trips come here to learn about the past.
我家鄉有一些古老的廟宇和建築，因此這裡是喜歡歷史的人們的好去處。許多學校旅行會來這裡了解過去。
My hometown is also known for its historical sites, like ancient temples and old buildings. It's a great place for people who love history and culture, and many school trips come here to learn about the past.
我的家鄉也以歷史遺跡聞名，如古老的寺廟和老建築。這是一個喜愛歷史和文化的人們的絕佳地方，許多校外教學都會來這裡學習過去。
語法分析
1. 現在簡單式：答案使用現在簡單式（"is also known for", "is", "come here"）來描述關於故鄉的一般事實，這在此情境中是適當的。 2. 使用描述性短語：答案使用描述性的名詞短語，如 "historical sites," "ancient temples and old buildings," 和 "people who love history and culture"，以提供清晰且具體的資訊。
高分詞匯
  • historical sites
    歷史遺跡
  • ancient temples
    古老的寺廟
  • old buildings
    老建築物
  • history and culture
    歷史與文化
  • learn about the past
    了解過去

思路 4

Famous People
著名人物
考官答案
Some famous people were born in my hometown, like a writer and a singer. People here feel proud of them, and we often talk about their stories in school.
我家鄉有一些著名的人物出生，比如一位作家和一位歌手。這裡的人們為他們感到驕傲，我們經常在學校談論他們的故事。
A few well-known celebrities and writers were actually born in my hometown. People here feel really proud of them, and their stories are often shared in local schools.
幾位知名的名人和作家其實出生在我的家鄉。這裡的人們對他們感到非常自豪，他們的故事經常在當地學校中傳頌。
語法分析
1. 過去被動語態：「were actually born in my hometown」正確使用被動語態，強調的是名人和作家，而非執行動作的人。 2. 現在簡單時態：「People here feel really proud of them」和「their stories are often shared in local schools」使用現在簡單時態來描述一般事實和習慣。
高分詞匯
  • well-known celebrities
    知名名人
  • writers
    作家
  • proud of them
    為他們感到驕傲
  • shared in local schools
    在當地學校分享
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