7 分範例

問題: Please describe your hometown a little.

思路 1

It's a small city
這是一個小城市
考官答案
My hometown is a small city. It's not very crowded, so life there is peaceful. People know each other, and there are many parks where you can relax.
我的家鄉是一個小城市。那裡人不多，所以生活很平靜。人們彼此認識，並且有很多公園可以放鬆。
My hometown is quite a small city, so it's not too crowded and life is pretty peaceful. Everyone knows each other, which gives it a really friendly atmosphere, and there are lots of parks and green spaces to enjoy.
我的家鄉是一個相當小的城市，所以不會太擁擠，生活也相當平靜。每個人彼此認識，這讓那裡有一種非常友善的氛圍，還有許多公園和綠地可以享受。
語法分析
1. 複合句和複雜句：答案使用 "so" 和 "which" 來連接想法，顯示出能夠創造較長且更自然口語句子的能力。 2. 現在簡單時態：使用現在簡單時態（"is," "knows," "gives"）適合描述事實和一般特徵。
高分詞匯
  • peaceful
    和平的
  • friendly atmosphere
    友善氛圍
  • green spaces
    綠地

思路 2

It's a big city
這是一個大城市
考官答案
My hometown is a big city. It's always busy and there are many things to do, like shopping and eating out. The public transport is also very convenient.
我的家鄉是一個大城市。它總是很繁忙，有許多事情可以做，比如購物和外出用餐。公共交通也非常方便。
My hometown is a big city that's always bustling with activity. There are plenty of shopping malls, restaurants, and entertainment options, and the public transport system makes it easy to get around.
我的家鄉是一個繁忙的大城市。這裡有很多購物中心、餐廳和娛樂選擇，公共交通系統讓出行變得非常方便。
語法分析
1. 使用現在簡單時態：答案使用現在簡單時態（如 "is," "are," "makes"）來描述家鄉的一般事實，這在此情境中是恰當的。 2. 使用關係子句：片語 "that's always bustling with activity" 使用關係子句來補充關於城市的細節，使描述更生動自然。
高分詞匯
  • big city
    大城市
  • bustling with activity
    熱鬧非凡
  • plenty of
    大量的
  • entertainment options
    娛樂選項
  • public transport system
    公共交通系統
  • get around
    走遍各地；繞過；迴避

思路 3

It's famous for something
它以某事聞名
考官答案
My hometown is famous for its food, especially the local snacks. There are also some old buildings that tourists like to visit, and we have a nice river nearby.
我的家鄉以美食著名，尤其是當地的小吃。那裡還有一些遊客喜歡參觀的古老建築，並且我們附近有一條美麗的河流。
My hometown is well-known for its delicious food, especially the local snacks that people come from other cities to try. We also have some historical sites that attract tourists, and there's a beautiful river running through the city.
我的家鄉以美味的食物聞名，特別是當地的小吃，吸引了來自其他城市的人們前來品嚐。我們還有一些吸引遊客的歷史古蹟，城市中有一條美麗的河流穿過。
語法分析
1. 使用現在簡單式：答案使用現在簡單式（「is well-known」、「have」、「attracts」）來描述關於家鄉的一般事實，這在此語境中是合適的。 2. 使用關係子句：短語「that people come from other cities to try」是一個關係子句，為「local snacks」添加細節，顯示出能夠清楚擴展想法的能力。
高分詞匯
  • well-known
    著名的
  • delicious food
    美味的食物
  • local snacks
    當地小吃
  • historical sites
    歷史遺跡
  • attract tourists
    吸引遊客
  • beautiful river running through the city
    穿過城市的美麗河流

思路 4

It's changing a lot
它正在發生很大變化
考官答案
My hometown is changing a lot these days. There are many new buildings and roads, and more people are moving in, so it's getting busier.
我的家鄉最近變化很大。有許多新建築和道路，越來越多的人搬進來，所以變得更熱鬧了。
My hometown has been changing rapidly in recent years. There are new buildings and roads popping up all the time, and as more people move in, it's definitely becoming a lot busier than it used to be.
我的家鄉近年來變化迅速。新的建築和道路不斷出現，隨著越來越多的人搬進來，這裡確實比以前繁忙許多。
語法分析
1. 現在完成進行式：「has been changing rapidly」表示一個從過去開始並持續到現在的過程，這是描述近期變化時時態的良好用法。 2. 比較結構：「busier than it used to be」使用比較形式來顯示隨時間的變化，為描述增添細節和清晰度。
高分詞匯
  • changing rapidly
    快速變化
  • popping up all the time
    不斷出現
  • busier than it used to be
    比以前更忙碌
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