7 分範例

問題: Is that a big city or a small place?

思路 1

Big City
大城市
考官答案
It's a big city. There are many tall buildings and shopping malls everywhere. It's always crowded and busy, and you can find public transport easily. I grew up here, so I'm used to the fast pace of life.
這是一個大城市。四處都是許多高樓大廈和購物中心。這裡總是擁擠且繁忙，你可以很容易地找到公共交通。我在這裡長大，所以我已經習慣了快節奏的生活。
It's definitely a big city. There are lots of tall buildings and huge shopping malls, and public transport is really convenient. The city never really sleeps—it's always bustling with people and activity. I grew up here, so I'm pretty used to the fast pace and all the excitement.
這絕對是一個大城市。那裡有許多高樓大廈和巨大的購物中心，公共交通非常便利。這座城市從不真正入睡——總是熙熙攘攘、充滿活動。我在這裡長大，所以我已經相當習慣這種快節奏和所有的熱鬧。
語法分析
1. 現在簡單式：答案持續使用現在簡單式（例如 "There are," "is," "never really sleeps"）來描述城市的一般事實和特徵，這在此語境下是恰當的。 2. 使用描述性短語：回應使用描述性短語和複合句來增加細節和變化，例如 "The city never really sleeps—it's always bustling with people and activity." 這顯示了流暢連接想法的能力。
高分詞匯
  • tall buildings
    高樓大廈
  • huge shopping malls
    大型購物中心
  • convenient
    便利
  • never really sleeps
    從不真正睡覺
  • bustling with people and activity
    熙熙攘攘，人來人往
  • fast pace
    快速節奏
  • excitement
    興奮

思路 2

Small Place
小地方
考官答案
It's a small place. It's very quiet and peaceful, and not many people live there. Everyone knows each other, and life is much slower than in a city. I like the clean air and the natural scenery.
這是一個小地方。這裡非常安靜和平靜，住的人不多。每個人都彼此認識，生活比城市慢得多。我喜歡這裡的清新空氣和自然風景。
It's actually a small place. It's really quiet and peaceful, and there's a strong sense of community because everyone knows each other. There aren't many big stores or entertainment options, but I enjoy the clean air and the open spaces. Life feels much more relaxed there.
這其實是一個小地方。這裡非常安靜和平靜，大家互相認識，因此有強烈的社區感。這裡沒有許多大型商店或娛樂選擇，但我喜歡這裡的清新空氣和寬敞的空間。生活在那裡感覺輕鬆許多。
語法分析
1. 使用描述性形容詞：答案使用了幾個形容詞（quiet, peaceful, relaxed）來清楚描述這個地方，為回答增添細節和色彩。 2. 使用對比：短語 "but I enjoy..." 引入對比，顯示出構造句子和表達細膩意見的能力。 3. 一般現在時：答案始終使用一般現在時來描述關於該地的一般事實和感受，這在此語境下是恰當的。
高分詞匯
  • quiet and peaceful
    安靜和平靜
  • strong sense of community
    強烈的社群意識
  • clean air
    潔淨空氣
  • open spaces
    開放空間
  • relaxed
    放鬆
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