7 分範例

問題: Have you ever watched a sports game in a stadium?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, I have. Last year, I went to a football match with my friends. The stadium was really lively and it was exciting to cheer for our team together. I also liked eating snacks there. It was much more fun than watching on TV.
是的,我去過。去年,我和朋友們一起去看了一場足球比賽。體育場非常熱鬧,大家一起為我們的球隊加油,氣氛十分刺激。我也喜歡在那裡吃零食。比起在電視上觀看,現場看更有趣多了。
Yes, I have watched a sports game in a stadium before. Last year, I went to a football match with some friends. The atmosphere was electric and it was amazing to cheer for my favorite team with such a big crowd. The whole experience, including the snacks and the energy, was totally different from just watching it on TV.
是的,我以前在體育場看過一場運動比賽。去年,我和一些朋友去看了一場足球比賽。現場氣氛非常熱烈,能和這麼多觀眾一起為我最喜愛的球隊加油,感覺非常棒。整個體驗,包括小吃和現場的活力,完全不同於在電視上觀看。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式:「I have watched a sports game in a stadium before」使用現在完成式來談論一段人生經歷,這在此語境中是適當的。 2. 過去簡單式:「Last year, I went to a football match...」正確地切換到過去簡單式來描述過去的特定事件。 3. 描述性子句的使用:「including the snacks and the energy」增加了細節,使答案更加生動。
高分詞匯
  • atmosphere was electric
    氣氛非常熱烈
  • cheer for my favorite team
    為我最喜愛的隊伍加油
  • with such a big crowd
    在人群這麼多的情況下
  • totally different from just watching it on TV
    完全不同於僅僅在電視上觀看

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I haven’t. I’ve never had the chance to go to a stadium because tickets are usually expensive and hard to get. I usually just watch sports at home, which is more comfortable for me.
不,我沒有。我從來沒有機會去體育場,因為門票通常又貴又難買。我通常只是待在家裡看體育比賽,對我來說這樣比較舒服。
No, I’ve never watched a sports game in a stadium. To be honest, I’ve never really had the opportunity, since tickets are often expensive or difficult to buy. Plus, I actually prefer watching sports at home where I can relax and enjoy the game in comfort.
不,我從來沒有在體育場看過比賽。說實話,我其實從來沒有機會,因為票通常很貴或很難買。而且,我其實更喜歡在家看比賽,這樣我可以放鬆並舒適地享受比賽。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式:「I’ve never watched」和「I’ve never really had」使用現在完成式來談論迄今為止的人生經驗,這對這類問題來說是合適的。 2. 連接詞的使用:「since」用來引出原因,而「Plus」則以對話的方式添加另一個觀點,使回答聽起來自然流暢。
高分詞匯
  • opportunity
    機會
  • expensive
    昂貴
  • difficult to buy
    難以購買
  • prefer watching sports at home
    偏好在家觀看體育比賽
  • in comfort
    在舒適中