7 分範例

問題: Are there any differences between what you do in the evening now and what you did in the past?

思路 1

Yes, there are differences
是的,確實有差異
考官答案
Yes, there are some differences. Now, I usually spend my evenings on my phone, watching videos or chatting with friends online. In the past, I used to do homework or play outside with my friends. My routine changed a lot after I started university.
是的,有一些不同。現在,我通常晚上會在手機上看視頻或和朋友在線聊天。過去,我常常做作業或和朋友們在外面玩。自從我開始上大學後,我的日常生活改變了很多。
Yes, my evening routine has definitely changed over the years. These days, I spend a lot more time on my phone or computer, either watching videos or chatting with friends online. When I was younger, I used to play outside with my friends or do homework in the evenings. Now, because of my university schedule, I often have to work late or attend online meetings, so my evenings are much busier than before.
是的,我的晚間例行公事多年間確實改變了。現在,我花更多時間在手機或電腦上,看視頻或與朋友在線聊天。年輕時,我常在晚上和朋友們一起玩耍或做功課。現在,由於大學課程安排,我經常需要加班或參加線上會議,所以我的晚上比以前忙得多。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式的用法:「has definitely changed over the years」顯示了從過去到現在的變化,是現在完成式的良好應用。 2. 「used to」的用法:「used to play outside... or do homework」正確表達了不再發生的過去習慣。 3. 比較結構:「much busier than before」使用比較級來強調過去和現在日常生活的差異。
高分詞匯
  • evening routine
    晚上例行公事
  • watching videos
    觀看影片
  • chatting with friends online
    與朋友在線聊天
  • used to
    習慣於
  • work late
    加班
  • attend online meetings
    參加線上會議
  • busier than before
    比之前更忙

思路 2

Not really, things are similar
不完全是,情況相似
考官答案
Not really, my evenings are pretty much the same as before. I still like to relax by reading or watching TV, and I spend time with my family most nights.
其實沒什麼變化,我的晚上大致上和以前一樣。我仍然喜歡透過閱讀或看電視來放鬆,而且大多數晚上我都會和家人共度時光。
Actually, there aren’t many differences. I still enjoy relaxing in the evenings, maybe by reading a book or watching TV, just like I did in the past. Spending time with my family in the evening is still really important to me, so my routine hasn’t changed much.
其實,差別不大。我仍然喜歡在晚上放鬆,也許是閱讀書籍或看電視,就像過去一樣。晚上與家人共度時光對我來說仍然非常重要,所以我的日常作息沒有太大改變。
語法分析
1. 現在簡單式:答案使用現在簡單式(「I still enjoy」、「is still really important」)來描述當前的習慣和例行公事,這在此情境中是適當的。 2. 過去簡單式:「just like I did in the past」使用過去簡單式來指過去的習慣,顯示出過去與現在的明顯對比。 3. 動名詞片語:「relaxing in the evenings」、「reading a book or watching TV」以及「spending time with my family」皆使用動名詞來描述活動,使答案更加自然流暢。
高分詞匯
  • relaxing in the evenings
    晚上放鬆
  • reading a book
    閱讀一本書
  • watching TV
    看電視
  • spending time with my family
    與家人共度時光
  • routine hasn’t changed much
    日常沒有太大改變