7 分範例

問題: Have you ever seen old buildings in the city?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, I have seen old buildings in my city. There are some temples and old houses from a long time ago. I often walk past them when I go to school or work. Some of them are now museums or cafes, and I like to take photos of them with my friends.
是的,我在我的城市裡看過老建築。有一些來自很久以前的廟宇和老房子。我經常在上學或上班的路上經過它們。其中一些現在是博物館或咖啡館,我喜歡和朋友一起拍照。
Yes, I’ve definitely seen quite a few old buildings in my city. For example, there are some beautiful temples and colonial-era houses that I often pass by on my way to work. Some of these old buildings have even been turned into museums or trendy cafes. I really enjoy taking photos of their unique architecture when I’m out with friends, and I think they add a lot of character and history to the city.
是的,我確實在我的城市裡見過許多老建築。例如,有一些美麗的寺廟和殖民時代的房屋,我經常在上班的路上經過這些地方。其中一些老建築甚至已經被改造成博物館或時尚咖啡館。我非常喜歡和朋友外出時拍攝它們獨特的建築風格,我覺得這些建築為城市增添了許多特色和歷史感。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式:「I’ve definitely seen quite a few old buildings」使用現在完成式來談論人生經驗,這在此情境中是合適的。 2. 被動語態:「have even been turned into museums or trendy cafes」使用被動語態來描述建築物所做的改變,展示了良好的語法多樣性。 3. 關係子句:「that I often pass by on my way to work」為句子結構增添細節和複雜性。
高分詞匯
  • colonial-era houses
    殖民時代的房屋
  • turned into
    變成
  • trendy cafes
    時尚咖啡館
  • unique architecture
    獨特的建築
  • add a lot of character and history
    增添大量的角色和歷史

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I haven’t really seen many old buildings in my city. Most of the buildings here are new, like apartments and shopping malls. I guess the city is quite modern now.
不,我真的沒在我市看到很多老建築。這裡的大多數建築都是新的,比如公寓和購物中心。我猜這個城市現在相當現代化。
Actually, I haven’t really noticed any old buildings in my city. It’s become quite modern, and most of the old structures have been replaced by new apartments and shopping centers. To be honest, I haven’t really paid much attention to old buildings before.
其實,我並沒有特別注意過我所在城市的老建築。這裡變得相當現代化,大部分的舊建築都被新的公寓和購物中心取代了。說實話,我之前並沒有特別關注過老建築。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式:「I haven’t really noticed」和「I haven’t really paid much attention」使用現在完成式來談論至今為止的經驗,這對於這種類型的問題是適當的。 2. 被動語態:「have been replaced by new apartments and shopping centers」使用被動語態來描述城市的變化,展示了良好的語法結構範圍。
高分詞匯
  • modern
    現代
  • replaced by
    取代於
  • apartments
    公寓
  • shopping centers
    購物中心
  • paid much attention
    非常重視