7 分範例

問題: Have you ever lost your keys?

思路 1

Yes
是
考官答案
Yes, I have lost my keys before. I was in a rush to leave the house and forgot where I put them. It was really stressful because I couldn't get back in until my mom came home. Now, I try to be more careful and always put my keys in the same place.
是的，我以前丟過鑰匙。我當時急著離開家，結果忘了把鑰匙放在哪裡。這真的讓人很緊張，因為我必須等媽媽回家才能進去。現在，我會更加小心，總是把鑰匙放在同一個地方。
Yes, I have lost my keys once when I was in a hurry to leave the house. It was quite stressful because I couldn't get back inside until my family came home. Since then, I've become much more careful and even use a keychain to make sure I don't lose them again.
是的，我曾經因為急著離開家而丟過鑰匙。這讓我非常緊張，因為我必須等家人回來才能進屋。從那之後，我變得更加小心，甚至使用鑰匙圈來確保不再丟失鑰匙。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式：「I have lost my keys once」正確使用現在完成式來談論與現在相關的過去經驗。 2. 過去簡單式：「It was quite stressful」和「I couldn't get back inside」使用過去簡單式來描述過去的特定事件。 3. 搭配 'since' 的現在完成式：「Since then, I've become much more careful」使用現在完成式來表示從過去開始並持續到現在的變化。
高分詞匯
  • in a hurry
    匆忙中
  • stressful
    壓力大的
  • careful
    小心
  • keychain
    鑰匙圈

思路 2

No
不
考官答案
No, I haven't lost my keys before. I'm usually careful and always put them in the same pocket or bag. I know it would be a big problem if I lost them, so I try to check for them before I leave.
不，我之前沒有丟過鑰匙。我通常很小心，總是把它們放在同一個口袋或包包裡。我知道如果丟失鑰匙會是個大問題，所以我離開前會盡量檢查有沒有帶著它們。
No, I've never lost my keys. I'm quite careful and always keep them in the same pocket or bag. I have a habit of checking for my keys before I leave anywhere, because I know losing them would be a real hassle.
不，我從來沒有丟過鑰匙。我相當小心，總是把它們放在同一個口袋或包包裡。我有離開任何地方前都會確認鑰匙的習慣，因為我知道丟了它們會非常麻煩。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式：「I've never lost my keys」使用現在完成式來談論至今的生活經驗，這在此情境中是適當的。 2. 副詞及頻率的使用：「always keep them」和「quite careful」展示了副詞在描述習慣和個性上的良好運用。 3. 條件句：「because I know losing them would be a real hassle」使用了條件結構來解釋這個習慣的原因。
高分詞匯
  • careful
    小心
  • habit of checking for my keys
    習慣檢查我的鑰匙
  • real hassle
    真正的麻煩
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