7 分範例

問題: Do you think tourists may come across bad things in other cities?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, tourists can sometimes face problems in other cities. They might get scammed because they don't know much about the place. Also, they could have trouble because they don't speak the local language.
是的，遊客有時在其他城市可能會遇到問題。他們可能會被騙，因為他們對這個地方不太了解。此外，他們可能會因為不懂當地語言而遇到困難。
Yes, tourists can indeed encounter various challenges when visiting new cities. They are often targeted by scammers who exploit their unfamiliarity with the local area. Additionally, language barriers can lead to misunderstandings or even getting lost, which can significantly dampen the travel experience.
遊客確實在參觀新城市時可能會遇到各種挑戰。他們常常會成為騙子的目標，騙子利用他們對當地地區的不熟悉。此外，語言障礙可能導致誤解或迷路，這可能會大大影響旅行體驗。
語法分析
1. 情態動詞用法："確實可能遇到" - 使用"可能"表示可能性，適用於討論遊客可能面臨的潛在情況。 2. 被動語態："他們常常成為詐騙者的目標" - 使用被動語態強調對遊客的動作，而不具體指明行動者，有助於突出遊客的脆弱性。
高分詞匯
  • - encounter various challenges
    - 遇到各種挑戰
  • - targeted by scammers
    受騙者的目標
  • - language barriers
    - 語言障礙
  • - significantly dampen
    顯著減弱

思路 2

No
不
考官答案
No, I think most cities are safe for tourists. They bring a lot of money to the place, so the local people usually try to keep them safe. Tourists also often read up a lot before going somewhere new, so they know what to expect.
不，我認為大多數城市對遊客來說是安全的。他們為當地帶來很多錢，所以當地人通常會盡力保護他們的安全。遊客在去一個新地方之前也常常會做很多功課，所以他們知道會遇到什麼。
No, I believe that most cities are generally safe for tourists, as tourism is a crucial source of income for many areas. Local authorities and businesses typically make considerable efforts to ensure the safety of visitors in order to preserve their reputation. Moreover, tourists often conduct thorough research and prepare extensively before visiting a new city, which minimizes the chances of encountering adverse situations.
不，我相信大多數城市對遊客來說通常是安全的，因為旅遊對許多地區來說是一個至關重要的收入來源。當地政府和企業通常會付出相當大的努力來確保遊客的安全，以保持他們的聲譽。此外，遊客往往會在訪問新城市之前進行深入的研究和準備，這最大程度地減少了遇到不良情況的可能性。
語法分析
1. 因果關係：當地政府和企業採取安全措施的原因是使用"作為"和"為了"來建立原因。 2. 複雜句：答案有效地使用複雜句結構，例如"當地政府和企業通常會盡力確保遊客的安全，以保持自身的聲譽。"
高分詞匯
  • - **crucial source of income**: Indicates the importance of tourism economically.
    - **重要的收入來源**：經濟上旅遊的重要性。
  • - **considerable efforts**: Suggests significant actions taken by authorities and businesses.
    - **相當大的努力**：暗示當局和企業採取的重要行動。
  • - **preserve their reputation**: Highlights the motive behind ensuring safety.
    - **保持聲譽**：強調確保安全背後的動機。
  • - **thorough research** and **prepare extensively**: Describes the proactive steps taken by tourists.
    - 充分的研究和充分的準備：描述遊客所採取的主動步驟。
  • - **minimizes the chances**: Indicates reduction in risk.
    - ** 最大限度地降低機會 **：表示風險減少。
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