7 分範例

問題: Do you think it is necessary to include natural spaces in a city?

思路 1

Yes
考官答案
Yes, I think it's really important to have natural spaces in a city. Parks and green areas give people a place to relax, exercise, and enjoy nature. They also help clean the air and make the city look nicer. Especially in summer, green spaces can make the city cooler. Plus, children need somewhere safe to play outside, and these areas are perfect for that.
是的,我認為在城市中擁有自然空間非常重要。公園和綠地給人們提供了一個放鬆、運動和享受大自然的地方。它們還有助於淨化空氣,使城市看起來更美觀。尤其是在夏天,綠地可以讓城市變得涼爽。此外,孩子們需要一個安全的戶外遊樂場所,這些地區就是非常理想的地方。
Absolutely, I believe natural spaces are essential in any city. Parks and green areas not only provide a place for people to unwind and exercise, but they also play a big role in improving air quality and reducing pollution. Green spaces can help lower city temperatures during hot summers, making urban life more comfortable. They also support mental health by offering a peaceful escape from the busy city, and they're crucial for children who need safe places to play outdoors.
絕對如此,我相信自然空間在任何城市中都是必不可少的。公園和綠地不僅為人們提供放鬆和運動的場所,還在改善空氣質量和減少污染方面扮演著重要角色。綠地有助於在炎熱的夏季降低城市溫度,使城市生活更舒適。它們也支持心理健康,提供一個遠離繁忙都市的寧靜避風港,對需要安全戶外遊戲場所的兒童尤為重要。
語法分析
1. 現在簡單時態:整篇答案中皆有使用(例如,「natural spaces are essential」、「parks and green areas provide」),用來表達普遍真理和觀點,這對於雅思第三部分來說是合適的。 2. 不僅……而且:這種相關連詞結構(「not only provide... but they also play a big role...」)為你的答案增添了複雜性和流暢度。 3. 目的不定詞:「a place for people to unwind and exercise」使用了不定詞形式,清楚表達了目的。 4. 關係子句:「who need safe places to play outdoors」是一個限定性關係子句,展現你使用複雜句型的能力。
高分詞匯
  • essential
    必要的
  • parks and green areas
    公園及綠地
  • unwind
    放鬆
  • exercise
    運動
  • improving air quality
    改善空氣質量
  • reducing pollution
    減少污染
  • help lower city temperatures
    幫助降低城市溫度
  • urban life
    都市生活
  • support mental health
    支持心理健康
  • peaceful escape
    寧靜的逃離
  • crucial
    關鍵的
  • safe places to play outdoors
    安全的戶外遊戲場所

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I don't think it's always necessary to include natural spaces in a city. Some people believe cities should focus on building more houses and businesses because land is limited. Parks can be expensive to maintain, and not everyone actually uses them. Maybe it's better to use the space for things that more people need, like housing or offices.
不,我不認為城市裡總是有必要包含天然空間。有些人相信城市應該專注於建造更多住宅和商業設施,因為土地有限。公園維護成本高,而且並非每個人都會使用它們。或許將空間用於更多人需要的事物,比如住宅或辦公室,會比較好。
Personally, I can see why some people argue against including natural spaces in cities. Urban areas often face a shortage of land, so prioritizing buildings and infrastructure might seem more practical. Maintaining parks and green areas can be costly for the city, and it's true that not everyone takes advantage of these spaces. In some cases, it might make more sense to use valuable land for housing or commercial development, especially in densely populated cities.
個人而言,我能理解為什麼有些人反對在城市中保留自然空間。城市地區經常面臨土地短缺,因此優先考慮建築物和基礎設施似乎更為實際。維護公園和綠地對城市而言可能成本高昂,而且確實並非每個人都會利用這些空間。在某些情況下,尤其是在高度人口密集的城市,將寶貴土地用於住宅或商業開發可能更有意義。
語法分析
1. 情態動詞:答案使用了情態動詞如 "can"("I can see why...")、"might"("might seem more practical")和 "can be"("can be costly")來表達可能性和觀點,這是口語英語的自然特徵。 2. 現在簡單表示一般事實:"Urban areas often face a shortage of land" 使用現在簡單來陳述一個普遍事實,這對 IELTS 口語來說是適當的。 3. 關係子句:"...not everyone takes advantage of these spaces" 使用關係子句來增加細節和複雜性。 4. 目的的不定詞:"to use valuable land for housing or commercial development" 使用不定詞來說明目的,這是 IELTS 答案中有用的結構。
高分詞匯
  • argue against including natural spaces
    反對納入自然空間
  • face a shortage of land
    面臨土地短缺
  • prioritizing buildings and infrastructure
    優先考慮建築物和基礎設施
  • maintaining parks and green areas
    維護公園和綠地
  • costly
    昂貴的
  • take advantage of these spaces
    利用這些空間
  • valuable land
    珍貴的土地
  • housing or commercial development
    住宅或商業開發
  • densely populated cities
    人口稠密的城市