7 分範例

問題: What do you do when you see rubbish on the street?

思路 1

Pick it up and throw it away
撿起來並丟掉
考官答案
If I see rubbish on the street and there’s a bin nearby, I usually pick it up and throw it away. I think it’s important to keep the city clean and set a good example for others.
如果我在街上看到垃圾,附近又有垃圾桶,我通常會撿起來丟掉。我認為保持城市整潔並為他人樹立良好榜樣非常重要。
When I notice rubbish on the street, I usually pick it up and throw it away if there’s a bin nearby. I care about keeping my city clean and feel a sense of responsibility for the environment. Plus, I think it sets a good example for others to follow.
當我注意到街上的垃圾時,如果附近有垃圾桶,我通常會撿起來丟掉。我關心保持我的城市清潔,並且對環境有一種責任感。此外,我認為這為他人樹立了良好的榜樣。
語法分析
1. 現在簡單式:答案使用現在簡單式("I notice," "I usually pick it up," "I care," "I think")來描述經常性的動作和觀點,這在此情境中是適當的。 2. 條件子句:"if there’s a bin nearby" 是第一類條件句,顯示能自然使用條件結構。 3. 不定詞表示目的:"to follow" 在 "for others to follow" 中展示使用不定詞表達目的。
高分詞匯
  • pick it up and throw it away
    撿起來並丟掉它
  • keeping my city clean
    保持我的城市清潔
  • sense of responsibility for the environment
    對環境的責任感
  • sets a good example
    樹立良好榜樣

思路 2

Ignore it
忽略它
考官答案
Sometimes I just ignore rubbish on the street, especially if I’m in a hurry or if it looks dirty. I think it’s the job of the cleaners to take care of it.
有時候我會忽視街上的垃圾,尤其是當我很匆忙或垃圾看起來很髒的時候。我認為清潔工有責任去處理這些垃圾。
To be honest, I sometimes ignore rubbish on the street, especially if I’m rushing somewhere or if the rubbish looks really dirty or dangerous. In my mind, it’s usually the responsibility of city workers to deal with it.
說實話,我有時會忽略街上的垃圾,尤其是當我趕著去某個地方或者垃圾看起來非常骯髒或危險的時候。在我心中,通常是城市工作人員的責任來處理這些垃圾。
語法分析
1. 使用頻率副詞:「sometimes」顯示說話者的習慣或傾向,這是在口語英語中表達頻率的一種自然方式。 2. 使用條件從句:「especially if I’m rushing somewhere or if the rubbish looks really dirty or dangerous」使用「if」來引入條件,使回答更加微妙且具細節。
高分詞匯
  • ignore rubbish
    ignore rubbish
  • rushing somewhere
    匆忙趕往某處
  • dirty or dangerous
    骯髒或危險
  • responsibility of city workers
    市政工作人員的責任

思路 3

Report it
回報它
考官答案
If there’s a lot of rubbish, I might report it to the local authorities. I don’t always want to touch it myself, but I still want to help.
如果有很多垃圾,我可能會向當地當局舉報。我不一定總是想自己動手,但我仍然想幫助。
If I see a lot of rubbish in one place, I might report it to the local authorities. Some cities even have apps for reporting litter, which makes it easier to help out without having to touch it myself.
如果我看到某個地方有很多垃圾,我可能會向當地有關部門舉報。有些城市甚至有報告垃圾的應用程式,這讓幫助清理變得更容易,而不必親自接觸垃圾。
語法分析
1. 第一條件句:「If I see a lot of rubbish in one place, I might report it...」這使用了第一條件句來談論未來可能的行動,展示了語法上的靈活性。 2. 關係子句:「which makes it easier to help out without having to touch it myself」使用關係子句來為應用程式添加額外資訊,使回答更複雜且自然。
高分詞匯
  • report it to the local authorities
    向當地當局報告
  • apps for reporting litter
    垃圾舉報應用程式
  • help out
    幫忙
  • without having to touch it myself
    無需親自接觸它