7 分範例

問題: Do you often feel tired?

思路 1

Yes
是
考官答案
Yes, I often feel tired because I have a lot of work and study to do. I also stay up late watching TV or playing with my phone, so I don't get enough sleep. Sometimes, I just feel exhausted during the day.
是的，我經常感到疲倦，因為我有很多工作和學習要做。我也熬夜看電視或玩手機，所以睡眠不足。有時候，我白天感到非常疲憊。
Yes, I do often feel tired, mainly because my schedule is quite packed with both work and study. I tend to stay up late watching TV or scrolling on my phone, which makes me feel exhausted the next day. Also, stress from exams or work can really drain my energy.
是的，我確實經常感到疲倦，主要是因為我的時間表被工作和學習填得滿滿的。我往往熬夜看電視或滑手機，這讓我隔天感到非常疲憊。此外，來自考試或工作的壓力也會消耗我的精力。
語法分析
1. 副詞的使用：「often」和「mainly」用來增加細節和頻率，使回答更精確且自然。 2. 一般現在時和現在進行時：回答中使用一般現在時（「I do often feel tired」、「my schedule is quite packed」）來談論一般習慣，並用類似現在進行時的結構（「scrolling on my phone」）來描述正在進行的動作。 3. 因果關係：「which makes me feel exhausted」和「can really drain my energy」的使用展現了能夠清楚連結原因與結果的能力。
高分詞匯
  • packed
    擠滿了
  • stay up late
    熬夜
  • scrolling on my phone
    在我的手機上捲動螢幕
  • exhausted
    筋疲力盡
  • drain my energy
    耗盡我的精力

思路 2

No
不
考官答案
No, I don't feel tired very often. I try to sleep early and get enough rest. I also exercise a few times a week, which helps me stay active.
不，我不常感到疲倦。我嘗試早睡並獲得足夠的休息。我每週也會運動幾次，這有助於我保持活力。
No, I don't usually feel tired because I make sure to get enough sleep every night. I also exercise regularly, which really helps me stay energetic and alert throughout the day. Plus, I try to manage my time well to avoid getting too stressed or overworked.
不，我通常不會感到疲倦，因為我確保每晚都有充足的睡眠。我也會定期運動，這確實幫助我整天保持充滿活力和警覺。此外，我也會努力管理我的時間，以避免過度壓力或過度工作。
語法分析
1. 現在簡單式的使用：答案使用現在簡單式（「I don't usually feel tired」、「I make sure」、「I also exercise regularly」）來描述習慣和例行公事，這對於此類問題是適當的。 2. 關係子句的使用：「which really helps me stay energetic and alert throughout the day」是一個非限定性關係子句，補充說明了定期運動的好處。
高分詞匯
  • exercise regularly
    定期運動
  • stay energetic and alert throughout the day
    整天保持精力充沛和警覺
  • manage my time well
    善用我的時間
  • stressed
    壓力大
  • overworked
    過勞
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