7 分範例

問題: Do you think being polite is very important?

思路 1

Yes, being polite is very important
是的,禮貌非常重要
考官答案
Yes, I think being polite is very important. It shows respect to others and helps people get along better. In my culture, we always try to be polite, especially when meeting someone for the first time.
是的,我認為禮貌非常重要。它表達了對他人的尊重,並有助於人們更好地相處。在我的文化中,我們總是努力保持禮貌,特別是在第一次見面時。
Absolutely, I believe being polite is really important. Politeness shows respect for others and helps build good relationships. It also makes social interactions much smoother and more pleasant. In my culture, being polite is highly valued, especially when meeting new people, and I think polite people are generally more well-liked and trusted.
當然,我相信禮貌真的非常重要。禮貌表現出對他人的尊重,有助於建立良好的人際關係。它也使社交互動更加順暢和愉快。在我的文化中,禮貌被高度重視,尤其是在見到新朋友時,我認為有禮貌的人通常更受喜愛和信任。
語法分析
1. 現在簡單式的使用:答案始終使用現在簡單式(例如,「shows」、「helps」、「makes」、「is valued」、「are liked and trusted」)來表達一般事實和觀點,這對這種類型的問題來說是適當的。 2. 連接詞的使用:答案使用了像「and」、「also」和「especially」這樣的連接詞和短語來順暢地連接想法,使回應具連貫性且易於理解。
高分詞匯
  • shows respect for others
    表現對他人的尊重
  • helps build good relationships
    有助於建立良好的人際關係
  • smoother and more pleasant
    更順暢且更愉悅
  • highly valued
    高度重視
  • well-liked and trusted
    受歡迎且值得信賴

思路 2

Not always
並不總是
考官答案
I don't think being polite is always necessary. Sometimes, if you are too polite, it can feel fake or make things awkward. In some situations, like emergencies, it's better to be direct.
我不認為禮貌總是必要的。有時候,如果你太有禮貌,會讓人覺得虛假或尷尬。在某些情況下,比如緊急情況,直接了當會更好。
I don't think being polite is always the most important thing. Sometimes, being too polite can come across as insincere or even make conversations a bit awkward. In certain situations, like emergencies or when giving honest feedback, it's actually more important to be direct. Also, in some cultures, people value directness over politeness.
我不認為禮貌總是最重要的。有時候,過於禮貌可能會讓人覺得不真誠,甚至使對話變得有些尷尬。在某些情況下,比如緊急情況或給予誠實的反饋時,直率反而更重要。此外,在某些文化中,人們更重視直率勝過禮貌。
語法分析
1. 條件結構:「Sometimes, being too polite can come across as insincere...」使用條件句來討論可能的結果,展示在表達假設情況時的靈活性。 2. 比較結構:「it's actually more important to be direct」使用比較形式來衡量直接與禮貌的重要性。 3. 使用例子:「In certain situations, like emergencies or when giving honest feedback...」展示了提供具體例子以支持觀點的能力,這是高分答案的重要特點。
高分詞匯
  • come across as insincere
    表現得不真誠
  • awkward
    尷尬
  • honest feedback
    誠實的反饋
  • direct
    直接
  • directness over politeness
    直接勝於禮貌