7 分範例

問題: How did you learn to be polite as a child?

思路 1

From Parents
來自家長
考官答案
I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They always told me to say 'please' and 'thank you', and if I forgot, they would remind me. They also acted politely themselves, so I followed their example.
我主要是從父母那裡學會了禮貌。他們總是告訴我要說「please」和「thank you」,如果我忘了,他們會提醒我。他們自己也很有禮貌,所以我就跟著他們的榜樣行事。
I learned to be polite mostly from my parents. They always reminded me to say 'please' and 'thank you', and they set a really good example by being polite themselves. Politeness was a big part of our family values, so it just became second nature to me.
我主要是從父母那裡學會禮貌。他們總是提醒我要說「請」和「謝謝」,並且自己也以禮貌為榜樣。我們家庭價值觀中禮貌佔了很大一部分,所以這對我來說成了自然而然的事。
語法分析
1. 過去式:答案使用簡單過去式("learned"、"reminded"、"set")來描述童年經歷,這對於敘述過去的事件是合適的。 2. 複雜句:答案使用連接詞如 "and" 和 "so" 來連接想法,使回應更流暢自然。
高分詞匯
  • set a really good example
    樹立一個真正良好的榜樣
  • family values
    家庭價值觀
  • second nature
    第二天性

思路 2

From School
來自學校
考官答案
At school, my teachers taught us about good manners. We had rules about how to treat each other, and sometimes we did role-plays to practice being polite.
在學校,老師教我們有關禮貌的知識。我們有關於如何彼此對待的規則,有時我們會進行角色扮演來練習禮貌。
I also learned a lot about politeness at school. Our teachers would teach us about good manners, and we even had role-plays in class to practice how to be polite in different situations. It really helped me understand how important it is to treat others with respect.
我在學校也學到了很多關於禮貌的知識。我們的老師會教我們良好的禮儀,甚至在課堂上進行角色扮演,練習在不同情況下如何表現得有禮貌。這真的幫助我理解對待他人尊重的重要性。
語法分析
1. 過去式用法:答案使用簡單過去式("learned"、"would teach"、"had")來描述童年時期的經歷,這對於談論過去是合適的。 2. 情態動詞 'would':在 "Our teachers would teach us" 中使用 "would",表示過去的重複動作或習慣,這是一種較進階的語法結構。
高分詞匯
  • good manners
    良好禮貌
  • role-plays
    角色扮演
  • treat others with respect
    尊重他人

思路 3

From Society and Media
來自社會與媒體
考官答案
I learned some polite habits from watching TV shows and cartoons. The characters were always polite, and I wanted to be like them. Also, I saw adults being polite in public.
我從觀看電視節目和卡通中學到了一些禮貌的習慣。角色們總是很有禮貌,我也想成為像他們一樣的人。此外,我還看到成年人在公共場合表現得很有禮貌。
Society and media played a role too. I picked up polite habits by watching how adults behaved in public and from TV shows and cartoons, which often had polite characters. Even the stories and books I read as a kid usually had heroes who were polite, so I tried to copy them.
社會和媒體也起了作用。我透過觀察成年人在公共場合的行為,還有電視節目和卡通中的禮貌角色,養成了禮貌的習慣。甚至我小時候讀的故事和書籍通常都有禮貌的英雄,所以我會試著模仿他們。
語法分析
1. 過去式:答案使用過去簡單式("played"、"picked up"、"watched"、"read"、"tried")來描述童年的經驗,這對問題而言是適當的。 2. 關係子句的使用:片語 "heroes who were polite" 使用關係子句來增加關於故事和書中英雄的細節。
高分詞匯
  • picked up polite habits
    養成了禮貌的習慣
  • polite characters
    禮貌的字元
  • heroes who were polite
    有禮貌的英雄
  • copy them
    複製它們

思路 4

From Experience
從經驗中
考官答案
Sometimes I learned to be polite from my own experience. If I was rude, people would correct me, and I realized it was better to be polite. Also, when I was polite, people were nicer to me.
有時我從自己的經驗中學會了禮貌。如果我粗魯,人們會糾正我,而我意識到禮貌更好。此外,當我有禮貌時,人們對我也更友善。
A lot of my learning came from experience. For example, when I made mistakes and someone corrected me, I realized how important manners are. I also noticed that when I was polite, people treated me better, so I made an effort to keep it up. Seeing others being rude also made me want to avoid acting that way.
我很多學習都來自經驗。例如,當我犯錯且有人糾正我時,我意識到禮貌是多麼重要。我也注意到當我有禮貌時,人們對我更好,所以我努力保持這種態度。看到別人無禮貌也讓我想避免那樣行事。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單時態的使用:答案使用過去簡單時態("came," "made," "corrected," "realized," "noticed")來描述過去的經歷,這對談論童年來說是合適的。 2. 條件句和結果句的使用:答案使用了 "when I was polite, people treated me better",展示因果關係。另外,"so I made an effort to keep it up" 使用結果句來解釋前一行動的結果。
高分詞匯
  • experience
    經驗
  • corrected me
    糾正我
  • manners
    禮貌
  • treated me better
    對我更好
  • keep it up
    繼續加油
  • rude
    粗魯