7 分範例

問題: Have you made any crafts with paper?

思路 1

Yes
是
考官答案
Yes, I have made crafts with paper before. When I was a kid, I used to make paper airplanes and sometimes we made greeting cards in art class at school. I also tried making paper lanterns for festivals with my family.
是的，我以前做過紙藝。小時候，我常常折紙飛機，有時我們在學校的美術課上會做賀卡。我也曾經和家人一起做過節慶用的紙燈籠。
Yes, I have made quite a few paper crafts. When I was younger, I loved making paper airplanes and origami, especially paper cranes, which I learned from YouTube tutorials. I also enjoyed making handmade cards for my friends’ birthdays and creating paper decorations at home during festivals.
是的，我做過不少紙藝作品。年輕時，我喜歡摺紙飛機和摺紙，特別是摺紙鶴，這是我從YouTube教程學來的。我也喜歡在朋友生日時做手工卡片，還有在節日時在家製作紙質裝飾品。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式："I have made quite a few paper crafts" 表示直到現在的經驗，是現在完成式的良好運用。 2. 過去簡單式："When I was younger, I loved making..." 正確地轉換到過去時態，談論童年活動。 3. 關係子句："which I learned from YouTube tutorials" 為句子結構增加細節和複雜性。
高分詞匯
  • paper airplanes
    紙飛機
  • origami
    摺紙
  • paper cranes
    紙鶴
  • YouTube tutorials
    YouTube 教學影片
  • handmade cards
    手工卡片
  • paper decorations
    紙製裝飾品

思路 2

No
不
考官答案
No, I haven’t really made many paper crafts. I’m not very good at arts and crafts, so I usually avoid doing them. I prefer other activities instead.
不，我並沒有做過很多紙藝。我不太擅長藝術和手工藝，所以通常會避免做這些。我比較喜歡其他活動。
No, I haven’t made any paper crafts recently. I’m not very skilled at arts and crafts, so I tend to avoid them. I usually prefer digital or other creative activities instead.
不，我最近沒有做任何紙藝作品。我對藝術和手工藝不太擅長，所以我傾向於避免。相反，我通常更喜歡數字或其他創意活動。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式：「I haven’t made any paper crafts recently」正確使用現在完成式來談論直到現在的經驗。 2. 情態動詞和傾向表達的用法：「I tend to avoid them」顯示說話者的習慣行為，使用了一個描述習慣或傾向的自然表達。
高分詞匯
  • skilled at arts and crafts
    擅長藝術和手工藝
  • tend to avoid
    傾向於避免
  • prefer digital or other creative activities
    偏好數位或其他創意活動
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