7 分範例

問題: Do people in your country like planting vegetables?

思路 1

Yes
考官答案
Yes, a lot of people in my country like planting vegetables, especially older people and those living in the countryside. They often grow their own vegetables for daily meals, and some people think it's a healthy and relaxing hobby.
是的,我國有很多人喜歡種植蔬菜,特別是年長者和住在鄉村的人。他們經常種植自己的蔬菜用於日常餐食,有些人認為這是一項健康且放鬆的嗜好。
Yes, many people in my country enjoy planting vegetables, especially the older generations and those living in rural areas. It's quite common for families to grow their own vegetables for daily use, and recently, even young people are getting interested in growing vegetables on their balconies or rooftops. People see it as a healthy and relaxing way to spend their free time.
是的,我國有很多人喜歡種植蔬菜,尤其是年長一輩和住在鄉村地區的人。家庭自種蔬菜以供日常使用相當普遍,最近甚至年輕人也開始對在陽台或屋頂種菜產生興趣。人們認為這是一種健康且放鬆的休閒方式。
語法分析
1. 現在進行式的使用:「young people are getting interested in」顯示當前的趨勢,使用現在進行式來強調正在發生的變化。 2. 副詞片語的使用:像「for daily use」和「in rural areas」這樣的片語增添細節和語境,顯示考生能夠自然地運用副詞。 3. 並列連接詞的使用:「and」用來順暢地連接想法,使回答更流暢。
高分詞匯
  • older generations
    年長的一代
  • rural areas
    鄉村地區
  • grow their own vegetables
    自己種植蔬菜
  • getting interested in
    對……產生興趣
  • balconies or rooftops
    陽台或屋頂
  • healthy and relaxing way
    健康且放鬆的方式

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I think in big cities, most people don't plant vegetables because they're too busy or don't have enough space. It's easier for them to just buy vegetables from the supermarket.
不,我認為在大城市裡,大多數人不種菜是因為他們太忙了或沒有足夠的空間。對他們來說,直接從超市買菜比較方便。
No, in big cities, most people are too busy or simply don't have enough space to plant vegetables at home. It's much more convenient for them to buy vegetables from supermarkets, and I think younger generations aren't really interested in gardening these days.
不,在大城市裡,大多數人都太忙了,或者根本沒有足夠的空間在家裡種菜。從超市買菜對他們來說方便得多,而且我認為現今年輕一代其實並不太對園藝感興趣。
語法分析
1. 使用比較級:「much more convenient」用來比較買菜和種菜,顯示出能自然使用比較結構的能力。 2. 使用否定形式:「aren't really interested」和「don't have enough space」這類片語展示了對否定句結構的掌握,這對清楚表達意見非常重要。
高分詞匯
  • convenient
    便利
  • younger generations
    年輕一代
  • aren't really interested
    不是真的感興趣
  • gardening
    園藝