7 分範例

問題: Have you taken any music classes?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, I took piano lessons when I was a child. My parents wanted me to learn an instrument, so I went to classes every week. It was sometimes hard, but I think it helped me enjoy music more.
是的,我小時候有上鋼琴課。我的父母希望我學一種樂器,所以我每週都去上課。有時候很難,但我覺得這幫助我更享受音樂。
Yes, I have taken music classes before. When I was a child, I had piano lessons every week, and later on, I joined a music class at school as an extracurricular activity. It really helped me appreciate different types of music, and it was also a fun way to meet new friends.
是的,我以前上過音樂課。小時候,我每週都有鋼琴課,後來在學校參加了一個課外音樂班。這真的幫助我欣賞不同類型的音樂,也是一個認識新朋友的有趣方式。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式的使用:「I have taken music classes before」表示持續到現在的經驗,這在此情境中很適合。 2. 過去簡單式的使用:「I had piano lessons every week」和「I joined a music class」正確描述過去的事件。 3. 連接詞的使用:「and later on」和「and it was also」用來順暢地連接想法,使回答連貫且流暢。
高分詞匯
  • extracurricular activity
    課外活動
  • appreciate different types of music
    欣賞不同類型的音樂
  • fun way to meet new friends
    結識新朋友的有趣方式

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I haven't taken any music classes. I learned a little bit about music from my friends, but I was more interested in sports when I was younger.
不,我沒有上過任何音樂課。我從朋友那裡學到了一些音樂知識,但我年輕時對運動比較感興趣。
No, I’ve never taken any formal music classes. I was actually more interested in sports and art when I was younger, so I didn’t really get the chance. Looking back, I kind of regret it because I really love music now.
不,我從來沒有正式上過音樂課。其實我小時候對運動和藝術更感興趣,所以沒有真正有機會去學。回想起來,我有點後悔,因為我現在真的很愛音樂。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式:「I’ve never taken any formal music classes」正確使用現在完成式來談論至今的生活經驗。 2. 過去簡單式:「I was actually more interested...」和「I didn’t really get the chance」使用過去簡單式來描述過去的喜好和錯過的機會。 3. 現在簡單式:「I really love music now」表達當前的感受。 4. 詞彙標記的使用:「Looking back」是一個自然的方式來引入對過去的反思。
高分詞匯
  • formal music classes
    正式音樂課程
  • sports and art
    體育與藝術
  • looking back
    回顧
  • regret
    後悔