7 分範例

問題: Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?

思路 1

No, not really
不,並不是這樣。
考官答案
No, I’m not really in touch with my primary school teachers. After I graduated, I lost contact with them, and I don’t have their phone numbers or anything. Also, some of them have retired or moved away, so it’s hard to keep in touch.
不,我其實沒有和小學老師保持聯繫。畢業後,我就失去了聯絡,也沒有他們的電話號碼之類的。而且,他們中有些已經退休或搬走了,所以很難保持聯絡。
No, I’m not really in touch with my primary school teachers anymore. After I graduated, I lost contact with most of them, and I don’t have their contact information. Plus, I think many of them have retired or moved to other cities, so it’s been difficult to stay connected.
不,我現在其實已經跟我的小學老師失去聯繫了。畢業後,我和大部分老師都斷了聯繫,也沒有他們的聯絡方式。而且,我想很多老師都已經退休或者搬到其他城市了,所以保持聯絡變得很困難。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式與簡單過去式的使用:答案使用現在式(「I’m not really in touch」)來描述當前情況,並用簡單過去式(「I graduated」、「I lost contact」)來談論過去事件,展現了對時態的良好掌握。 2. 連接詞的使用:像是「after」、「and」和「so」這些詞用來順暢地連接想法,使答案連貫且易於理解。
高分詞匯
  • in touch with
    保持聯繫
  • lost contact with
    失去聯繫
  • retired
    退休
  • moved to other cities
    搬到其他城市
  • stay connected
    保持聯繫

思路 2

Yes, a little bit
是的,一點點
考官答案
Yes, a little bit. I sometimes see my old teachers at community events or when I visit my hometown. Also, my parents are friends with some of them, so I hear about them from time to time.
是的,有一點。我有時會在社區活動中或回故鄉時見到我的舊老師。此外,我父母與他們中的一些人是朋友,所以我不時會聽到他們的消息。
Yes, I do keep in touch with a couple of my primary school teachers. I sometimes see them at community events, and I’ve even visited my old school once or twice and caught up with them. Also, my parents are still friends with some of my teachers, so I occasionally hear about what they’re up to.
是的,我確實與幾位我的小學老師保持聯繫。我有時會在社區活動中見到他們,甚至曾經一兩次回訪我的母校,與他們敘舊。此外,我的父母仍然與一些我的老師是朋友,所以我偶爾會聽到他們的近況。
語法分析
1. 現在簡單式和現在完成式:答案使用現在簡單式("I do keep in touch"、"I sometimes see")來談論經常發生的動作,並使用現在完成式("I’ve even visited")來描述過去某個不確定時間發生的經驗。 2. 頻率副詞的使用:"sometimes" 和 "occasionally" 這類詞語顯示動作發生的頻率,使答案更加精確且自然。
高分詞匯
  • keep in touch with
    保持聯繫
  • community events
    社區活動
  • caught up with them
    追上了他們
  • occasionally hear about
    偶爾會聽到關於
  • what they’re up to
    他們在做什麼