7 分範例

問題: Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?

思路 1

Yes
考官答案
Yes, I still remember my high school English teacher. She was really inspiring and made me interested in learning languages. She always encouraged me to try my best and made the lessons fun.
是的,我仍然記得我的高中英語老師。她非常有啟發性,讓我對學習語言產生了興趣。她總是鼓勵我盡力而為,並讓課堂變得有趣。
Yes, I definitely remember my high school English teacher. She really inspired me to love learning languages and always encouraged me to push myself. Her classes were never boring, and I think she played a big role in shaping my attitude towards studying.
是的,我絕對記得我的高中英語老師。她真的激發了我對學習語言的熱愛,並且總是鼓勵我不斷挑戰自己。她的課從來不無聊,我認為她在塑造我對學習態度方面起了很大的作用。
語法分析
1. 過去式:答案使用了過去式("inspired," "encouraged," "played")來描述過去的經歷,這對於問題來說是恰當的。 2. 不定詞結構的使用:像 "inspired me to love" 和 "encouraged me to push myself" 這樣的短語在動詞後使用不定詞形式,顯示出對動詞結構的良好掌握。
高分詞匯
  • inspired me to love learning languages
    激發我熱愛學習語言
  • encouraged me to push myself
    鼓勵我挑戰自己
  • played a big role
    在其中扮演了重要角色
  • shaping my attitude towards studying
    塑造我對學習的態度

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I don't really remember any teachers from my past. I changed schools a lot, so I didn't get close to any of them. None of them really stood out to me.
不,我其實不太記得過去有哪位老師。我換了很多學校,所以沒有和任何老師變得親近。沒有哪位老師讓我特別印象深刻。
Actually, I can't say I remember any particular teacher from my past. I moved schools quite a few times, so I never really had the chance to form a close bond with any of my teachers. Most of them were just average, so no one really stands out in my memory.
其實,我不能說我記得過去有哪位特別的老師。我換過很多次學校,所以從來沒有機會和任何一位老師建立親密的關係。他們大多數都只是普通,所以沒有人特別讓我印象深刻。
語法分析
1. 情態動詞的使用:「I can't say I remember...」展示了使用情態動詞來表達不確定性或缺乏強烈感受的能力。 2. 過去完成時:「I never really had the chance to form a close bond...」使用過去完成時描述過去未發生的機會,適合用來談論過去的經驗。 3. 連接詞的使用:「so」用來連接想法並顯示因果關係,使回答連貫且易於理解。
高分詞匯
  • particular teacher
    特定教師
  • moved schools quite a few times
    搬過好幾次學校
  • form a close bond
    建立緊密的聯繫
  • average
    平均
  • stands out in my memory
    在我記憶中格外突出