7 分範例
話題: Describe a music event that you didn't enjoy
範例
Step 1: Identify the Part 2 question requirements The question asks you to describe a music event that you did not enjoy. You should mention: - What the event was - Who you went with - Why you decided to go - And explain why you didn’t enjoy it Step 2: Strategies for a better answer - Expand your answer with details about the event, your expectations, and your feelings. - Maintain coherence by logically connecting each clue. - Paraphrase the question and use synonyms for variety. - Refer back to previous points to show connection. - Use signposting language to guide the listener. - Use a range of vocabulary related to music, emotions, and experiences. - Demonstrate a variety of grammar structures, including complex sentences and linking words. - Ensure the answer is more than 300 words and flows naturally. Topic:A disappointing music festival What it was The music event I’d like to talk about is a local music festival that took place in my city last summer. It was called “Summer Beats,” and it was advertised as a vibrant outdoor concert featuring several popular bands and solo artists from around the country. The event was held in a large open park, and there were multiple stages set up for different genres of music, ranging from pop and rock to electronic dance music. I had been looking forward to it for weeks because I thought it would be a fantastic opportunity to enjoy live performances and soak up the lively atmosphere. Who you went with I attended the festival with a group of my close friends. We had all bought our tickets together as soon as they went on sale, and we were really excited about spending the whole day at the event. Some of my friends are huge music fans, and they had even made a playlist of the artists who were scheduled to perform. We planned to meet early in the morning, grab some food from the food trucks, and then find a good spot near the main stage. Why you decided to go there The main reason I decided to go was because of the lineup of artists. There were a couple of bands that I had been wanting to see live for a long time, and I thought this festival would be the perfect chance. Additionally, I hadn’t been to a big music event since before the pandemic, so I was eager to experience the excitement of a live concert again. My friends also convinced me that it would be a memorable day out, and I didn’t want to miss out on the fun. And explain why you didn’t enjoy it Unfortunately, the reality didn’t live up to my expectations at all. First of all, the weather was terrible; it rained heavily for most of the day, which made the ground muddy and uncomfortable to stand on. The sound system at the main stage was also really poor, so it was hard to hear the singers clearly, and the music often sounded distorted. On top of that, the festival was overcrowded, and it was almost impossible to get close to the stage or even find a place to sit down. The food stalls had long queues, and when we finally got our food, it was cold and tasteless. To make matters worse, one of the headline bands canceled at the last minute, which was a huge disappointment. Overall, I felt frustrated and exhausted by the end of the day, and I realized that sometimes big events like this are not as enjoyable as they seem. Despite being with my friends, I couldn’t wait to go home, and I don’t think I’ll be attending another music festival anytime soon.
步驟一:確定第二部分問題的要求 問題要求你描述一個你不喜歡的音樂活動。你應該提到: - 這個活動是什麼 - 你和誰一起去的 - 你為什麼決定去 - 並解釋為什麼你不喜歡它 步驟二:獲得更好答案的策略 - 用關於活動、你的期望和感受的細節來擴充答案。 - 通過邏輯地連接每個線索來保持連貫性。 - 針對問題進行同義改寫以增加多樣性。 - 回顧之前的點以展示聯繫。 - 使用指示語言來引導聽眾。 - 使用與音樂、情感和經歷相關的豐富詞彙。 - 展示多種語法結構,包括複雜句和連接詞。 - 確保答案超過300字且自然流暢。 主題:令人失望的音樂節 它是什麼 我想談論的音樂活動是在我城市去年夏天舉行的本地音樂節。它叫做“Summer Beats”,宣傳為一個充滿活力的戶外音樂會,匯聚了來自全國多個受歡迎的樂隊和獨奏藝術家。活動在一個大型開放公園舉行,設有多個舞台,涵蓋從流行音樂、搖滾到電子舞曲等不同類型。我已期待這個活動好幾週,因為我覺得這將是享受現場表演並感受熱鬧氛圍的絕佳機會。 你和誰一起去的 我和一群親密的朋友一起參加了這個音樂節。我們在票剛開始販售時就一起買了票,對整天在活動現場度過感到非常興奮。我的一些朋友是音樂迷,他們甚至製作了一個演出藝人播放清單。我們計劃一大早見面,先買些食物車上的食物,然後找個靠近主舞台的好位置。 你為什麼決定去那裡 我決定去的主要原因是因為演出陣容。裡面有幾個我很久以來一直想現場觀看的樂隊,我覺得這個音樂節是個完美的機會。此外,自從疫情前,我就沒有參加過大型音樂活動,所以我很渴望再次體驗現場演唱會的刺激。我的朋友也說服我說這會是一個難忘的日子,我不想錯過這個樂趣。 並解釋為什麼你不喜歡它 不幸的是,現實完全沒達到我的期望。首先,天氣很糟糕,當天大部分時間都下著大雨,讓地面泥濘不堪,站立非常不舒服。主舞台的音響系統也很差,導致很難聽清歌手唱什麼,音樂經常失真。除此之外,音樂節人太多,幾乎無法靠近舞台,甚至找不到坐下的地方。食物攤位排了長隊,當我們終於拿到食物時,已經冷且毫無味道。更糟糕的是,一個主要表演樂隊在最後一刻取消演出,讓人大失所望。整體來說,活動結束時我感到沮喪且筋疲力盡,我意識到有時像這樣的大型活動並沒有看起來那麼好玩。儘管和朋友在一起,我卻迫不及待想回家,而且我想我短期內不會再參加其他音樂節了。
語法分析
答案使用了多種句子結構,包括複雜句和複合句,這有助於提供詳細的解釋並保持連貫性。例如,像「Unfortunately, the reality didn’t live up to my expectations at all」和「We had all bought our tickets together as soon as they went on sale, and we were really excited about spending the whole day at the event」這樣的句子展示了良好的連接詞和從句的使用。答案還展示了準確使用過去時態來描述事件,以及使用現在完成時來描述經驗,例如「I had been looking forward to it for weeks」和「I haven’t been to a big music event since before the pandemic」。像「First of all,」「On top of that,」和「To make matters worse」這樣的標示性語言有助於清晰組織答案。還有效地使用了關係子句和條件句,為語法增添了多樣性和深度。
高分詞匯
  • vibrant outdoor concert
    充滿活力的戶外音樂會
  • live performances
    現場表演
  • soak up the atmosphere
    沈浸於氛圍中
  • lineup of artists
    藝術家陣容
  • headline bands
    headline bands
  • distorted
    扭曲的
  • overcrowded
    過度擁擠
  • queues
    隊列
  • cold and tasteless
    寒冷且無味
  • didn’t live up to my expectations
    沒有達到我的期望
  • frustrated and exhausted
    沮喪且筋疲力盡
  • memorable day out
    難忘的一天外出