7 分範例

問題: Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?

思路 1

Yes, I often look out the window
是的,我經常看著窗外
考官答案
Yes, I usually look out the window when I'm on a bus or in a car, especially if I'm going somewhere new. Watching the scenery helps me relax and makes the trip feel shorter. Sometimes I even see interesting places that I want to visit later.
是的,我通常在搭公車或坐車時會望向窗外,特別是當我要去新的地方。觀看風景幫助我放鬆,讓旅程感覺較短。有時我甚至會看到有趣的地方,想以後去參觀。
Yes, I often look out the window at the scenery when I'm travelling by bus or car, especially if it's a new place for me. It really helps me relax and pass the time, and sometimes I spot interesting things or places that I'd like to check out in the future. Plus, it gives my eyes a break from my phone.
是的,我經常在坐公車或開車時望向窗外的風景,特別是當我到一個新的地方。這真的幫助我放鬆和打發時間,有時我還會看到一些有趣的事物或地方,想以後去看看。而且,這也讓我的眼睛從手機中得到休息。
語法分析
1. 使用現在簡單式和現在進行式:答案使用現在簡單式("I often look out")來描述一個經常性的習慣,並使用現在進行式("I'm travelling")來設定情境,顯示對時態的良好掌握。 2. 使用條件句:"especially if it's a new place for me" 使用第一類條件句結構來增加細節和情境,使答案更具體且自然。
高分詞匯
  • new place
    新地方
  • relax and pass the time
    放鬆並打發時間
  • spot interesting things
    發現有趣的事物
  • check out
    查看
  • gives my eyes a break
    讓我的眼睛休息一下

思路 2

Not always
不總是
考官答案
Not always. Sometimes I'm busy on my phone or reading a book, so I don't pay much attention to the view. Also, if I'm tired, I might just close my eyes and rest instead of looking outside.
不一定。有時候我忙著玩手機或看書,所以不太注意風景。另外,如果我累了,可能會只閉上眼睛休息,而不是看外面。
Actually, not always. Sometimes I'm too busy scrolling through my phone or reading a book, so I don't really pay attention to the scenery. And if it's dark or raining outside, there's not much to see, so I usually just rest or listen to music instead.
其實不一定。有時候我太忙於滑手機或看書,所以並沒有真正注意到風景。而且如果外面天色昏暗或下雨,沒什麼好看的,所以我通常會休息或聽音樂。
語法分析
1. 使用現在進行式:「I'm too busy scrolling through my phone or reading a book」展示了使用現在進行式來描述正在進行的動作或習慣的能力。 2. 使用條件句結構:「if it's dark or raining outside, there's not much to see」展示了使用第一類條件句來談論可能的情況及其結果。
高分詞匯
  • scrolling through my phone
    滑動我的手機螢幕
  • reading a book
    閱讀一本書
  • pay attention to the scenery
    注意風景
  • rest
    休息
  • listen to music instead
    聽音樂代替