7 分範例

問題: What were your favourite activities when you were a child?

思路 1

Playing Outside
戶外遊玩
考官答案
When I was a child, I loved playing outside with my friends. We played games like hide and seek and tag. It was really fun and helped me make a lot of friends.
當我還是個孩子的時候,我喜歡和朋友們在外面玩。我們玩像是hide and seek和tag這樣的遊戲。那真的很有趣,也幫助我交了很多朋友。
As a child, my favorite activity was definitely playing outside with my friends. We used to play games like hide and seek or tag, and sometimes we’d ride our bikes around the neighborhood. It was a great way to stay active and make new friends.
小時候,我最喜歡的活動絕對是和朋友們一起在外面玩。我們經常玩捉迷藏或追逐遊戲,有時候還會騎自行車繞著社區轉。這是保持活力並結交新朋友的好方法。
語法分析
1. 過去式:答案使用簡單過去式("was"、"used to play"、"we’d ride")來描述過去的習慣和活動,這對於講述童年回憶非常合適。 2. "Used to" 和 "would":"used to play" 和縮寫形式 "we’d ride"(我們會騎)顯示了對表達過去重複動作或習慣的良好掌握。
高分詞匯
  • playing outside with my friends
    和我的朋友們在外面玩
  • hide and seek
    捉迷藏
  • tag
    標籤
  • ride our bikes around the neighborhood
    騎著我們的自行車在社區周圍兜風
  • stay active
    保持活躍
  • make new friends
    結交新朋友

思路 2

Drawing and Painting
繪畫與素描
考官答案
I liked drawing and painting when I was young. I spent a lot of time coloring and making crafts. My parents still keep some of my old drawings at home.
我年輕的時候喜歡畫畫與上色。我花了很多時間著色和做手工藝。我的父母家裡仍然保存著我以前的一些畫作。
I really enjoyed drawing and painting as a child. I would spend hours coloring and making crafts, and it was a great way for me to express my creativity. My parents actually still have some of my childhood artwork at home.
我小時候非常喜歡畫畫和繪畫。我會花幾個小時著色和做手工藝,這對我來說是一種表達創造力的很好方式。我的父母其實現在家裡還保存著我童年的一些藝術作品。
語法分析
1. 過去式:答案使用了過去簡單式("enjoyed," "would spend," "was")來描述過去的習慣和經歷,這對於談論童年活動是恰當的。 2. 表示過去習慣的情態動詞:"would spend hours" 使用 "would" 來談論過去重複發生的動作,這是一種自然且進階的描述過去例行公事的方式。
高分詞匯
  • drawing and painting
    素描與繪畫
  • making crafts
    製作手工藝品
  • express my creativity
    表達我的創造力
  • childhood artwork
    童年藝術作品

思路 3

Watching Cartoons
觀看卡通
考官答案
Watching cartoons was my favorite thing to do after school. I always looked forward to my favorite shows and still remember some of the songs from them.
放學後看卡通是我最喜歡做的事情。我總是期待我最喜愛的節目,並且仍然記得其中一些歌曲。
I used to love watching cartoons, especially on weekends. It was such a fun way to relax after school, and I still remember some of the theme songs from my favorite shows.
我過去很喜歡看卡通,尤其是在週末。這是在課後放鬆的一種非常有趣的方式,我仍然記得我最喜歡的節目中的一些主題曲。
語法分析
1. 過去的習慣:「used to love」這個片語是談論過去的習慣或活動的好方法,這些習慣或活動你不一定現在還會做。 2. 過去簡單式:「It was such a fun way to relax」和「I still remember」都適當地使用了過去簡單式來描述過去的經歷和持續的回憶。
高分詞匯
  • used to love
    曾經愛過
  • fun way to relax
    輕鬆愉快的方法
  • theme songs
    主題曲

思路 4

Playing Video Games
玩電子遊戲
考官答案
I enjoyed playing video games with my brother when I was little. We liked to see who could get the highest score. It was really exciting.
我小時候喜歡和我哥哥一起玩電子遊戲。我們喜歡看看誰能得到最高分數。這真的很刺激。
Playing video games was one of my favorite childhood activities. I used to play with my siblings or friends, and we’d always compete to see who could get the highest score. I think it really helped me develop quick thinking and problem-solving skills.
玩電子遊戲是我童年最喜愛的活動之一。我常常和兄弟姊妹或朋友一起玩,我們總是比賽看誰能取得最高分。我覺得這真的幫助我培養了快速反應和解決問題的能力。
語法分析
1. 過去式:答案使用了過去簡單式("was," "used to play," "we’d always compete")來描述過去的習慣和活動,這對於談論童年時期是適當的。 2. 情態動詞:「could」被正確用來談論過去的能力("who could get the highest score")。 3. 不定詞作目的:「to see who could get the highest score」使用不定詞來說明競賽的目的。
高分詞匯
  • compete to see who could get the highest score
    競爭看誰能取得最高分數
  • develop quick thinking
    培養快速思考能力
  • problem-solving skills
    解決問題的能力