7 分範例
話題: Describe a movie you watched recently that you felt disappointed about
範例
Topic:A disappointing movie experience When it was I’d like to talk about a movie I watched just a few weeks ago called “The Last Voyage.” I saw it at a local cinema with a group of friends on a Saturday night. We were all really excited because it had just been released and there was a lot of hype around it, especially on social media. The trailers made it look like a thrilling adventure film with stunning visuals and a gripping storyline. Why you decided to watch it The main reason I decided to watch this movie was because of the cast and the director. The lead actor is one of my favorites, and the director is known for making some really impressive films in the past. Also, my friends were eager to see it, so we thought it would be a great way to spend the evening together. We even bought our tickets in advance because we expected the cinema to be packed. Why you didn't like it Unfortunately, the movie turned out to be a huge letdown. First of all, the plot was extremely predictable and lacked any real twists or surprises. The characters were not well-developed, and I found it hard to connect with any of them. The dialogue was quite cliché, and some of the scenes felt unnecessarily long, which made the movie drag on. Even the special effects, which were supposed to be a highlight, looked artificial and didn’t live up to the high standards set by the trailer. I kept waiting for something exciting to happen, but it never really did. And explain why you felt disappointed about it I felt disappointed mainly because my expectations were so high. I had been looking forward to this movie for weeks, and I genuinely believed it would be a memorable experience. Instead, I left the cinema feeling bored and a bit frustrated. It was especially disappointing because I had convinced my friends to watch it with me, and they didn’t enjoy it either. I think what made it worse was that the movie had so much potential, but it just didn’t deliver in terms of story, acting, or visuals. In the end, it was a waste of both time and money, and I doubt I’ll watch another film by that director anytime soon.
主題：一次令人失望的電影體驗 時間 我想談談幾週前看過的一部電影《The Last Voyage》。那是星期六晚上，我和一群朋友在當地的電影院一起觀看。我們都非常興奮，因為這部電影剛剛上映，尤其在社交媒體上引起了很大的關注。預告片看起來像是一部刺激的冒險電影，有著令人驚嘆的視覺效果和引人入勝的故事情節。 為什麼決定觀看 我決定看這部電影的主要原因是因為演員陣容和導演。主演是我喜歡的演員之一，導演過去也製作過一些非常令人印象深刻的電影。此外，我的朋友們也很想看這部電影，所以我們覺得一起觀看會是一個很好的聚會方式。我們甚至提前買了票，因為預期電影院會非常擁擠。 為什麼不喜歡 不幸的是，這部電影成為了極大的失望。首先，劇情非常可預測，缺乏真實的轉折和驚喜。角色刻畫不夠深入，我很難與任何一個角色產生共鳴。對白也相當陳腔濫調，有些場景過於冗長，讓整部電影顯得拖沓。即使是本應成為亮點的特效，看起來也很不自然，無法達到預告片設定的高標準。我一直在等待一些精彩的事情發生，但它從未真正出現。 解釋為何感到失望 我感到失望主要是因為我對這部電影的期望太高了。我期待這部電影已經好幾週了，真心以為會是一個難忘的體驗。相反，我走出電影院時感到無聊和有點沮喪。尤其令人失望的是，我還說服朋友們一起來看，他們同樣不喜歡。我覺得更糟的是這部電影本有很大潛力，但在故事、演技和視覺效果上都沒有達到預期。最終，這是時間和金錢的浪費，我懷疑自己近期還會不會看這位導演的其他電影。
語法分析
- **多樣的句型結構：** 答案展示了簡單句、並列句和複雜句的良好組合。例如：“We were all really excited because it had just been released and there was a lot of hype around it, especially on social media.” 這顯示了連接想法的能力。 - **時態的適當使用：** 過去簡單時態持續用於描述經歷（“I watched,” “I saw,” “We bought”），而現在簡單時態用於表達一般觀點（“the director is known for…”）。這有助於清楚區分過去事件和一般事實。 - **連貫手段與連接詞：** 答案使用多種連接詞和短語來組織思路並增加連貫性，如 “First of all,” “Unfortunately,” “Even,” “Instead,” “In the end,” 和 “mainly because.” - **關係子句：** 類似 “The lead actor is one of my favorites, and the director is known for making some really impressive films in the past” 的句子展示了使用關係子句來增加細節。 - **被動語態：** 適當使用，例如 “it had just been released,” “the cinema to be packed,” “the movie had so much potential, but it just didn’t deliver.” - **條件句與情態結構：** “I doubt I’ll watch another film by that director anytime soon,” 展示了使用情態動詞來表達未來意圖。
高分詞匯
  • - **Descriptive Adjectives:** “thrilling adventure film,” “stunning visuals,” “gripping storyline,” “predictable,” “well-developed,” “cliché,” “artificial,” “memorable experience,” “packed cinema.”
    - **描述性形容詞：** “thrilling adventure film,” “stunning visuals,” “gripping storyline,” “predictable,” “well-developed,” “cliché,” “artificial,” “memorable experience,” “packed cinema.”
  • - **Collocations and Phrases:** “a huge letdown,” “lacked any real twists or surprises,” “connect with,” “drag on,” “live up to,” “set by the trailer,” “looking forward to,” “waste of both time and money,” “didn’t deliver.”
    - **搭配詞與片語：** “a huge letdown,” “lacked any real twists or surprises,” “connect with,” “drag on,” “live up to,” “set by the trailer,” “looking forward to,” “waste of both time and money,” “didn’t deliver.”
  • - **Expressing Feelings:** “I felt disappointed,” “I left the cinema feeling bored and a bit frustrated,” “so much potential,” “a waste of both time and money.”
    - **表達感受：** “I felt disappointed,” “I left the cinema feeling bored and a bit frustrated,” “so much potential,” “a waste of both time and money.”
  • - **Idiomatic Language:** “hype around it,” “letdown,” “didn’t live up to the high standards,” “kept waiting for something exciting to happen.”
    - **慣用語言:** “hype around it,” “letdown,” “didn’t live up to the high standards,” “kept waiting for something exciting to happen.”
  • - **Emphasis and Intensifiers:** “really excited,” “extremely predictable,” “so high,” “so much potential,” “just didn’t deliver.”
    - **強調與加強語氣詞：** “really excited,” “extremely predictable,” “so high,” “so much potential,” “just didn’t deliver.”
  • These features together help the answer reach a Band 7.0 level by demonstrating flexibility, accuracy, and a good range of both grammar and vocabulary.
    這些特點共同幫助答案達到7.0分的水準，展現了靈活性、準確性以及良好的語法和詞彙範圍。
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