7 分範例
話題: Describe an occasion when you were not allowed to use your mobile phone
範例
A time I couldn’t use my mobile phone at a concert When it was I’d like to talk about an experience I had about a year ago when I attended a classical music concert in my city. It was a special event because it featured a world-famous orchestra, and I had been looking forward to it for weeks. Where it was The concert took place at the city’s main concert hall, which is a beautiful, historic building known for its excellent acoustics. The hall was packed with music lovers, and the atmosphere was quite formal and respectful. Why you were not allowed to use your mobile phone Before the performance began, the staff made an announcement reminding everyone to turn off their mobile phones or switch them to silent mode. They also specifically asked the audience not to use their phones during the concert, not even for taking photos or videos. The main reason for this rule was to avoid disturbing the musicians and other audience members. Even the smallest noise or the light from a phone screen could ruin the experience for others and distract the performers, who need to concentrate fully on their music. How you felt about it At first, I felt a bit uneasy because I’m so used to having my phone with me all the time, and I often take photos or record short videos at events to share with my friends. However, as the concert went on, I actually started to appreciate the rule. Without my phone, I was able to focus completely on the music and enjoy the performance without any distractions. It was a refreshing change, and I felt much more present in the moment. In fact, I think the experience was more memorable because I wasn’t constantly thinking about capturing it on my phone. Overall, although it was a little inconvenient at first, I ended up feeling grateful for the opportunity to disconnect and fully immerse myself in the concert. It made me realize that sometimes, putting our phones away can help us enjoy life’s special moments even more.
我在音樂會上不能使用手機的一次經歷 發生時間 我想談談大約一年前,我在自己城市參加一場古典音樂會的經歷。這是一場特別的活動,因為演出的是一支世界知名的管弦樂團,我期待了好幾個星期。 地點 音樂會在城市的主要音樂廳舉行,這是一座美麗且具有歷史意義的建築,以其優秀的音響效果聞名。音樂廳裡擠滿了熱愛音樂的人,氣氛相當正式且莊重。 為什麼不允許使用手機 表演開始前,工作人員宣布提醒大家關閉手機或將其調至靜音模式。他們還特別要求觀眾在音樂會期間不要使用手機,甚至不能拍照或錄影。這條規定的主要原因是為了避免干擾音樂家和其他觀眾。即使是最輕微的噪音或手機螢幕的光也可能破壞他人的體驗,並分散演奏者的注意力,而他們需要全神貫注於音樂表演。 你的感受 一開始我感到有些不自在,因為我習慣隨時帶著手機,並且經常在活動中拍照或錄製短片與朋友分享。然而,隨著音樂會的進行,我開始欣賞這項規定。沒有手機,我能完全專注於音樂,享受不受干擾的表演。這是一種耳目一新的改變,我感覺更能活在當下。事實上,我認為這次經歷更令人難忘,因為我沒有一直想着用手機捕捉瞬間。總的來說,雖然一開始有些不便,但我最終感謝這次能讓我斷開聯繫、全心投入音樂會的機會。這讓我意識到,有時候把手機放下能幫助我們更好地享受生活中的美好時刻。
語法分析
- **複雜句型與從屬結構:** 答案展示了對複雜句型的良好掌握,使用從屬子句來增加細節和說明。例如:「Before the performance began, the staff made an announcement reminding everyone to turn off their mobile phones or switch them to silent mode。」 - **時態的準確使用:** 講者持續使用過去簡單式和過去完成式來敘述事件(「I had been looking forward to it for weeks」、「I attended a classical music concert」),並用現在式表達一般陳述(「I’m so used to having my phone with me all the time」)。 - **銜接詞語的運用:** 答案使用如「however」、「as the concert went on」、「in fact」、「overall」和「although」等連接詞和短語,使想法間的銜接自然且合乎邏輯。 - **被動語態:** 適當使用被動語態,例如「the staff made an announcement reminding everyone to turn off their mobile phones」。 - **關係子句:** 使用關係子句增加細節,例如「which is a beautiful, historic building known for its excellent acoustics」。 - **情態動詞:** 使用情態動詞表達必要性和可能性,例如「could ruin the experience」、「can help us enjoy life’s special moments」。
高分詞匯
  • - **concert hall**
    - **音樂廳**
  • - **acoustics**
    - **聲學**
  • - **packed with music lovers**
    - **擠滿了音樂愛好者**
  • - **formal and respectful atmosphere**
    - **正式且尊重的氛圍**
  • - **performance**
    - **performance**
  • - **reminding everyone**
    - **提醒大家**
  • - **switch to silent mode**
    - **切換至靜音模式**
  • - **disturbing the musicians**
    - **打擾音樂家**
  • - **audience members**
    - **觀眾成員**
  • - **ruin the experience**
    - **破壞體驗**
  • - **distract the performers**
    - **分散表演者的注意力**
  • - **concentrate fully**
    - **全神貫注**
  • - **uneasy**
    - **不安**
  • - **appreciate the rule**
    - **欣賞這條規則**
  • - **focus completely**
    - **完全專注**
  • - **without any distractions**
    - **沒有任何干擾**
  • - **refreshing change**
    - **令人耳目一新的變化**
  • - **present in the moment**
    - **活在當下**
  • - **memorable**
    - **難忘的**
  • - **inconvenient**
    - **不方便**
  • - **grateful for the opportunity**
    - **感謝這次機會**
  • - **disconnect**
    - **disconnect**
  • - **immerse myself**
    - **沉浸自己**
  • - **life’s special moments**
    - **人生的特別時刻**
  • These vocabulary items and grammatical structures help the answer sound fluent, natural, and well-organized, which are key features of a Band 7.0 response.
    這些詞彙項目和語法結構有助於答案聽起來流利、自然且組織良好,這些都是7.0分回答的關鍵特點。