7 分範例
話題: Describe a foreign country you would like to stay or work for a short period of time
範例
Topic:Australia – A Dream Destination for Short-Term Work and Travel Which country it is The foreign country I would like to stay or work in for a short period of time is Australia. It has always fascinated me because of its unique wildlife, stunning landscapes, and vibrant multicultural cities. Australia is located in the southern hemisphere and is known for its laid-back lifestyle and friendly people. Where you got to know this country I first got to know about Australia through documentaries and travel shows on television when I was a child. Later, I learned more about it from friends who went there on working holiday visas and shared their amazing experiences. In addition, I have read a lot about Australia in magazines and online travel blogs, which made me even more interested in visiting. What you will do there If I had the opportunity to go to Australia, I would love to take part in a working holiday program. I would probably look for a temporary job in the hospitality industry, such as working in a café or a hotel, because it would give me a chance to interact with locals and improve my English. Besides working, I would definitely spend my free time exploring famous places like the Great Barrier Reef, Sydney Opera House, and the Outback. I would also like to try surfing at Bondi Beach and see kangaroos and koalas in their natural habitats. Why you will stay or work there just for a short period of time The main reason I would only stay or work there for a short period of time is that I have commitments in my home country, such as my studies and family responsibilities. I think spending a few months in Australia would be enough to experience the culture, make new friends, and gain some work experience without being away from home for too long. Also, a short stay would allow me to travel and learn without feeling homesick or overwhelmed by being in a completely different environment for an extended period. Overall, I believe that living and working in Australia, even for a short time, would be an unforgettable adventure. It would broaden my horizons, help me develop new skills, and give me memories that I would cherish for the rest of my life.
主題：澳大利亞－夢想中的短期打工旅遊目的地 是哪個國家 我想短期停留或工作的外國是澳大利亞。它一直讓我著迷，因為那裡擁有獨特的野生動物、壯麗的自然景觀和充滿活力的多元文化城市。澳大利亞位於南半球，以其悠閒的生活方式和友善的人們聞名。 你是從哪裡認識這個國家的 我第一次認識澳大利亞是在孩提時期透過電視上的紀錄片和旅遊節目。後來，我透過去那裡持工作假期簽證的朋友們，聽他們分享令人驚奇的經驗進一步了解。此外，我也閱讀了許多雜誌和線上旅遊部落格的相關介紹，這讓我對造訪澳大利亞更感興趣。 你會在那裡做什麼 如果有機會前往澳大利亞，我很想參加工作假期計畫。我可能會尋找臨時的餐飲業工作，例如在咖啡館或飯店工作，因為這能讓我有機會與當地人互動並提升我的英語能力。除了工作，我一定會利用空閒時間探索著名景點，如大堡礁、悉尼歌劇院和內陸荒野。我也想試著在邦迪海灘學衝浪，並觀察袋鼠和無尾熊在自然棲息地的生活。 為什麼你會只短期停留或工作 我只會短期停留或工作的主要原因是我在自己的國家有承擔，比如學業和家庭責任。我認為在澳大利亞待幾個月足以體驗當地文化、結交新朋友並獲取工作經驗，而不需離家太久。此外，短期停留也讓我能夠旅遊和學習，同時不會感到思鄉或因長時間處於截然不同的環境而不適應。 總的來說，我相信即使只在澳大利亞生活和工作短暫一段時間，也會是一次難忘的冒險。這會拓展我的視野，幫助我發展新技能，並帶給我一生難忘的回憶。
語法分析
- **多樣的句型結構：** 答案展示了簡單句、並列句和複雜句的良好組合。例如，“If I had the opportunity to go to Australia, I would love to take part in a working holiday program,” 使用了條件句結構，而 “Australia is located in the southern hemisphere and is known for its laid-back lifestyle and friendly people,” 則用 “and” 連接了兩個資訊點。 - **適當的時態使用：** 答案中使用了一般現在時表達普遍事實（“Australia is located…”），過去簡單時描述過去經驗（“I first got to know about Australia…”），以及條件句形式（“If I had the opportunity…”）。這顯示了對動詞時態的掌握。 - **銜接詞的運用：** 使用了 “because,” “besides,” “such as,” “in addition,” “also,” 及 “overall” 等連接詞和片語，使觀點連貫且邏輯清晰。 - **被動語態：** 被動語態使用得當，例如 “Australia is located in the southern hemisphere and is known for its laid-back lifestyle…” - **關係子句：** 關係子句的使用增加了細節說明，例如 “friends who went there on working holiday visas,” 和 “magazines and online travel blogs, which made me even more interested in visiting.” - **清晰的段落結構和主題句：** 每段皆以明確的主題句開頭，有助於條理分明地組織答案內容。
高分詞匯
  • - **Descriptive Adjectives:** unique wildlife, stunning landscapes, vibrant multicultural cities, laid-back lifestyle, friendly people, unforgettable adventure
    - **描述性形容詞：**獨特的野生動物、驚人的風景、多元文化的充滿活力城市、悠閒的生活方式、友善的人們、難忘的冒險
  • - **Collocations:** working holiday program, temporary job, hospitality industry, interact with locals, improve my English, famous places, natural habitats, family responsibilities, broaden my horizons, gain some work experience, cherish for the rest of my life
    - **搭配詞彙：** working holiday program，temporary job，hospitality industry，interact with locals，improve my English，famous places，natural habitats，family responsibilities，broaden my horizons，gain some work experience，cherish for the rest of my life
  • - **Specific Nouns:** documentaries, travel shows, working holiday visas, hospitality industry, café, hotel, Great Barrier Reef, Sydney Opera House, Outback, Bondi Beach, kangaroos, koalas
    - **具體名詞：**紀錄片、旅遊節目、打工度假簽證、款待業、咖啡館、飯店、大堡礁、雪梨歌劇院、澳洲內陸、邦迪海灘、袋鼠、無尾熊
  • - **Action Verbs:** fascinated, learned, shared, read, exploring, try, see, experience, make new friends, develop new skills
    - **動作動詞：** fascinated, learned, shared, read, exploring, try, see, experience, make new friends, develop new skills
  • - **Idiomatic Expressions:** broaden my horizons, cherish for the rest of my life, homesick, overwhelmed, unforgettable adventure
    - **慣用語句：** 拓展我的視野、珍惜一輩子、思鄉、不堪負荷、難忘的冒險
  • These grammar and vocabulary features contribute to the answer’s fluency, coherence, and lexical resource, which are key for achieving a Band 7.0 or higher in IELTS Speaking Part 2.
    這些語法和詞彙特點有助於答案的流暢性、連貫性和詞彙資源，這些是達到雅思口語第二部分7.0分或更高分數的關鍵。