7 分範例

問題: When was the last time you had a few days off?

思路 1

Recently
最近
考官答案
I had a few days off last weekend. I just stayed at home to relax, watched some movies, and caught up on sleep. It was really nice to have some time for myself.
我上週末休息了幾天。我只是待在家裡放鬆,看了幾部電影,補了點覺。能有些自己的時間真的很不錯。
The last time I had a few days off was actually last weekend. I decided to take a short break and just relax at home. I spent most of the time catching up on sleep and watching movies, which was a great way to recharge after a busy week.
我上次休假幾天其實是在上個週末。我決定短暫休息一下,然後就在家放鬆。我大部分時間都用來補眠和看電影,這是在忙碌一週後充電的好方法。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單式:答案使用過去簡單式("had"、"decided"、"spent")來描述上個假期發生的行動,這對於敘述過去的經歷是適當的。 2. 關係子句:短語 "which was a great way to recharge after a busy week" 使用關係子句來補充說明活動的額外資訊,使句子更加複雜且具描述性。
高分詞匯
  • short break
    短暫休息
  • relax at home
    在家放鬆
  • catching up on sleep
    補充睡眠
  • watching movies
    看電影
  • recharge after a busy week
    忙碌一週後充電

思路 2

Not Recently
最近沒有
考官答案
It’s been a long time since I had a few days off because I’ve been really busy with my studies. The last time I had a break was during the winter vacation, so I’m really looking forward to my next holiday.
我已經很久沒有幾天假期了,因為我一直忙於學業。上一次休息是在寒假期間,所以我非常期待下一次假期。
Honestly, it’s been quite a while since I had a few days off, as I’ve been swamped with work lately. I think the last real break I had was during the winter vacation, and I can’t wait for the next holiday to finally relax and unwind.
說實話,我已經很久沒有放幾天假了,因為最近工作非常繁忙。我想我上一次真正的休息是在寒假期間,我迫不及待想要迎來下一個假期,好好放鬆和休息。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式:「it’s been quite a while since I had a few days off」使用現在完成式來表示一個從過去開始並持續到現在的動作。 2. 連接詞的使用:「as I’ve been swamped with work lately」使用「as」來給出理由,展示了流暢連接想法的能力。 3. 未來式:「I can’t wait for the next holiday」使用現在簡單式來表達未來的意圖或願望。
高分詞匯
  • swamped with work
    工作繁重
  • winter vacation
    寒假
  • relax and unwind
    放鬆身心